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Message de akunamatata23 posté le 30-12-2015 à 10:59:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
j'ai un passage oral en anglais sur les nouvelles technologies à la rentrée et je voudrais le corriger, je crois avoir fait beaucoup de fautes alors s'il vous plait merci de m'aider.
le médecin :
Your child can have serious problemes of back , eyes and memory if he continues to spend all his days in front of screnns.
It is neccesary to impose him rules
Fort exemple no computer and mobile phone after 10am
Phycologue
Your son need another environnement to be less contained
It neccesary to make him activities since sport or reading allowing to developp relation shops
Professeur
Your child vas bas marks at Scholl it neccesary to mâle rules since limite the screens tome ans confiscate vis computer after 10 am
Parent
My child is enclosed and he hasn't spoken to anybody
He been holed up in her room all day his scrares me.desides he get bad marks at scholl and he became violent with her family.
i d'ont know what to do
I tried to talk to her and make activities it does not work
I think he need to take part in a group therapy
Enfant
The videos games and my mobile phone is my life
I can keep in touch with my family and my friend
I can to pass tome ans have some fun
My computer allows me to search informations for my homeworks
For exemple for my presentations
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-12-2015 12:05
Message de akunamatata23 posté le 30-12-2015 à 10:59:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
j'ai un passage oral en anglais sur les nouvelles technologies à la rentrée et je voudrais le corriger, je crois avoir fait beaucoup de fautes alors s'il vous plait merci de m'aider.
le médecin :
Your child can have serious problemes of back , eyes and memory if he continues to spend all his days in front of screnns.
It is neccesary to impose him rules
Fort exemple no computer and mobile phone after 10am
Phycologue
Your son need another environnement to be less contained
It neccesary to make him activities since sport or reading allowing to developp relation shops
Professeur
Your child vas bas marks at Scholl it neccesary to mâle rules since limite the screens tome ans confiscate vis computer after 10 am
Parent
My child is enclosed and he hasn't spoken to anybody
He been holed up in her room all day his scrares me.desides he get bad marks at scholl and he became violent with her family.
i d'ont know what to do
I tried to talk to her and make activities it does not work
I think he need to take part in a group therapy
Enfant
The videos games and my mobile phone is my life
I can keep in touch with my family and my friend
I can to pass tome ans have some fun
My computer allows me to search informations for my homeworks
For exemple for my presentations
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-12-2015 12:05
Réponse: Aide/nouvelles technologies de baboune16, postée le 30-12-2015 à 12:53:31 (S | E)
Bonjour,
médecin :
Your child can (choix du verbe) have serious problemes of back , eyes and memory if he continues to spend all his days in front of screnns.
It is neccesary to impose him rules
Fort exemple no computer and mobile phone after 10am
Phycologue
Your son need(accord) another environnement to be less contained
It(verbemanquant) neccesary to make
him (verbe manquant) activities since(incorrect) sport or reading allowing to developp relation shops (en un seul mot)Professeur
Your child was(verbe)bas marks at Scholl it(manqueverbe) neccesary to mâle rules since
limite the screens tome ans confiscate vis computer after 10 am Parent
My child is enclosed(choix du verbe?) and he hasn't spoken to anybody(verifier la construction)
He (auxiliaire absent) been holed up in her(sexe fifferent de he) room all day(incomplet) his
scrares me.desides he get'conjugaison) bad marks at scholl and he became violent with her family.i d'ont know what to do
I tried to talk to her
and make activities(ponctuation) it does not work I think he need(accord) to take part in a group therapy (inverser les 2 mots)
Enfant
The videos games and my mobile phone is (acccord) my life
I can keep in touch with my family and my friend
I can to(à supprimer) pass tome ans have some fun
My computer allows me to search informations for my homeworks(pas de s )
For exemple for my presentations
en bleu ; essentiellement des fautes d'orthographe faciles à corriger avec un peu d'attention et un dictionnaire.
bon courage
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-12-2015 13:12
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