Correction/phrase

Correction/phrase
Message de azifat posté le 08-04-2017 à 16:14:55 (S | E | F)
Hello everyone,
I need your help in order to check if the following sentence is correct or not.
"Following our last conversation, I am sending you this email to inquire If you have filled all of the internship positions or not."
Thank you in advance.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-04-2017 16:19

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Réponse : Correction/phrase de chaima, postée le 08-04-2017 à 16:29:41 (S | E)
hello,
"Further to our last conversation, I send you this email asking about the internship positions, if they are filled or not yet ."
you could add at the end of your email
looking forward to hear from you
yours sincerly

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Réponse : Correction/phrase de traviskidd, postée le 08-04-2017 à 18:58:03 (S | E)
Hello, I think the sentence should start with "Pursuant to...". See you.

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Réponse : Correction/phrase de azifat, postée le 08-04-2017 à 22:43:26 (S | E)
Thanks everyone, I really appreciate your effort !

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Réponse : Correction/phrase de dsmith, postée le 09-04-2017 à 06:18:08 (S | E)
Hello Azifat,
I like your version. Only one small problem that I saw. If should not be capitalized as it is not the beginning of a sentence.
Good luck with the internship!
Douglas

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