Correction/ cover letter
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Message de nico8012 posté le 19-04-2013 à 13:41:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis actuellement en 2eme année d'école de commerce et l'année prochaine, je souhaiterais partir à l'étranger pour un an.
J'ai donc fait une lettre de motivation et aimerais savoir si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à la corriger,
Cover letter :
Dear Sir or dear Madam,
After having discussed with the person in charge of the international relations of the university, on the opportunities offered to the students concerning studying abroad, I decided to fill in an application form. Highly interested, I propose you to examine my candidature.
I am currently doing a second year of a bachelor of marketing and international business at XXX (Paris Business school), and since I started my studies, I really would like to spend a year studying abroad. Since 2011 I have been working in XXX as a seller. And XXX offers me the opportunity to complete my bachelor in these two majors and get a double degree. I am fully aware that this opportunity constitutes an advantage on my resume, and that it will enable me to integrate professional life more easily.
Finally, on a personal level, I plan to take advantage of this experience abroad, to meet people and open my mind with the Irish culture, and make me discover a new way of living, and also a different working methods in the current globalized business world.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-04-2013 13:46
Message de nico8012 posté le 19-04-2013 à 13:41:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis actuellement en 2eme année d'école de commerce et l'année prochaine, je souhaiterais partir à l'étranger pour un an.
J'ai donc fait une lettre de motivation et aimerais savoir si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider à la corriger,
Cover letter :
Dear Sir or dear Madam,
After having discussed with the person in charge of the international relations of the university, on the opportunities offered to the students concerning studying abroad, I decided to fill in an application form. Highly interested, I propose you to examine my candidature.
I am currently doing a second year of a bachelor of marketing and international business at XXX (Paris Business school), and since I started my studies, I really would like to spend a year studying abroad. Since 2011 I have been working in XXX as a seller. And XXX offers me the opportunity to complete my bachelor in these two majors and get a double degree. I am fully aware that this opportunity constitutes an advantage on my resume, and that it will enable me to integrate professional life more easily.
Finally, on a personal level, I plan to take advantage of this experience abroad, to meet people and open my mind with the Irish culture, and make me discover a new way of living, and also a different working methods in the current globalized business world.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-04-2013 13:46
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