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Message de caseyy posté le 11-11-2016 à 22:22:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous,
Je suis actuellement étudiant en histoire et je prépare en parallèle les concours aux écoles de journalisme. J'ai un niveau d'oral en anglais qui se défend plutôt bien, malheureusement comme vous allez pouvoir le constater ma syntaxe voire ma grammaire est loin d'être au niveau.
J'ai écrit plusieurs rédactions afin de pouvoir m'entraîner mais je n'ai personne autour de moi pouvant me corriger, de ce fait si quelqu'un avait la gentillesse et le temps pour, ce serait génial.
Merci par avance pour votre aide.
1) Climate changing
Now, It is not possible to run out the question of climate changing. A great number of reports processing of consequences of the human activity, proved the link between human activity and the climate changing.
There are several important activities which have serious responsabilities on the greenhouse effect. The using of oil by individual people or companies for the transport is a serious problem. Indeed, exhaust fumes participate in the greenhouse effect, rejecting a polluting gas : the carbon monoxide.
The spillage caused by boats accidents are a major problem for the life of animals living near costs.
Governement have already talken decisions concerning the poach of threatened species. Nevertheless some hunters keep poaching in some countries, increasing the number of threatened species in the world.
The environmental policy has now an important place in decisions took by governeent thnak actions of hard-core environmentalist. Indeed on 2015, French governement organised an important meeting called COP21 where almost all governements where present to discuss and talke decisions about greenhouse effect.
Governement are not the only one to react to the problem. Indeed, the individual habits are important though. For example, it is insteresting to notice the reduction of the use of car despite of the low price of the oil nowadays.
2) A stonning America after Donal Trump election
On the night between tuesday and wednesday, the republican Donal Trump is elected as 45th president of America. The whole world is shocked that the funny but mainly crazy billionaire is now the new president of America. All newspapers are trying to explain how it happened. Demontrators against Donal Trump and refusing the election of this last are get down in the street.
As new president, Donal Trump recalled that the democracy spoke and he engaged himself to make America as strong as before.
Concerning his international policy, he metthe French president François Hollande and declared how it is important that France and America continue having deals and beging very close.
The future is uncertain in America and even in the world, but one thing is sure: journalists are not going bored.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-11-2016 07:52
Message de caseyy posté le 11-11-2016 à 22:22:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous,
Je suis actuellement étudiant en histoire et je prépare en parallèle les concours aux écoles de journalisme. J'ai un niveau d'oral en anglais qui se défend plutôt bien, malheureusement comme vous allez pouvoir le constater ma syntaxe voire ma grammaire est loin d'être au niveau.
J'ai écrit plusieurs rédactions afin de pouvoir m'entraîner mais je n'ai personne autour de moi pouvant me corriger, de ce fait si quelqu'un avait la gentillesse et le temps pour, ce serait génial.
Merci par avance pour votre aide.
1) Climate changing
Now, It is not possible to run out the question of climate changing. A great number of reports processing of consequences of the human activity, proved the link between human activity and the climate changing.
There are several important activities which have serious responsabilities on the greenhouse effect. The using of oil by individual people or companies for the transport is a serious problem. Indeed, exhaust fumes participate in the greenhouse effect, rejecting a polluting gas : the carbon monoxide.
The spillage caused by boats accidents are a major problem for the life of animals living near costs.
Governement have already talken decisions concerning the poach of threatened species. Nevertheless some hunters keep poaching in some countries, increasing the number of threatened species in the world.
The environmental policy has now an important place in decisions took by governeent thnak actions of hard-core environmentalist. Indeed on 2015, French governement organised an important meeting called COP21 where almost all governements where present to discuss and talke decisions about greenhouse effect.
Governement are not the only one to react to the problem. Indeed, the individual habits are important though. For example, it is insteresting to notice the reduction of the use of car despite of the low price of the oil nowadays.
2) A stonning America after Donal Trump election
On the night between tuesday and wednesday, the republican Donal Trump is elected as 45th president of America. The whole world is shocked that the funny but mainly crazy billionaire is now the new president of America. All newspapers are trying to explain how it happened. Demontrators against Donal Trump and refusing the election of this last are get down in the street.
As new president, Donal Trump recalled that the democracy spoke and he engaged himself to make America as strong as before.
Concerning his international policy, he metthe French president François Hollande and declared how it is important that France and America continue having deals and beging very close.
The future is uncertain in America and even in the world, but one thing is sure: journalists are not going bored.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-11-2016 07:52
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