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Candidature/mail
Message de nelem posté le 19-04-2012 à 13:00:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en recherche d'emploi, et je voudais envoyer ma candidature spontanée par mail. Merci de me corriger ma lettre ci-dessous s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance.
Dear Sir
I am taking the opportunity to contact you, as I am highly interested in the multiple international transactions that realise your firm. His large structure is a great opportunity for a rich and diversified experience for me
My training in international trade and my experience in international transport, allowed me to realise different activities.
The companies with which I worked appreciated my capacities of adaptation and autonomy, my seriousness and my motivation. I also acquired a consequent commercial experience and the relation with the customers stays my major concern.
To this end, please see attached my resume.
I thank you in advance for your consideration of my enthusiasm to work at your company.
Sincerely
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-04-2012 13:12
Message de nelem posté le 19-04-2012 à 13:00:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis en recherche d'emploi, et je voudais envoyer ma candidature spontanée par mail. Merci de me corriger ma lettre ci-dessous s'il vous plaît.
Merci d'avance.
Dear Sir
I am taking the opportunity to contact you, as I am highly interested in the multiple international transactions that realise your firm. His large structure is a great opportunity for a rich and diversified experience for me
My training in international trade and my experience in international transport, allowed me to realise different activities.
The companies with which I worked appreciated my capacities of adaptation and autonomy, my seriousness and my motivation. I also acquired a consequent commercial experience and the relation with the customers stays my major concern.
To this end, please see attached my resume.
I thank you in advance for your consideration of my enthusiasm to work at your company.
Sincerely
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-04-2012 13:12
Réponse: Candidature/mail de bluestar, postée le 20-04-2012 à 11:55:21 (S | E)
Bonjour..
"Dear Sir" is not a good start. You need to find out the name of the person responsible for recruiting in the company and address your letter to him or her.If there is no such person, write to the chief executive.. Also you need to be more specific as to the kind of job you are interested in.
"Dear Mr.---
I have been highly interested in your company's operations for a long time and wish to be considered for any vacancy that arises in the area of ------. I believe that my background and training in international trade and transport would enable me to make a valuable contribution.
My resume is attached (the resume and the cover letter should complement each other . The resume is a record of employment, but the covering letter needs to highlight the individual contribution you made to each job you held. Be very positive about what you did.."I produced.." "I provided..." ..."I achieved..."....but don't claim anything you can't subsequently back up at interview)
My previous employers have valued my qualities of high motivation and performance, and my skills in customer relations. References are available if required.
Thank you for taking the time to review my credentials and experience. I look forward to speaking with you in due course.
Be sure to include all your contact details..Bonne chance!
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Modifié par bluestar le 20-04-2012 12:02
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