Correction/ lettre motivation
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Message de skarap posté le 17-01-2015 à 12:51:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
je suis nouveau ici, je sollicite votre aide car j'ai rédigé une lettre de motivation pour partir avec ERASMUS en Ecosse l'année prochaine mais j'avoue que l'exercice est périlleux et je souhaiterais donc avoir une correction de la part des spécialistes du coin
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear Sir or Madam
After thinking and having discussed with some teachers, I decided to apply for a place to ERASMUS next year. I propose to you to examine my candidature.
I am currently doing an HND degree (2 years) and I really want to go abroad next year. ERASMUS is an excellent opportunity for a student to study in another country.
Indeed, this chance will allow me to learn specialities from my pathways, especially in English, one of the important discipline in Logistics. It will be a main asset for my professional career. I really would like to work on a shipping company and it’s an obligation to speak english today.
Moreover, since I started my studies I really wanted to spend one year abroad. I know this opportunity constitutes an advantage on my resume, and that will enable me to carry on my education in Shipping transport. This opportunity to live one year in Scotland will enable me to open my mind with the UK culture.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-01-2015 16:49
Message de skarap posté le 17-01-2015 à 12:51:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
je suis nouveau ici, je sollicite votre aide car j'ai rédigé une lettre de motivation pour partir avec ERASMUS en Ecosse l'année prochaine mais j'avoue que l'exercice est périlleux et je souhaiterais donc avoir une correction de la part des spécialistes du coin
Merci pour vos réponses.
Dear Sir or Madam
After thinking and having discussed with some teachers, I decided to apply for a place to ERASMUS next year. I propose to you to examine my candidature.
I am currently doing an HND degree (2 years) and I really want to go abroad next year. ERASMUS is an excellent opportunity for a student to study in another country.
Indeed, this chance will allow me to learn specialities from my pathways, especially in English, one of the important discipline in Logistics. It will be a main asset for my professional career. I really would like to work on a shipping company and it’s an obligation to speak english today.
Moreover, since I started my studies I really wanted to spend one year abroad. I know this opportunity constitutes an advantage on my resume, and that will enable me to carry on my education in Shipping transport. This opportunity to live one year in Scotland will enable me to open my mind with the UK culture.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-01-2015 16:49
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