Correction /dialogue

Correction /dialogue
Message de malik69 posté le 19-03-2014 à 18:19:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pouvez-vous corriger mon texte svp s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour vos réponses.

the taking of doping substance characterised by the individual success and the research of performance
We must fight against doping because it is a threat to values associated with sport as ethics wich is for me the most important
Unfortunately, the increased consumption of doping products promotes the black market.
Many people suffer every year and this causes many murder.
This is a facet of doping which is never spoken and yet it is the most important.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-03-2014 18:40

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de albooga, postée le 19-03-2014 à 20:50:37 (S | E)
the taking of doping substance characterised by the individual success and the research of performance [La phrase incomplet et le sens est passif. Employez la voix affirmatif.]
We must fight against doping because it is a threat to values associated with sport as ethics wich is for me the most important
Unfortunately, the increased consumption of doping products promotes the black market.
Many people suffer every year and this causes many murder.
This is a facet of doping which is never spoken and yet it is the most important.

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de gerondif, postée le 19-03-2014 à 22:17:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
encomplément:
This is a facet (an aspect) of doping which is never spoken of/mentioned and yet it is the most important.

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de gerondif, postée le 19-03-2014 à 22:19:14 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
The taking of doping substance is characterised by the individual success and the search of performances

prendre des substances dopantes est causé par, et non pas charactérisé par le succès individuel et la recherche de performances comme vous le dites.

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de malik69, postée le 19-03-2014 à 22:38:16 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup

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Réponse: Correction /dialogue de malik69, postée le 19-03-2014 à 22:14:58 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Pouvez-vous corriger cette phrase,et me dire ce qui n'allait pas s'il vous plaît?
cela m'aiderait beaucoup.
Merci pour vos réponses.

The taking of doping substance is characterised by the individual success and the search of performances

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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-03-2014 23:48
Deux topics identiques fusionnés.

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