Correction/Tower Bridge
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Message de carine83 posté le 02-01-2016 à 12:24:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
Pour la rentrée j'ai un texte à écrire en anglais et après je devrai passer à l'oral. Cette note comptera pour mon Bac alors c'est très important. Je ne suis pas très forte en anglais, si vous pouvez me le corriger ou m'aider ce serait très sympa de votre part. Merci.
Tower Bridge
The plans of Tower Bridge were built around of one thousand eight hundred seventy-six. The bridge were built by Horace Jones and John Wolfe Barry is finish in eight thousand and ninety four.
At the moment of the construction, the Tower Bridge is the biggest and the sophistry of bridge built never. This bridge is famous in the world thanks to architecture. It is compose of two tower. The bridge allows to pedestrians of cross while the drawbridge is open for the boats.
In the tower bridge, we can look the beautiful view. We can discover the story of bridge and the construction . The tower bridge is located to more forty-two meter above the city.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-01-2016 14:12
Message de carine83 posté le 02-01-2016 à 12:24:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
Pour la rentrée j'ai un texte à écrire en anglais et après je devrai passer à l'oral. Cette note comptera pour mon Bac alors c'est très important. Je ne suis pas très forte en anglais, si vous pouvez me le corriger ou m'aider ce serait très sympa de votre part. Merci.
Tower Bridge
The plans of Tower Bridge were built around of one thousand eight hundred seventy-six. The bridge were built by Horace Jones and John Wolfe Barry is finish in eight thousand and ninety four.
At the moment of the construction, the Tower Bridge is the biggest and the sophistry of bridge built never. This bridge is famous in the world thanks to architecture. It is compose of two tower. The bridge allows to pedestrians of cross while the drawbridge is open for the boats.
In the tower bridge, we can look the beautiful view. We can discover the story of bridge and the construction . The tower bridge is located to more forty-two meter above the city.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-01-2016 14:12
Réponse: Correction/Tower Bridge de baboune16, postée le 02-01-2016 à 13:40:26 (S | E)
Bonjour,
The plans of Tower Bridge were built
( quel est le sujet de be built.?) around of(supprimer) one thousand eight hundred seventy-six(formulation à améliorer). The bridge were(singulier) built by Horace Jones and John Wolfe Barry is
finish(temps) in eight thousand and ninety four(date fantaisiste).At the moment of the construction, the Tower Bridge is(temps ?) the biggest and the sophistry
( ne pas confondre sophistique et sophistication) of bridge built never(construction). This bridge is famous in the world thanks to (manque un possessif) architecture. It is composed of two tower(pluriel). The bridge allows to pedestrians of(construction ) cross while the drawbridge is open for the boats.In the Tower Bridge, we can look
a[ beautiful view( formulation incorrecte). We can discover the story of bridge and the construction . The tower bridge is located(inadapté , indique unlieu) to more(manque un mot) forty-two meters above the city.(expression à corriger) Bon courage
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