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Message de margot posté le 11-05-2016 à 20:33:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je souhaite candidater à un master de management de projet et il m'est demandé de rédiger une lettre de motivation en anglais. Pourriez-vous me dire ce que vous en pensez et me dire s'il y a des choses à corriger.
Merci beaucoup par avance à ceux qui prendront le temps de m'aider !
Already graduated from two years technical degree of wine and spirits trade and a licence degree in wine trade and Wine Tourism, I want to apply for the master 1 of project management delivered in your university.
During my studies I specialised myself in the alcohol trade, I totally discovered this sector and I have been instantly passionate by the products and the values of conviviality and sharing associated with it. The different internships and work-study contract I have made give me diversify competence such as: wine making, sales and promotion of French wine growing area.
After my licence degree I had the chance to participate to the creation of a wine trade company, selling French AOC wines to the American market, as a co-founder. It has been an enriching experience for me during which I was able to take part to every steps of creation: from register the company to the elaboration of the range (organisation of an event, tasting of the wines creation of labels in conformity with the American legislation.)
Being aware that mastering English is essential nowadays, I decided to go to Ireland to perfect my English and to have an international work experience. After 6 months spend there I came back in France more mature and knowing better what I would like to do in my professional life. Still really passionate with the alcohol sector I want to work in a global company such as Diageo (Guinness, Smirnoff, Johnnie Walker…) or Pernod Ricard, and to participate to their graduated recruitment programme.
Comparing your scholar program to the one of other schools, I am sure that your courses can give me the essential knowledge and experience to be credible and effective in a high level international work environment.
Thanking you in advance for your consideration to my application, and I hope you will find my profil suitable for your formation.
Yours Faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2016 22:01
Message de margot posté le 11-05-2016 à 20:33:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je souhaite candidater à un master de management de projet et il m'est demandé de rédiger une lettre de motivation en anglais. Pourriez-vous me dire ce que vous en pensez et me dire s'il y a des choses à corriger.
Merci beaucoup par avance à ceux qui prendront le temps de m'aider !
Already graduated from two years technical degree of wine and spirits trade and a licence degree in wine trade and Wine Tourism, I want to apply for the master 1 of project management delivered in your university.
During my studies I specialised myself in the alcohol trade, I totally discovered this sector and I have been instantly passionate by the products and the values of conviviality and sharing associated with it. The different internships and work-study contract I have made give me diversify competence such as: wine making, sales and promotion of French wine growing area.
After my licence degree I had the chance to participate to the creation of a wine trade company, selling French AOC wines to the American market, as a co-founder. It has been an enriching experience for me during which I was able to take part to every steps of creation: from register the company to the elaboration of the range (organisation of an event, tasting of the wines creation of labels in conformity with the American legislation.)
Being aware that mastering English is essential nowadays, I decided to go to Ireland to perfect my English and to have an international work experience. After 6 months spend there I came back in France more mature and knowing better what I would like to do in my professional life. Still really passionate with the alcohol sector I want to work in a global company such as Diageo (Guinness, Smirnoff, Johnnie Walker…) or Pernod Ricard, and to participate to their graduated recruitment programme.
Comparing your scholar program to the one of other schools, I am sure that your courses can give me the essential knowledge and experience to be credible and effective in a high level international work environment.
Thanking you in advance for your consideration to my application, and I hope you will find my profil suitable for your formation.
Yours Faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2016 22:01
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