Aide /lettre motivation

Aide /lettre motivation
Message de jadany posté le 26-06-2013 à 12:24:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

J'ai besoin de faire une lettre de motivation pour être prise en section européenne l'année prochaine. J'en avais fait une en français mais en arrivant au lycée pour l'inscription on m'a informé qu'elle devait être en anglais !
J'ai donc tout recommencé, un peu à la va vite, car je dois la rendre cet après midi !
J'aurais besoin d'aide pour mes fautes d'orthographe et de grammaire. Si une âme une charitable voulait bien m'aider je lui en serais éternellement reconnaissante !
Voici ma lettre :

Dear Madam, Dear Sir,


I write this letter to tell that I'm very motivated to join the European Section.
I'm already in european class since two years and I think it helped me a lot in english ! We have done lot of exposed, especially about policy in United-States and United-Kingdom.

I know I have weaknesses in oral but I hope to improve myself thanks to the European Section.

I would like speak fluently english because I love traveling and I would like be understood everywhere. This summer, I'm going two weeks in Plymouth with a friend to make progress in english. I know that Camus offer to correspond and exchange with an english school. I find that very interesting !

I'm aware of the european section is very hard but I think I feel me enough motivated to face.

Thanks for your time and attention.

Sincerely,

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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-06-2013 13:56

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Réponse: Aide /lettre motivation de lucile83, postée le 26-06-2013 à 14:11:30 (S | E)
Hello,
Corrections en bleu.

Dear Madam or Sir,

I write this letter to tell you that I am motivated to join the European Section.
I have already been in a European class since for two years and I think it has helped me a lot in English ! We have done lot of exposed a lot of presentations , especially about policy in the United States and United Kingdom.

I know I have weaknesses in am not very good at spoken English but I hope to am sure I will improve ,thanks to the European Section.

I would like to speak English fluently english because I love travelling and I would like to be understood everywhere. This summer, I am going for two weeks in to Plymouth with a friend to make progress in English. I know that Camus offers to correspond and exchange with an English school. I find that very interesting !

I'm aware of the European section is very hard but I think I feel me am enough motivated enough to face every difficulty.

Thanks I thank you for your time and attention.

Sincerely yours,

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Réponse: Aide /lettre motivation de jadany, postée le 26-06-2013 à 16:26:05 (S | E)


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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-06-2013 22:10

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