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Message de thechauv posté le 13-05-2014 à 02:02:38 (S | E | F)
Hello
Si une âme charitable pouvait corriger ce speech ce serait super !
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Hello everyone,
First I am sorry sorry for ny French accent and I hope you guys will understand me.
I going to introduce me. My name is Clément. I live in France near xxx. I think you guys know xxx. That's basically the wine capital. I am 16. I have one brother and he is 14.
So, I am here since Frebruary and seriously that was awesome. I would like to thank to Mr xxx who accepted me in his school. Thank you to Senor xxx, Mr xxx and Mr xxx who were my teachers. I am really glad because I did it.
Because you know it’s not easy to leave for 5 months and I was very scared.
But everything was great, I make a lot of friends, all the teachers were very nice and I had a verry great time with you guys.
I would like to thank the xxx familly beacaus I stayed with them for 2 months and the xxx familly I stayed with them for 2 months too. And I going to stay this summer with xxx.
So thank you so much guys everything was awesome.
I want to say to you Mr xxx your school is very great. Great buildings, great place, basically everything was great.
I really like xxx because I think there is lot of history about it.
I did a lot of activities like shooting (very US thing) but I liked it. New experiences. I think this journey will be a very good memory for later because It’s a big life experience.
I think I will come back here next year for summer break to see you guys again.
So, basically I love USA.
Merci encore!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-05-2014 09:01
Message de thechauv posté le 13-05-2014 à 02:02:38 (S | E | F)
Hello
Si une âme charitable pouvait corriger ce speech ce serait super !
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Hello everyone,
First I am sorry sorry for ny French accent and I hope you guys will understand me.
I going to introduce me. My name is Clément. I live in France near xxx. I think you guys know xxx. That's basically the wine capital. I am 16. I have one brother and he is 14.
So, I am here since Frebruary and seriously that was awesome. I would like to thank to Mr xxx who accepted me in his school. Thank you to Senor xxx, Mr xxx and Mr xxx who were my teachers. I am really glad because I did it.
Because you know it’s not easy to leave for 5 months and I was very scared.
But everything was great, I make a lot of friends, all the teachers were very nice and I had a verry great time with you guys.
I would like to thank the xxx familly beacaus I stayed with them for 2 months and the xxx familly I stayed with them for 2 months too. And I going to stay this summer with xxx.
So thank you so much guys everything was awesome.
I want to say to you Mr xxx your school is very great. Great buildings, great place, basically everything was great.
I really like xxx because I think there is lot of history about it.
I did a lot of activities like shooting (very US thing) but I liked it. New experiences. I think this journey will be a very good memory for later because It’s a big life experience.
I think I will come back here next year for summer break to see you guys again.
So, basically I love USA.
Merci encore!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-05-2014 09:01
Réponse: Aide/Discours remerciements de bluduck2, postée le 13-05-2014 à 10:30:52 (S | E)
Hello thechauv !
Quelques remarques ! Vous vous adressez à des adultes ,à un principal d'établissement scolaire ,évitez "you guys"qui est familier.
Vocabulaire :variez les adjectifs ,pour ne pas répéter "awsome" et "great".
the USA fédération,( pays pluriel),mais France , Great Britain
Grammaire
ligne 1 To introduce oneself
ligne 3 since+present perfect
ligne 4 I joined the class
ligne 6 oubli ? "home "après to leave
ligne 7 to make ,simple past
ligne 11 :article oublié devant "American thing "
I hope this helps ! Bluduck2
Réponse: Aide/Discours remerciements de thechauv, postée le 14-05-2014 à 05:20:54 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup de m'avoir aidé ! Cela m'a permis de corriger mes fautes.
J'ai une petite question qui est la suivante:
Comment exprimer le "you guys" sans être familier ?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2014 19:04
Réponse: Aide/Discours remerciements de thechauv, postée le 14-05-2014 à 14:46:17 (S | E)
Ah oui j'ai aussi une question (qui n'a rien avoir avec mon discours)
Quand on dit: Je devrais manger; La traduction est I should eat.
Mais quand on dit J'aurais dû manger nje ne trouve pas de traduction.
J'ai vu qu'on pouvait l'écrire pareil c'est-à-dire I should eat.
Mais c'est bizarre non ?
Une petite aide s'il vous plaît?
Merci beaucoup.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2014 19:04
Réponse: Aide/Discours remerciements de gerondif, postée le 14-05-2014 à 15:27:35 (S | E)
Hello,
Quand on dit: Je devrais manger, La traduction est I should eat. oui!
Mais quand on dit J'aurais dû manger l'anglais dit en fait :
je devrais avoir mangé: I should have eaten before going to that training session.
Ah, au fait, on met the devant les pays pluriels: the USA, the Netherlands, The United Arab Emirates et même The United Kingdom.(mais Bluduck en avait déjà parlé)
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