Churchill / partie 2
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Message de leslie37 posté le 17-01-2016 à 11:47:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger la deuxième partie de mon exposé s'il vous plait. Merci d'avance.
In the same way, he fostered the relationship between US and UK. For example, he went to the United States in 1946 to address an informal speech to Fulton called “The Iron Curtain” in which he drew attention to the Communist Soviet threat. Most of American presidents praised him because according to them, he comes closest to fulfilling the requirement of greatness.
This great statesman demonstrated huge charisma in his speeches in which he used a powerful rhetoric to achieve his goals. He’s endowed of perseverance which helped to mobilize an entire nation to enter in war. His skills as PM led him to glory.
To conclude, through his oratory persuasive skills, courage in the decision making on the other hand, he may be seen as a hero, inasmuch as charism and feats are qualities traditionally ascribed to heroes. We can finally say that’s his public popularity is unassailable although some historians think he stands as a villain. But he was first and foremost made of flesh and blood, with all the inherent weakness and dark sides.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-01-2016 13:23
Message de leslie37 posté le 17-01-2016 à 11:47:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger la deuxième partie de mon exposé s'il vous plait. Merci d'avance.
In the same way, he fostered the relationship between US and UK. For example, he went to the United States in 1946 to address an informal speech to Fulton called “The Iron Curtain” in which he drew attention to the Communist Soviet threat. Most of American presidents praised him because according to them, he comes closest to fulfilling the requirement of greatness.
This great statesman demonstrated huge charisma in his speeches in which he used a powerful rhetoric to achieve his goals. He’s endowed of perseverance which helped to mobilize an entire nation to enter in war. His skills as PM led him to glory.
To conclude, through his oratory persuasive skills, courage in the decision making on the other hand, he may be seen as a hero, inasmuch as charism and feats are qualities traditionally ascribed to heroes. We can finally say that’s his public popularity is unassailable although some historians think he stands as a villain. But he was first and foremost made of flesh and blood, with all the inherent weakness and dark sides.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-01-2016 13:23
Réponse: Churchill / partie 2 de gerondif, postée le 17-01-2016 à 12:59:14 (S | E)
Bonjour,
In the same way, he fostered the relationship between the US and the UK.
Les noms de pays pluriels prennent the: The United Kingdom, The USA, The Netherlands, The United Arab Emirates.....
For example, he went to the United States in 1946 to address an informal speech to Fulton called “The Iron Curtain” in which he drew attention to the Communist Soviet threat. Most of the American presidents (soit vous dites: Most American Presidents, soit most of the American Presidents parce que vous en prenez certains parmi un groupe) praised him because according to them, he comes closest to fulfilling the requirement of greatness.
This great statesman demonstrated huge charisma in his speeches in which he used a powerful rhetoric to achieve his goals. He’s endowed of with perseverance,(alors là, soit c'est "a perseverance which".... soit c'est perseverance en général, virgule, et which signifie "ce qui" et reprend l'ensemble de la phrase précédente) which helped to mobilize an entire nation to enter in war. His skills as PM led him to glory.
To conclude, through his oratory persuasive skills, courage in the decision making on the other hand, he may be seen as a hero, inasmuch as charism and feats are qualities traditionally ascribed to heroes. We can finally say that’s his public popularity is unassailable although some historians think he stands as a villain. But he was first and foremost made of flesh and blood, with all the inherent weaknesses and dark sides.
Réponse: Churchill / partie 2 de leslie37, postée le 17-01-2016 à 14:29:58 (S | E)
C'est corrigé ! Merci beaucoup
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