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    Message from steve_vai0 posted on 16-12-2010 at 02:56:03 (D | E | F)
    Hello ,
    Could you please correct this these sentences ,
    and thanks a lot for your answers .

    - Everyday I walk to the school, and I arrive at 13:00 o'clock , I talk to my friend in English class , but we must be quit when the bell rings .
    - I like to be in Computer science's course, because it makes my brain works so hard than other course.
    - The programming's professor find a lot of difficulties explaining to us the lessons , indeed isn't easy to explain it's like Mathematics .
    - Director of the school decided to help us in our exercises every Tuesday morning .
    - I go always to the school after my work by train , sometimes I arrive before the rings of bell .
    - When our professor give us ten minutes of break , I take the opportunity to call one of my friends, just in order to forget the stress of the lessons .
    - when we hear from the teacher this phrase " This is the important thing in the lessons please pay attention" all of us look with attention and waiting what
    he would say after.

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    Edited by lucile83 on 16-12-2010 10:37



    Re: Sentences/corrections from notrepere, posted on 16-12-2010 at 03:24:38 (D | E)
    Hello!

    Could you please correct these sentences.
    Thanks a lot for your help.

    - Everyday [Two separate words; 'Everyday' is an adjective] I walk to the school, and I arrive at 13:00 o'clock [* see below], [period] I talk to my friend in English class , but we must be quit [spelling] when the bell rings.
    - I like to be in my Computer Science's course, because it makes my brain works [agreement] (so) hard [use 'hard' in the comparative form] than other course [plural].
    - The programming's professor find [present perfect] a lot of difficulties explaining to us [put this after 'the lessons'] the lessons[period] Indeed, it isn't easy to explain because it's like Mathematics.
    - [Article] Director of the school decided [present perfect] to help us in ['with' is better] our exercises every Tuesday morning.
    - I go always [put this before the verb] to the school after my work [put this after 'by train'] by train , [need a conjunction 'and' or a semi-colon] sometimes I arrive before the rings of bell [order of words: noun + verb].
    - When our professor give [agreement] us a ten minutes of break [Not very natural; a four-minute mile; a two-minute rest ...], I take the opportunity to call one of my friends, just in order to forget the stress of the lessons.
    - when we hear from the teacher [put this after 'this phrase'] this phrase[comma] all of us look with attention and waiting [Better: 'pay attention to'] what he would say [agreement] after next [colon] " This is the important thing in the lessons[comma] please pay attention".

    * You can say:

    13:00 hours
    1 p.m.
    1 o'clock p.m.
    but NOT 13:00 o'clock





    Re: Sentences/corrections from steve_vai0, posted on 16-12-2010 at 03:51:33 (D | E)
    thank you so much ..



    Re: Sentences/corrections from may, posted on 18-12-2010 at 03:49:42 (D | E)

    Hello,

    13h is fine, though.

    Good night,



    Re: Sentences/corrections from may, posted on 20-12-2010 at 02:48:13 (D | E)
    Hello

    And then we can say ...at 1 o'clock in the afternoon.

    Good night,




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