Correction/Lettre Motivation
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Message de flo77 posté le 09-01-2014 à 21:54:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois envoyer mes cv et lettres de motivation pour un stage en finance, et je ne suis pas forcément à l'aise en anglais. C'est pour cela que je sollicite votre aide pour une correction.
voici la lettre:
Dear Mrs, Mr,
As a 3-year student in Economics and Financial Engineering at the , I am currently looking for an internship for 4 months, starting from May 15 2014, in your Investment Bank.
As part of my internship, I want to put into practice what I saw in the different courses I followed. These latter already allow me to be effective directly. Indeed, some courses such as VBA programming, Reuters, and especially Financial Engineering, where I learn to price Fixed-Income Derivatives, Mortgage Backed Security, and Swap, can be very useful for a real application.
I am aware that an internship is an investment for your bank, and ask for a whole participation to the trainee, so I will be able to put all my energy and my determination to succeed in favor of your bank. Also, I believe that my strong work ethic, ability, and passion for finance would make me a valuable asset to your firm.
A copy of my resume is enclosed for your reference. I would welcome an opportunity to discuss my qualifications with you. I can be reached at ...
Merci d'avance
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-01-2014 23:11
Message de flo77 posté le 09-01-2014 à 21:54:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois envoyer mes cv et lettres de motivation pour un stage en finance, et je ne suis pas forcément à l'aise en anglais. C'est pour cela que je sollicite votre aide pour une correction.
voici la lettre:
Dear Mrs, Mr,
As a 3-year student in Economics and Financial Engineering at the , I am currently looking for an internship for 4 months, starting from May 15 2014, in your Investment Bank.
As part of my internship, I want to put into practice what I saw in the different courses I followed. These latter already allow me to be effective directly. Indeed, some courses such as VBA programming, Reuters, and especially Financial Engineering, where I learn to price Fixed-Income Derivatives, Mortgage Backed Security, and Swap, can be very useful for a real application.
I am aware that an internship is an investment for your bank, and ask for a whole participation to the trainee, so I will be able to put all my energy and my determination to succeed in favor of your bank. Also, I believe that my strong work ethic, ability, and passion for finance would make me a valuable asset to your firm.
A copy of my resume is enclosed for your reference. I would welcome an opportunity to discuss my qualifications with you. I can be reached at ...
Merci d'avance
Cordialement
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-01-2014 23:11
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