Correction oral/2e

Correction oral/2e
Message de math007 posté le 10-06-2013 à 15:57:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai un oral à préparer en anglais; je crois qu'il y a pas mal de fautes.
Est-ce que vous pouvez m'aider?

On Saturday I waked up at 8.30. As every Saturday I have to keep my sister to help my mother. I washed her, dressed her and then we wanted play in my garden. At 12.30 we eaten spaghetti and then my sister slept, I can study for my exams. At 20.30 my mother came back home and we watched tv till 22.30 and then I went to bed.The Sunday was a quiet day ... I got up at 21:30. I wash myself, I have a breakfast sandwich with chocolate, I played volleyball in my garden ... and 1:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m. I study. After eating I helped my mom do dishes. I could watch TV and play on my ordinateur.j went to bed at 21:00.

Merci beaucoup d'avance

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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-06-2013 19:16

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Réponse: Correction oral/2e de hushpuppy, postée le 12-06-2013 à 03:27:02 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Vous m'avez dit que c'est aussi dans le passé, donc faites attention parce qu'il y a des mots qui sont dans le passé mais pas à la bonne orthographe et des autres qui ne sont pas à la bonne conjugaison :
On Saturday I waked up at 8.30. Just like every Saturday, I have to watch my sister to help my mother. I bathed her, dressed her and then we wanted play in my garden. At 12.30 we eaten spaghetti and then my sister slept. I can to study for my exams. At 20.30 my mother came back home and we watched tv until 22.30 and then I went to bed.The Sunday was a quiet day ... I got up at 21:30. I wash myself, I have a breakfast sandwich with chocolate, I played volleyball in my garden ... and 1:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m. I study. After eating, I helped my mom do dishes. I could to watch TV and play on my ordinateur.j went to bed at 21:00.
C'est à vous

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