Food waste/correction

Food waste/correction
Message de jadee55 posté le 24-11-2013 à 19:21:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
il se trouve que je fais un projet sur la nourriture et les habitudes alimentaires ! Pourrais-je avoir votre avis sur l'orthographe ? merci beaucoup pour le temps que vous passerez.

I throw good food.I buy too much food.I throw the food that I don't like: like beans, cucumber or red meat.I don't see what's in the fridge before shopping.During meal, when I am not hungry,I throw food in the bin.
At lunch,I eat Starchy foods such as rice, potatoes and pasta.I eat meat, eggs or fish.often , my dessert is a yogourt.
Every day, at breakfast, I eat bread with honey ! I take a bowl of milk with chocolate.
I eat a fruit: a kiwi or a banana. At dinner: In summer, I eat a salad with vegetables. In winter, I eat soup with a yogurt.
I don't like red meat, cauliflower and leek.I eat too much of candy and I don't eat much of fruit.I eat enough of meat and starchy foods.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-11-2013 20:14

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Réponse: Food waste/correction de sherry48, postée le 26-11-2013 à 00:20:29 (S | E)
Hello.
Your spelling looks pretty good, but there are some other areas to take a look at.

I throw ____good food. I buy too much food. I throw ___ (the) food that I don't like, like beans, cucumber(s) and/or red meat. I don't see what's in the fridge before ___ ____ shopping. During meal_, when I am not hungry, I throw food in the bin.
At lunch, I eat starchy foods such as rice, potatoes and pasta. I eat meat, eggs or fish. Often , my dessert is (a) yogourt. (There are 2 ways to spell this).
Every day, at breakfast, I eat bread with honey ! I have a bowl/cup or glass of milk with chocolate.
I eat some or a piece of fruit: a kiwi or a banana. At dinner: (Place at the end.) In summer, I eat a salad with vegetables. In winter, I eat soup with a yogurt.
I don't like red meat, cauliflower and leeks. I eat too much of candy and I don't eat much of fruit. I eat enough of meat and starchy foods.

You might want to review using and, or, and but.
Sherry

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Modifié par sherry48 le 26-11-2013 00:20

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Réponse: Food waste/correction de jadee55, postée le 15-12-2013 à 21:46:02 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre réponse qui m'a beaucoup aidé

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