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    English sentences/cover letter

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    English sentences/cover letter
    Message from kyal posted on 11-01-2012 at 14:30:18 (D | E | F)
    Hello,

    I'm a French student currently trying to get an internship in England and I've got some problems with my cover letter.
    There are some sentences I just can't get right so I would like to know whether it would be possible to get some help. Maybe they're already correct but.. I'm not sure anyway so I prefer to check.
    Here are the sentences :

    - As a student in Master « Languages and Intercultural Negotiations » at the Edam University
    (not sure about the "as a student" part)

    - Moreover, I'm someone really motivated concerning the professional field.
    (What I want to say is that I'm motivated about all the professional matters/environment and so on)

    - I send you this letter to demonstrate the interest I have for your enterprise.
    (not sure about how to phrase this)

    Thanks in advance.

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    Edited by lucile83 on 11-01-2012 14:39


    Re: English sentences/cover letter from may, posted on 12-01-2012 at 02:57:46 (D | E)
    Hello,

    I am trying to make sense what you would like to put here:
    - As a student in Master « Languages and Intercultural Negotiations » at the Edam University
    (not sure about the "as a student" part)


    The point is:
    It's not a sentence. It's a phrase.
    So if it's really a phrase as you would want, then the phrase must be completed after all, for example:

    As a student in Master « Languages and Intercultural Negotiations » at the Edam University, I......



    Re: English sentences/cover letter from notrepere, posted on 12-01-2012 at 03:59:51 (D | E)
    Hello

    - As a student in Master « Languages and Intercultural Negotiations » at the Edam University
    (not sure about the "as a student" part)

    As a master's student in ... at Edam University (no 'the' before Edam)

    - Moreover, I'm someone really motivated concerning the professional field.
    (What I want to say is that I'm motivated about all the professional matters/environment and so on)

    I don't understand what you mean.

    - I send you this letter to demonstrate the interest I have for your enterprise.
    (not sure about how to phrase this)

    I am sending you this letter because of the interest I have for your company.

    It would help to see your whole letter. It's hard to understand it from these short sentences.





    Re: English sentences/cover letter from yummysukey, posted on 19-01-2012 at 04:55:00 (D | E)
    Hello,

    - As a student in Master « Languages and Intercultural Negotiations » at the Edam University
    (not sure about the "as a student" part)

    - Moreover, I'm someone really motivated concerning the professional field.
    (What I want to say is that I'm motivated about all the professional matters/environment and so on)

    - I send you this letter to demonstrate the interest I have for your enterprise.
    (not sure about how to phrase this)


    The first sentence, if you mean that you've got a master degree in that discipline or you're trying to get one, so you can say [I am a student of Edam University who is major in Language and International Negotiations ]

    The second one,[Furthermore, I am the one who are competitive in doing the professional tasks and brave enough to face new challenges.

    The last one, [I am really interested in your enterprise and I sincerely hope that I can get the opportunity and become an intern of your company.I'm looking for forward for your reply.]

    Hope that I can help you.

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    Edited by lucile83 on 19-01-2012 08:05




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