Correction /motivation
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Message de well56 posté le 31-01-2015 à 22:16:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Je recherche un job d'été dans un camping. Je viens de terminer ma lettre de motivation.. Serait-il possible de corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait ?
Merci beaucoup !!
Dear X,
Currently a first-year student in intensive preparatory classes and I'm looking for a job this summer in order to pay my education in business school later. Furthermore It would be a fantastic junsture to improve my English. As a result I am taking the opportunity to contact you as I am highly interested in working for you in you're camping.
At moment I'm learning about relationship, selling and fonctioning of organization. I'm fond of my studying and I would like to be immersed in a camping. Indeed I had already spend holidays with my parent in campings and this moments has left my mark on. As a result I decided to try my luck and apply for foreign summer job.
It will be a fantastic experience for me as I could discovered of my owns eyes English organization. However I don't want to choice a commonplace. From my view it's very important to share spirit and values of the organization. This is why I decided to choice your camping as I'm totally sharing yours familial and open-minded spirit.
To this end, please see attached my cover letter and my resume.
I thank you in advance for your consideration of my enthusiasm to work at XX
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-01-2015 22:20
Message de well56 posté le 31-01-2015 à 22:16:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Je recherche un job d'été dans un camping. Je viens de terminer ma lettre de motivation.. Serait-il possible de corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait ?
Merci beaucoup !!
Dear X,
Currently a first-year student in intensive preparatory classes and I'm looking for a job this summer in order to pay my education in business school later. Furthermore It would be a fantastic junsture to improve my English. As a result I am taking the opportunity to contact you as I am highly interested in working for you in you're camping.
At moment I'm learning about relationship, selling and fonctioning of organization. I'm fond of my studying and I would like to be immersed in a camping. Indeed I had already spend holidays with my parent in campings and this moments has left my mark on. As a result I decided to try my luck and apply for foreign summer job.
It will be a fantastic experience for me as I could discovered of my owns eyes English organization. However I don't want to choice a commonplace. From my view it's very important to share spirit and values of the organization. This is why I decided to choice your camping as I'm totally sharing yours familial and open-minded spirit.
To this end, please see attached my cover letter and my resume.
I thank you in advance for your consideration of my enthusiasm to work at XX
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-01-2015 22:20
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