Water/ correction

Water/ correction
Message de camillelorraine posté le 08-05-2014 à 10:49:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un texte à écrire mais j'ai du mal; pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour vos réponses.

The water is a natural resource essential to life. Because without her, there wouldn’t have any life in the world. All people alive have needed drinking water for to exist.
But, more we are numerous and, more resources to run out. We go dépasser seven billion inhabitans. Indead, the water could to become rare. So, plans are born for save these water precious. Sometimes, lonely everyday gesture could to be enough .

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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2014 15:51

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Réponse: Water/ correction de sherry48, postée le 08-05-2014 à 12:31:26 (S | E)
Hello.
Here are some things to work on.

The water is a natural resource, essential to life. Because without her, there wouldn’t have any life in the world. All people alive have needed drinking water for to exist.
But, more we are numerous and, more resources to run out.(be+verb+ing) We go dépasser seven billion inhabitans. Indead, the water could to become rare. So plans are born (tense) for save(infinitive-no preposition) these water precious(word order). Sometimes, lonely everyday gesture (plural) could to be enough .

* Use a dictionary to find another word for the underlined words.
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Sherry

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Réponse: Water/ correction de camillelorraine, postée le 09-05-2014 à 12:32:56 (S | E)
Bonjour!
j'ai actuellement un exercice à effectuer en anglais. J'ai déjà tout fait mais je me demande s'il ne reste pas des fautes.
Pourriez-vous m'aider ?

Voici ma correction.
The water is a resource essential to the life, without her there would’d be life possible in the wold. Every human needed water to exist. But more we are more the resources decrease. We are going to exceed the 7 billions of inhabitants. The water could become a rare resource. Projects born for of save this precious water. Sometimes only daily gestures can are enougr: - close the tap during the cleaning of teeth, shower, hands... - fill the washing machine completely - recycle the water. Re-use of the water for the garden. - I collect b' rainwater I squeeze up for the watering of the garden drinking water
Merci d'avance.
Cordialement

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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-05-2014 13:29
Topic fusionné avec l'ancien.
Merci de lire les indications qui vous ont été données par sherry.

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Réponse: Water/ correction de camillelorraine, postée le 09-05-2014 à 15:02:08 (S | E)
Thank you very much. It's good like it?, please Is it right now?

Water is a natural resource, essential to life. Because without it, there would be any life in the world. All people alive have needed drinking water to exist.
But, the more we are numerous and, the more resources are running out. We go seven billion inhabitants. Indeed, water could become rare. So tense for to save these water invaluable. Sometimes, lonely everyday gestures (plural) could be enough.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-05-2014 17:46

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Réponse: Water/ correction de sherry48, postée le 10-05-2014 à 17:31:49 (S | E)
Hello again.

Here are some suggestions about your corrections:

...without it, there would ___ be any life in the world. Something more is needed for a negative statement.
'But the more numerous we are, the more resources are running out' sounds more natural than the more we are numerous and, the more resources are running out. We go seven billion inhabitants. Indeed, water could become rare. So plans for to save these water _____ (verb) invaluable. Sometimes, lonely (lonely is for people! a different word is required) everyday gestures could be enough- close (turn off ) the tap during the cleaning of teeth/while brushing your teeth, * shower, * hands,(*verbs) fill the washing machine completely,recycle the water, re-use of the water/recycle water by re-using for the garden. I collect b' rainwater I squeeze up for the watering of the garden/to water the garden. drinking water

Sherry

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