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Correction/motivation européenne
Message de elody24 posté le 20-05-2012 à 13:35:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
quelqu'un pourrait-il corriger ma lettre s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour votre aide.
Dear Sir,
My name is Elody. I am fifteen years old. I come from I. school. Next year, I would be in a European section in your school because I'm interessed by foreign languages.
English is the language most spoken in the world. That's the reason why I used to choose this language. Later, I want to be scientific. If you accept me in this section I could prepare my future career. Later, I have ever been in England just for speak english with my school. I had speak to lots of english people. I love that! I am very interessed by the english culture too! I am so exited to go in England with your school... if you choose me!
I am a serious student. I am very curious and I work hard in all subjects!
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Elody.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-05-2012 13:39
Message de elody24 posté le 20-05-2012 à 13:35:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
quelqu'un pourrait-il corriger ma lettre s'il vous plaît ?
Merci pour votre aide.
Dear Sir,
My name is Elody. I am fifteen years old. I come from I. school. Next year, I would be in a European section in your school because I'm interessed by foreign languages.
English is the language most spoken in the world. That's the reason why I used to choose this language. Later, I want to be scientific. If you accept me in this section I could prepare my future career. Later, I have ever been in England just for speak english with my school. I had speak to lots of english people. I love that! I am very interessed by the english culture too! I am so exited to go in England with your school... if you choose me!
I am a serious student. I am very curious and I work hard in all subjects!
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Elody.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-05-2012 13:39
Réponse: Correction/motivation européenne de notrepere, postée le 20-05-2012 à 15:08:01 (S | E)
Hello
My name is Elody. I am fifteen years old. I come from I. school. Next year, I would
be in a European section in your school because I'm interessed by foreign languages.English is the language most spoken in the world. That's the reason why I used to choose
this language. Later, I want to be scientific. If you accept me in this section I could prepare for my future career. Later, I have ever been in England just for speak english with my school
. I had ___ speak to lots of english people. I love that! I am very interessed by the english culture too! I am so exited to go in England with your school... if you choose me!I am a serious student. I am very curious and I work hard in all subjects!
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon, and hoping for a favorable answer. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Réponse: Correction/motivation européenne de elody24, postée le 20-05-2012 à 20:13:55 (S | E)
merci!!
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