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Message de jamsg posté le 10-09-2013 à 16:31:45 (S | E | F)
Hi everyone...
I would like to know if someone can help me to finish this application letter... I should send it tonigth and I am not sure all is ok on it.
Thank you for your help.
The reason for choosing this specific PhD programme in drug modelling comes from two main facts. In one hand It always has been my dream to earn a PhD. Since my bachelor degree, I always evolved in research area which is to me the best area to be. Then I am sure I definitely should get a PhD to demonstrate my competences at research. Also the PhD will bring me credential for most academic jobs and carry and a certain valuable prestige in many contexts. It will offer me the possibility of receiving the complete picture of all aspects of the field of pharmacometrics.
In a second hand since I heard about drug modelling, I had a growing interest for it. Then as I already had good skills in programming (thanks to my informatics master degree) and a very strong knowledge in biology, regulation processes in the body, etc.. (thanks to my bachelor of biology), I decided to follow the Clinical trials master degree in order to get a better background in pharmacokinetics and pharmacodynamics process and a strong background in modelling in this area. The aim of this master degree was to be enrolled in a research programme and then to be sure if a PhD was the best thing to do in my future. During my project I learned to like the research area, performing my own research, making presentation, organizing journal clubs, being a member of the DEEB research group etc..
I also had a great moment giving a hand up to my supervisor in her teaching tasks during the classes and examinations. Moreover I am sure your Research Group is one of the best team in world. I believe my educational background would enable me to make a strong contribution at the your University. Finally I can say that I look forward to join this Programme in order to gain new skills and I will be patiently waiting for a positive reply. I am free to start at the beginning of october.
Sincerely Yours
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Edited by lucile83 on 10-09-2013 16:44
Message de jamsg posté le 10-09-2013 à 16:31:45 (S | E | F)
Hi everyone...
I would like to know if someone can help me to finish this application letter... I should send it tonigth and I am not sure all is ok on it.
Thank you for your help.
The reason for choosing this specific PhD programme in drug modelling comes from two main facts. In one hand It always has been my dream to earn a PhD. Since my bachelor degree, I always evolved in research area which is to me the best area to be. Then I am sure I definitely should get a PhD to demonstrate my competences at research. Also the PhD will bring me credential for most academic jobs and carry and a certain valuable prestige in many contexts. It will offer me the possibility of receiving the complete picture of all aspects of the field of pharmacometrics.
In a second hand since I heard about drug modelling, I had a growing interest for it. Then as I already had good skills in programming (thanks to my informatics master degree) and a very strong knowledge in biology, regulation processes in the body, etc.. (thanks to my bachelor of biology), I decided to follow the Clinical trials master degree in order to get a better background in pharmacokinetics and pharmacodynamics process and a strong background in modelling in this area. The aim of this master degree was to be enrolled in a research programme and then to be sure if a PhD was the best thing to do in my future. During my project I learned to like the research area, performing my own research, making presentation, organizing journal clubs, being a member of the DEEB research group etc..
I also had a great moment giving a hand up to my supervisor in her teaching tasks during the classes and examinations. Moreover I am sure your Research Group is one of the best team in world. I believe my educational background would enable me to make a strong contribution at the your University. Finally I can say that I look forward to join this Programme in order to gain new skills and I will be patiently waiting for a positive reply. I am free to start at the beginning of october.
Sincerely Yours
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Edited by lucile83 on 10-09-2013 16:44
Réponse: Application letter /help de notrepere, postée le 10-09-2013 à 21:12:57 (S | E)
BonjourThe reason for choosing this specific PhD programme in drug modelling comes from two main facts.
(1) à placer entre has et been
(2) Je ne comprends pas cette phrase
(3) mauvaise préposition
Réponse: Application letter /help de jamsg, postée le 10-09-2013 à 21:54:38 (S | E)
Thank you so much
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