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Lettre motivation/BBC
Message de princessblood posté le 19-02-2012 à 17:41:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pourriez-vous me corriger cette lettre de motivation s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance pour votre aide!
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Leo d'Agata, and I am currently a student in third year of the license referred to “Sciences de la Vie et de la Terre – Biologie de l’Environnement “ at the Nantes’ University “Sciences et Techniques ».
I am contacting you today in order to know if there would be possible to make an internship at the BBC. Indeed, this course would correspond perfectly to the studies I perform and I would shape the course that I do in my University. Besides the interest I dedicated respect to my studies, and maybe professional, I consecrate a real intention to the theater animal since my early childhood.
Certainly, accomplish this internship would give me a true idea of the professional world in the domain of wildlife documentary. It would also allow me to improve my knowledge in biology, ecology and animal behavior more precisely and finally, to get a substantial personal enrichment.
Waiting for your answer that I hope favorable, I wish you to accept my most sincere thanks.
Yours sincerely,
Leo
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-02-2012 22:02
Message de princessblood posté le 19-02-2012 à 17:41:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Pourriez-vous me corriger cette lettre de motivation s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance pour votre aide!
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Leo d'Agata, and I am currently a student in third year of the license referred to “Sciences de la Vie et de la Terre – Biologie de l’Environnement “ at the Nantes’ University “Sciences et Techniques ».
I am contacting you today in order to know if there would be possible to make an internship at the BBC. Indeed, this course would correspond perfectly to the studies I perform and I would shape the course that I do in my University. Besides the interest I dedicated respect to my studies, and maybe professional, I consecrate a real intention to the theater animal since my early childhood.
Certainly, accomplish this internship would give me a true idea of the professional world in the domain of wildlife documentary. It would also allow me to improve my knowledge in biology, ecology and animal behavior more precisely and finally, to get a substantial personal enrichment.
Waiting for your answer that I hope favorable, I wish you to accept my most sincere thanks.
Yours sincerely,
Leo
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-02-2012 22:02
Réponse: Lettre motivation/BBC de stammer, postée le 19-02-2012 à 18:04:37 (S | E)
Hello,
I've highlighted where I think the meaning is obscured or where there are issues with grammar.
James
Dear Sir or Madam (il vaut mieux chercher un nom),
My name is Leo d'Agata and I am currently a third year student reading for a
I am contacting you today in order to know if it would be possible to undertake/font> an internship at the BBC. Indeed, this course would correspond perfectly to the studies I perform and I would shape the course that I do in my University. Besides the interest I dedicated respect to my studies, and maybe professional, I consecrate a real intention to the theater animal since my early childhood. This doesn't really make sense.
Certainly, accomplishing this internship would give me a true idea of the professional world in the domain of wildlife documentary. You need to mention that you want to do something to do with wildlife before the conclusion really. It would also allow me to improve my knowledge in biology, ecology and animal behavior
Leo d'Agata Full name
This isn't done on an online translator is it?
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Modifié par stammer le 19-02-2012 18:13
Réponse: Lettre motivation/BBC de princessblood, postée le 20-02-2012 à 09:50:58 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide!
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