Lettre motivation/correction
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Message de youcef87 posté le 24-11-2012 à 16:42:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je recherche des correcteurs afin de repérer mes erreurs. Vos points de vue me seront utiles.
Merci d'avance à tous.
Subject: Application for PhD. position
Dear Sir or Madam,
I Hold a master degree in Image Processing, I acquired solid knowledge in this area. Eager to continue my studies and reach the level required to excel in the fields of research, I propose my application.
I developed during my graduation project an application of “reconstruction and recognition of three-dimensional shapes”. This project allowed me to introduce me to research and confirm my interest in the fields of image processing and analysis.
After obtaining my bachelors degree in computer science, I turned to research in image processing through a Research Master in Computer Science at the National School of Computer Science (ENSI - Tunisia). This training has allowed me to develop my skills in mathematics, computer and processing and analysis of images.
The master thesis I have done is called “...”. This internship allowed me to enhance my skills and especially my interest in research in the fields of image processing.
The various themes of the team and the match between your work and my skills motivated me to send you my application.
Hoping that my training and my experiences will be answer to meet your eventual needs, Please find enclosed my CV. Thank you for considering my application and please do not hesitate to contact me if I can provide you with any further information.
I look forward to a prompt reply.
Yours faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-11-2012 21:30
Message de youcef87 posté le 24-11-2012 à 16:42:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je recherche des correcteurs afin de repérer mes erreurs. Vos points de vue me seront utiles.
Merci d'avance à tous.
Subject: Application for PhD. position
Dear Sir or Madam,
I Hold a master degree in Image Processing, I acquired solid knowledge in this area. Eager to continue my studies and reach the level required to excel in the fields of research, I propose my application.
I developed during my graduation project an application of “reconstruction and recognition of three-dimensional shapes”. This project allowed me to introduce me to research and confirm my interest in the fields of image processing and analysis.
After obtaining my bachelors degree in computer science, I turned to research in image processing through a Research Master in Computer Science at the National School of Computer Science (ENSI - Tunisia). This training has allowed me to develop my skills in mathematics, computer and processing and analysis of images.
The master thesis I have done is called “...”. This internship allowed me to enhance my skills and especially my interest in research in the fields of image processing.
The various themes of the team and the match between your work and my skills motivated me to send you my application.
Hoping that my training and my experiences will be answer to meet your eventual needs, Please find enclosed my CV. Thank you for considering my application and please do not hesitate to contact me if I can provide you with any further information.
I look forward to a prompt reply.
Yours faithfully
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-11-2012 21:30
Réponse: Lettre motivation/correction de bernard02, postée le 24-11-2012 à 17:01:14 (S | E)
Bonjour,
que voulez-vous dire par cette expression "Hoping that my training and my experiences will be answer to meet your eventual needs" ? Je ne comprends pas bien le verbe "answer" tel qu'il est formulé.
Cordialement.
Réponse: Lettre motivation/correction de youcef87, postée le 24-11-2012 à 17:15:39 (S | E)
Bonjour,
J'ai voulu dire: En espérant que ma formation et mes expériences peuvent répondre à vos besoins éventuels
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