Correction /about judges

Correction /about judges
Message de nelg posté le 18-07-2013 à 14:28:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour

qui peut me corriger s'il vous plait?
Merci beaucoup de votre aide!

3. Answer these questions (about one or two lines for each question)
a) What does a judge do?
A judge must try with neutrality problematic cases as, for instance, when two people don't agree with each other.

b) What do you study to become a judge?
In order to become a judge, we have to study law in university for five years after high school diploma.

c) Do they earn much?
Yes, judges earn much because their job is not a easy one and involves many risks.

d) Would you like to be a judge? Why? (About ten lines)
I would like to be a judge because this job requires a lot of courage, open-mindedness large capacity and, above all, wisdom. I would like to be a judge to protect poor defendants who mustn't be sentenced to life without good reasons. Furthermore, I would like to be a judge to earn a good salary, which will allow me to carry out other plans that have in mind.

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Modifié par nelg le 18-07-2013 15:11

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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-07-2013 21:40

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Réponse: Correction /about judges de rickyfwi, postée le 18-07-2013 à 15:42:22 (S | E)
Hello,

A) What does a judge do?
A judge will judge between people who has have got problems. (c’est trop geénéral…) Indeed if YOU can not solve a problem YOURSELF, YOU need TO BRING YOUR CASE INTO COURT WHERE A JUDGE WILL FAIRLY JUDGE YOUR CASE…. à mon avis tu devrais reformuler le tout et rechercher la définition du travail d’un juge.

B) What do you study to become a judge?
In order to become a judge, YOU have to study the law at the university for five years after A bachelor (bachelor tu veux parler du baccalaureat? Le bachelor est l’équivalent de la licence en France; c'est 3-4ans d’études après le Bac)

c) Do they earn much?
Judges must earn much because it is not an easy job and there ARE many risks. The judges are very asked. JUDGES ARE VERY NEEDED.

d) Would you like to be a judge? Why? (About ten lines)
Yes, I would like to be a judge because it is a job that requires courage openness (je ne pense pas que ce mot existe) large capacity (large capacity of what?) and above all wisdom.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-07-2013 21:44
Beaucoup de fautes en français. En outre, vous devez indiquer les fautes en anglais, pas donner la réponse (effacée); merci.

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