Learn French 100% free Get 1 free lesson per week // Add a new lesson
Log in!

> Log in <
New account
Millions of accounts created on our sites.
JOIN our free club and learn French now!




Get a free French lesson every week!

  • Home
  • Contact
  • Print
  • Guestbook
  • Report a bug


  •  



    Help/ informal mail

    Forum > English only || Bottom

    [POST A NEW REPLY] [Subscribe to this topic]


    Help/ informal mail
    Message from pds posted on 10-04-2013 at 07:52:42 (D | E | F)
    Hello

    I would like to send an email to a group of people to inform that I am in their city and wanted to say hi …
    Please, could someone help me putting it in a nice way…

    I am planning to write something like
    “Hey Guys,How are you doing ? I am in ** now .Just wanted to say hi to everyone..” ...but I feel it's very short and sounding rude.
    Please help.

    -------------------
    Edited by lucile83 on 10-04-2013 10:09


    Re: Help/ informal mail from catweazle, posted on 13-04-2013 at 10:33:30 (D | E)
    That would be quite acceptable.

    Personally, I wouldn't use "Guys" unless everybody is male.
    You have asked about their wellbeing which is polite.
    It would be fine to send as it is, but I might say something like:

    Hi Everybody
    Hope you are well.
    I have just arrived in ** (or "I will be coming to ** on Friday") and I'll be staying until Sunday. It would be great if we could catch up.
    Please get back to me if you're going to be around.





    Re: Help/ informal mail from pds, posted on 13-04-2013 at 11:12:26 (D | E)
    Hi,

    Thank you so much for the reply.Its a very well drafted mail.

    Regards,
    PDS







    [POST A NEW REPLY] [Subscribe to this topic]


    Forum > English only