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Message de messi03 posté le 20-04-2014 à 23:55:21 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
Please, I need help to correct my Resume for an internship in English speaking countries.
Thank you in advance.
Personal Details
xxx
Age : 21
Nationality : French
adress
xxx
mobile
email adress
Resume for a Training period Application :
For a paid traineeship during 3 months, From 30 May to 30 August 2014
EDUCATION
Protectorat xxx Secondary School (2009-2011)
July 2011 : A-Level specialized in Sciences and Management Technologies(Marketing Option)
Junior at the University xxx
Administration and international exchange degree
Specialization : Marketing an International trade
SKILLS AND KNOWLEDGE
Knowledge in accounting.
Ability to set up new outlets opening policies.
Knowledge in global exchanges regulations, production analysis and decisions making.
Team leader, as leader or follower.
Languages : Fluent in English, good skills in Spanish and conversational German.
Ability to listen and transmit information at the right time.
Good knowledge in Microsoft Word, Outlook, Excel, Powerpoint and Photoshop.
WORK EXPERIENCE
Internship at the Post office, xxx February 2007 (one week)
Receipt of packages and registered letters.
Welcome and advise clients.
Internship at Physical Therapy Firm, xxx February 2008 (one week)
- Helped the doctor to assist patients and satisfy their needs.
Marketing Plan January 2011- May 2011
- Marketing Plan on the market of french luxury second-hand shop.
- Related Tasks : Find a local for our luxury second-hand shop, Achievement a market analysis, Interview some various actors on the market.
INTERESTS
Football, Running, Cinema(action and cult movies), Traveling(spain, England, Italy), International Trade.
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Edited by lucile83 on 21-04-2014 09:29
Message de messi03 posté le 20-04-2014 à 23:55:21 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
Please, I need help to correct my Resume for an internship in English speaking countries.
Thank you in advance.
Personal Details
xxx
Age : 21
Nationality : French
adress
xxx
mobile
email adress
Resume for a Training period Application :
For a paid traineeship during 3 months, From 30 May to 30 August 2014
EDUCATION
Protectorat xxx Secondary School (2009-2011)
July 2011 : A-Level specialized in Sciences and Management Technologies(Marketing Option)
Junior at the University xxx
Administration and international exchange degree
Specialization : Marketing an International trade
SKILLS AND KNOWLEDGE
Knowledge in accounting.
Ability to set up new outlets opening policies.
Knowledge in global exchanges regulations, production analysis and decisions making.
Team leader, as leader or follower.
Languages : Fluent in English, good skills in Spanish and conversational German.
Ability to listen and transmit information at the right time.
Good knowledge in Microsoft Word, Outlook, Excel, Powerpoint and Photoshop.
WORK EXPERIENCE
Internship at the Post office, xxx February 2007 (one week)
Receipt of packages and registered letters.
Welcome and advise clients.
Internship at Physical Therapy Firm, xxx February 2008 (one week)
- Helped the doctor to assist patients and satisfy their needs.
Marketing Plan January 2011- May 2011
- Marketing Plan on the market of french luxury second-hand shop.
- Related Tasks : Find a local for our luxury second-hand shop, Achievement a market analysis, Interview some various actors on the market.
INTERESTS
Football, Running, Cinema(action and cult movies), Traveling(spain, England, Italy), International Trade.
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Edited by lucile83 on 21-04-2014 09:29
Réponse: Resume/ internship de messi03, postée le 21-04-2014 à 16:11:50 (S | E)
help me please
Réponse: Resume/ internship de bluduck2, postée le 28-04-2014 à 15:07:57 (S | E)
Hello messi03 ! je n'ai pas vu beaucoup de fautes ,mais quelques fautes de frappe :"an" pour" and",majuscules omises pour les noms de pays
mais je m'interroge sur le mot "protectorat".
"Protectorate" est une période de l'histoite anglaise (XVII ème siècle ,Cromwell)
I hope you'll find an interesting internship . Bluduck2
Réponse: Resume/ internship de bluestar, postée le 28-04-2014 à 16:13:25 (S | E)
Bonjour...quelques suggestions ci-dessous:
Personal Details
xxx
Age : 21
Nationality : French
mobile
email adress
Resume for a Training period Application :
For a paid traineeship during 3 months, fFrom 30 May to 30 August 2014
EDUCATION
Protectorat xxx Secondary School (2009-2011)July 2011 : A-Level specialized in Sciences and Management Technologies(Marketing Option)
Junior at the University xxx
Administration and international exchange degree
Specialization : Marketing an (and?) International trade
SKILLS AND KNOWLEDGE
Knowledge in of accounting.
Ability to set up new outlets opening policies.
Knowledge in global exchanges regulations, production analysis and decisions making.
Team leader, as leader or follower.(bizarre!)
Languages : Fluent in English, good skills in Spanish and conversational German.
Ability to listen and transmit information at the right time.
Good knowledge in Microsoft Word, Outlook, Excel, Powerpoint and Photoshop.
WORK EXPERIENCE
Internship at the Post Ooffice, xxx February 2007 (one week)
Receipt of packages and registered letters.
Welcome and advise clients.(utilisez le "-ing" forme des verbes)
Internship at Physical Therapy Firm, xxx February 2008 (one week)
- Helped (-ing)the doctor to assist patients and satisfy (-ing) their needs.
Marketing Plan January 2011- May 2011
- Marketing Plan on the marketing of Ffrench luxury second-hand shop.
- Related Tasks : Finding a local (quoi?) for our luxury second-hand shop, Achievement a market analysis, Interviewing some various
INTERESTS
Football, Running, Cinema(action and cult movies), Traveling(Sspain, England, Italy), International Trade.
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Comme bluduck je ne sais pas ce que vous voulez dire par 'Protectorat'...
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