Correction/lettre motivation
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Message de bens posté le 06-05-2014 à 16:48:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Afin d'accéder à un Master je dois envoyer une lettre de motivation, mais n'étant pas assez à l'aise en anglais je requiers votre aide afin de corriger certaines erreurs d'orthographe ou de syntaxe pouvant être présentes dans ma lettre.
A noter que je ne sais pas vraiment comment traduire DUT Gestion des Entreprises et des Administrations ni Licence 3 Sciences de Gestion..
Merci d'avance à tous ceux et celles qui pourront me venir en aide
Object: Application for Master’s degree 1 Marketing and Management of Commercial Teams
Dear Madam or Sir,
Currently doing my License 3 Management Sciences at IAE La Garde and after been graduated from a DUT Business and Administration Management, I send you my application file for Master’s degree 1 Marketing and Management of Commercial Teams.
My educational background and my plans will demonstrate you my desire to continue my studies, which have started with a DUT Business and Administration Management. This training gave me useful knowledge in all domains of business management, including accounting, human resources or marketing.
Particularly interested in marketing, I took advantage of my academic year 3 License Management Sciences to deepen my knowledge in this field. In particular, I learned how to understand the marketing environment of a company and consumer’s behavior in order to be able to make the right decisions. This experience helped me to develop my ability to synthesize and my team spirit, major assets in this field.
Be allowed to access to your Master’s degree 1 Marketing and Management of Commercial Teams would be the culmination of a course, based on the marketing, and will be obviously a formidable springboard for my professional career. By joining your school, I could also benefit from the quality of your education and your multiple university exchanges to spend a year abroad to improve my level of English, essential asset nowadays.
Perform Master’s degree 2 Negotiation and Management of Sales Teams would be an essential addition to my knowledge and lessons would fall perfectly in line with my career objective. I want to become merchandising manager. I am interested in the design of the strategy and the policy of merchandising company. Manage a merchandising team and identify customer needs are elements that I consider like the most motivating for this position.
Please don’t hesitate to contact me if you should require further information and thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par bens le 06-05-2014 17:37
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-05-2014 18:52
Message de bens posté le 06-05-2014 à 16:48:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Afin d'accéder à un Master je dois envoyer une lettre de motivation, mais n'étant pas assez à l'aise en anglais je requiers votre aide afin de corriger certaines erreurs d'orthographe ou de syntaxe pouvant être présentes dans ma lettre.
A noter que je ne sais pas vraiment comment traduire DUT Gestion des Entreprises et des Administrations ni Licence 3 Sciences de Gestion..
Merci d'avance à tous ceux et celles qui pourront me venir en aide
Object: Application for Master’s degree 1 Marketing and Management of Commercial Teams
Dear Madam or Sir,
Currently doing my License 3 Management Sciences at IAE La Garde and after been graduated from a DUT Business and Administration Management, I send you my application file for Master’s degree 1 Marketing and Management of Commercial Teams.
My educational background and my plans will demonstrate you my desire to continue my studies, which have started with a DUT Business and Administration Management. This training gave me useful knowledge in all domains of business management, including accounting, human resources or marketing.
Particularly interested in marketing, I took advantage of my academic year 3 License Management Sciences to deepen my knowledge in this field. In particular, I learned how to understand the marketing environment of a company and consumer’s behavior in order to be able to make the right decisions. This experience helped me to develop my ability to synthesize and my team spirit, major assets in this field.
Be allowed to access to your Master’s degree 1 Marketing and Management of Commercial Teams would be the culmination of a course, based on the marketing, and will be obviously a formidable springboard for my professional career. By joining your school, I could also benefit from the quality of your education and your multiple university exchanges to spend a year abroad to improve my level of English, essential asset nowadays.
Perform Master’s degree 2 Negotiation and Management of Sales Teams would be an essential addition to my knowledge and lessons would fall perfectly in line with my career objective. I want to become merchandising manager. I am interested in the design of the strategy and the policy of merchandising company. Manage a merchandising team and identify customer needs are elements that I consider like the most motivating for this position.
Please don’t hesitate to contact me if you should require further information and thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par bens le 06-05-2014 17:37
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-05-2014 18:52
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