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Message de j1991 posté le 02-05-2011 à 19:07:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois faire une lettre de motivation pour une université l'année prochaine et j'aimerais que l'on me corrige mes fautes s'il vous plaît
Merci d'avance!
Dear Madam, Dear Sir,
Presently, I’m a second year student of business and management in the European School of Advanced Management (ESAM) at Toulouse. I would like to make an international exchange during the second semester of my third year.
Hardworking, open minded and always willing to learn more, I think I will be able to study in Vilnius Law and Business College.
To have the chance to study abroad for a few months represent for me an enormous opportunity to develop my capacity in English and to discover a new approach of law and business. To be able to adapt and to develop a broader outlook on the world, are to my mind, two indispensable qualities for my future life.
One of the new members in the European Union Lithuania (Vilnius) is on my point of view the ideal destination to understand the importance of the European economy. Vilnius attracts me, due to its history, its culture and its geographical situation.
The idea of being in a new environment to pursue my studies represents for me a real envy. This experience will be for me an experiment very enriching as well at the professional level as personal.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
xxxxxx
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-05-2011 21:40
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Message de j1991 posté le 02-05-2011 à 19:07:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois faire une lettre de motivation pour une université l'année prochaine et j'aimerais que l'on me corrige mes fautes s'il vous plaît
Merci d'avance!
Dear Madam, Dear Sir,
Presently, I’m a second year student of business and management in the European School of Advanced Management (ESAM) at Toulouse. I would like to make an international exchange during the second semester of my third year.
Hardworking, open minded and always willing to learn more, I think I will be able to study in Vilnius Law and Business College.
To have the chance to study abroad for a few months represent for me an enormous opportunity to develop my capacity in English and to discover a new approach of law and business. To be able to adapt and to develop a broader outlook on the world, are to my mind, two indispensable qualities for my future life.
One of the new members in the European Union Lithuania (Vilnius) is on my point of view the ideal destination to understand the importance of the European economy. Vilnius attracts me, due to its history, its culture and its geographical situation.
The idea of being in a new environment to pursue my studies represents for me a real envy. This experience will be for me an experiment very enriching as well at the professional level as personal.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
xxxxxx
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-05-2011 21:40
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