Correction /motivation
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Message de pbernard posté le 08-01-2014 à 16:49:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Mon anglais est plutôt médiocre et j'aimerais savoir si ma lettre de motivation est correcte.
Merci de votre aide
Dear Madam and Sir
The Job Description for the CEO position attracted all my attention. I believe my qualifications would match your requirements.
Man of dialogue, organization and strategy, manager in the soul, mind contractor, customer oriented with more than 26 years’ experience in technical and commercial management, I have a real know how in management of the systems of information in the domains below:
- Infrastructure and production management,
- Implementation of tools and normalization of production (ITIL),
- 20 years’ experience in managing large and complex programs of several million Euros,
- Management of the developments and global support package (MCO in French),
- Responsible of sub-contracting, experience with Offshoring and Nearshoring,
- Implemented of plan of recapture of activity (PRA), security of datacenters and monitoring of QoS indicators,
- Management of the relation with the internal/ external customers,
- Contract management,
- Organize and animate steering committees,
- Manage crisis
The time I spent in xxx has brought me a perfect understanding of the structure of a SSII, a pre-sales know-how, delivery management, analysis and optimization of production costs, monitoring strategic projects, management teams.
I am available immediately and mobile.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need more information. I would be pleased to meet you for an interview at your convenience.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-01-2014 19:00
Message de pbernard posté le 08-01-2014 à 16:49:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Mon anglais est plutôt médiocre et j'aimerais savoir si ma lettre de motivation est correcte.
Merci de votre aide
Dear Madam and Sir
The Job Description for the CEO position attracted all my attention. I believe my qualifications would match your requirements.
Man of dialogue, organization and strategy, manager in the soul, mind contractor, customer oriented with more than 26 years’ experience in technical and commercial management, I have a real know how in management of the systems of information in the domains below:
- Infrastructure and production management,
- Implementation of tools and normalization of production (ITIL),
- 20 years’ experience in managing large and complex programs of several million Euros,
- Management of the developments and global support package (MCO in French),
- Responsible of sub-contracting, experience with Offshoring and Nearshoring,
- Implemented of plan of recapture of activity (PRA), security of datacenters and monitoring of QoS indicators,
- Management of the relation with the internal/ external customers,
- Contract management,
- Organize and animate steering committees,
- Manage crisis
The time I spent in xxx has brought me a perfect understanding of the structure of a SSII, a pre-sales know-how, delivery management, analysis and optimization of production costs, monitoring strategic projects, management teams.
I am available immediately and mobile.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need more information. I would be pleased to meet you for an interview at your convenience.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-01-2014 19:00
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