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    Correction/sentences
    Message from steve_vai0 posted on 15-12-2010 at 18:21:49 (D | E | F)
    Hello,
    could you please correct to me these simple sentences .
    Thank you for your answers.

    - My family don't like watching horror films , they like comedy films , My parents like watching most new films at the cinema ,
    - My mother likes stay at home when it rains
    - My father always repairs stuffs at home when he's not working and specially in Saturday
    - My brother likes playing guitar , it's his favorite hobby .
    - My mother is a great cooker.
    - The both of my little sister and brother are always fighting because of their games .
    - From time to time my father practice a shoot game .
    - My father take always time deciding to buy expensive things like car or television .
    - My mother likes ski sports .
    - I like my family when they are together at home, that's really rare .

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    Edited by lucile83 on 15-12-2010 19:27



    Re: Correction/sentences from gerondif, posted on 15-12-2010 at 19:35:22 (D | E)
    Hello,

    My family don't like watching horror films , they like comedy films , My parents like watching most new films at the cinema ,
    - My mother likes stay****(gerund, ing form) at home when it rains
    - My father always repairs stuffs at home when he's not working and specially in Saturday
    - My brother likes playing **** guitar , it's his favorite hobby .
    - My mother is a great cooker.(a cooker is the object you cook on, a cook is a person.In French ,both are "une cuisinière")
    - The both of my little sister and brother are always fighting because of their games .(I would replace both by each other placed after the verb)
    - From time to time my father practice a shoot game .
    - My father always take** time deciding to buy expensive things like *** car or *** television .
    - My mother likes ski sports .
    - I like my family when they are together at home, that's really rare .





    Re: Correction/sentences from notrepere, posted on 15-12-2010 at 22:46:03 (D | E)
    Bonjour!

    - My father ... [comme a dit gerondif/as gerondif said] ... working and especially in [wrong preposition] Saturday.

    - My brother likes playing guitar , [semi-colon] it's his favorite favourite hobby.

    - From time to time my father practises practices a shooting game. (like 'skeet'?)

    - My mother likes ski sports. [This sounds odd; one usually says 'My mother likes skiing/to ski'] Saying "ski sports" is like saying "football sports".

    - I like my family when they are together at home, that's really rare. I think what you mean is: I like it when my family is together ...

    Cordialement/Regards.

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    Edited by lucile83 on 15-12-2010 22:53
    This is the English Only forum np





    Re: Correction/sentences from steve_vai0, posted on 16-12-2010 at 00:34:41 (D | E)
    Thank you very much
    I appreciate it




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