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    Single child/ sibling
    Message from theavy posted on 26-04-2016 at 14:41:03 (D | E | F)
    Hello everybody,
    I’m Theavy. I would like you correct my mistake and the meaning.
    Thank you before you correct.

    In our society, family is a big concept and it is a very important part in most people’s everyday lives. Some are born into multi-sibling families and other people are fortunate enough to be born as an only child. There are three different point between single child and child with sibling.
    The first point is living standard. Parent who has a single child is better than parent who has many child and they spent less. So, they can give everything to their child. Life as a single child parent have much time to complete their job since they don’t need too much time to take care their children. One more, they have possibility give their child study high. In contrast, in a large family is not well because they need to pay a lots food, clothing and education. Besides, they have a little time for working since they need to take care. For education, their children.
    The second point is personality. Children who have brothers and sister have better behavior than the only child. Sibling relation can teach children the differences between the experience and view of life, not just only from parents, but it is also from their brothers and sisters. Life with sibling have kindness. They can learn is how to share with others. They have to think about their parents and sibling before doing every time. On the other hand, the life as a single child in family has all the thing are given. They don’t have to worry about siblings who they have to think about or share with. They can receive what they want, unlike children have brothers and sisters.
    Finally, the warmth between life as a single child and life with siblings are also different. The single child just get taking care from his or her parents. He or she needs a sibling to share about his or her problems. However, life with siblings can get warmth form their parents and sibling also. When they have problems, they always want somebody who can help them, so they can ask both their parents and brother or sister. They may get and make good experiences with their siblings that make them warmness.
    In conclusion, the only one child always just that. I think, the family of single child cannot know about the joy of having brothers or sisters although a child usually gets something he/she needs or wants. The child will not get some experiences from sibling that help to develops him/herself. Also, relation with other siblings, a child only get warmness from their parents.

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    Edited by lucile83 on 28-04-2016 08:05

    Re: Single child/ sibling from gerondif, posted on 27-04-2016 at 17:22:35 (D | E)
    Hello,
    mistakes in blue, correcting in green.

    In our society, family is a big concept and it is a very important part in most people’s everyday lives. Some are born into multi-sibling families and other people are fortunate enough to be born as an only child. There are three different points(three main differences) between single child and child with sibling.
    The first point is living standard. Parent(you need 2 to make a child, so pural) who has(plural) a single child is better than parent who has many child(many + plural) and they spent(simple present) less. So, they can give everything to their child. Life as a single child parent have(life is singular) much time to complete(choose another verb) their job since they don’t need too much time to take care of their children. One more,(moreover) they have the possibility to give their child study high(invert and turn into plural). In contrast, in a large family (this verb is has no subject!)is not well(wrong choice of adjective or adverb) because they need to pay a lots for food, clothing and education. Besides, they have a little ( a little is positive, little is negative and means not enough time)time for working since they need to take care of their children. For education, their children.
    The second point is personality. Children who have brothers and sisters have better behavior than the only child. Sibling relation can teach children the differences between the experience and view of life, not just only from parents, but it is also from their brothers and sisters. Life with sibling have(life is singular) kindness. They can learn is how to share with others. They have to think about their parents and sibling before doing every time.(before doing anything?) On the other hand, the life as a single child in family has all the thing are given (wrong pattern: it is not life that has all the things). They don’t have to worry about siblings who they have to think about or share with. They can receive what they want, unlike children who have brothers and sisters.
    Finally, the warmth between life as a single child and life with siblings are(warmth is singular) also different. The single child just gets taking care from his or her parents. He or she needs a sibling to share about his or her problems. However, life with siblings can get warmth (no, it is not life that gets warmth but the children) form their parents and sibling also. When they have problems, they always want somebody who can help them, so they can ask both their parents and brother or sister. They may get and make good experiences with their siblings that make them warmness(warmth).
    In conclusion, the only one child always just that (where is the verb?). I think, the family of a single child cannot know about the joy of having brothers or sisters although a child usually gets something he/she needs or wants. The child will not get some experiences from siblings that help to develops him/herself. Also, without relations with other siblings, a child only gets warmness from their( a child is not plural) parents.



    Re: Single child/ sibling from theavy, posted on 01-05-2016 at 07:04:37 (D | E)
    Thank you gerondif for your correction. This my new text.

    In our society, family is a big concept and it is a very important part in most people’s everyday lives. Some are born into multi-sibling families and other people are fortunate enough to be born as an only child. There are three main differences points between single child and child with sibling.
    The first point is living standard. Parents who have a single child are better than parents who have many children and they spend less. So, they can give everything to their child. Life as a single child parent has much time to do their job since they don’t need too much time to take care of their children.Moreover, they have the possibility to give their child high studies. In contrast, in a large family living standard is not good because they need to pay a lots for food, clothing and education. Besides, they have little time for working since they need to take care of their children.
    The second point is personality. Children who have brothers and sisters have better behavior than the only child. Sibling relation can teach children the differences between the experience and view of life, not just only from parents, but it is also from their brothers and sisters. Life with sibling has kindness. They can learn is how to share with others. They have to think about their parents and sibling before doing everything. On the other hand, a single child in family has all the thing are given. They don’t have to worry about siblings who they have to think about or share with. They can receive what they want, unlike children who have brothers and sisters.
    Finally, the warmth between life as a single child and life with siblings is also different. The single child just gets care from his or her parents. He or she needs a sibling to share about his or her problems. However, a single child can get warmth from their parents and sibling also. When they have problems, they always want somebody who can help them, so they can ask both their parents and brother or sister. They may get and make good experiences with their siblings that make the warmth.
    In conclusion, the only one child always just like that. I think, the family of a single child cannot know about the joy of having brothers or sisters although a child usually gets something he or she needs or wants. The child will not get some experiences from siblings that help to develops him or her. Also, without relations with other siblings, a child only gets warmness from him or her parents.




    Re: Single child/ sibling from gerondif, posted on 02-05-2016 at 14:29:11 (D | E)
    Hello,
    In our society, family is a big concept and it is a very important part in most people’s everyday lives. Some are born into multi-sibling families and other people are fortunate enough to be born as an only child. There are three main differences points between being a single child and being a child with siblings.

    The first point is living standard. Parents who have a single child are better than parents who have many children and they spend less. So, they can give everything to their child. Life as a single child parent has much Parents with a single child have more time to do their job since they don’t need too so much time to take care of their children. Moreover, they have the possibility to give their child high studies. In contrast, in a large family ,living standards are not good because they need to pay a lots(no s) for food, clothing and education. Besides, they have little time for working to work since they need to take care of their children.

    The second point is personality. Children who have brothers and sisters have better behavior than the only child. Sibling relation can teach children the differences between the experience and view of life, not just only from parents, but it is also from their brothers and sisters. Life with siblings has kindness. They can learn is how to share with others. They have to think about their parents and siblings before doing everything. On the other hand, a single child in a family has all the thing are given. everything he likes. They don’t have to worry about siblings who they have to think about or share with. They can receive what they want like, unlike children who have brothers and sisters.

    Finally, the warmth(too technical) between life as a single child and life with siblings is also different. The single child just gets care from his or her parents. He or she needs a sibling to share about his or her problems. However, a single child can get warmth from their his parents and siblings also too. When they have problems, they always want somebody who can help them, so they can ask both their parents and brothers or sisters. They may get and make good experiences with their siblings that make the warmth.

    In conclusion, the only one child always just like that (this sentence has no meaning). I think, the family of a single child cannot know about the joy of having brothers or sisters although a child usually gets something he or she needs or wants. The child will not get some experiences from siblings that help to develops him or her. Also, without relations with other siblings, a child only gets warmness from him or her parents.



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