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Message de gisouou posté le 10-09-2010 à 14:43:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
Voilà j'ai préparé mon CV en anglais pour le mettre sur internet car je compte partir bientôt là-bas pour travailler.
Je n'ai pas un niveau très élevé en anglais et je voulais savoir si mon CV était ok.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide!
Elodie
Adresse
FRANCE
PROFILE
I’am a motived, dynamic person. I have some experience in the restoration and I know how to work in team.
I look for from january 2011 an employment allowing me to use and to improve my skills in this domain while learning english.
EDUCATION
2006 BTS Assistante de Direction – Axxx equivalent to BETC Higher National Diploma (for Executive assistant)
2002 Baccalauréat Sciences et Technologie du Tertiaire (STT) option Communication et Commerciale (ACC) – Civray equivalent to an level specialized communication and commercial
1998 Brevet des Collèges – Vxxxequivalent to General Certificate of Secondary Education
Software : Word, Excel, Outlook, Powerpoint
Language : English novice level
WORK EXPERIENCE
Since 2009 Waitress – Traditional restaurant Parc du FUTUROSCOPE – Poitiers
(week-end) Raise and order tables
Bring plates
Cleanning
Since 2007 Assistant statutory auditor – Cabinet Sxxx – Poitiers
Realization of diverses documents (mails, reports…)
Legal follow-up of files
Management of the invoicing
Phone welcome
2006-2007 Secretary – Centre de Formation Fxxx
Banking link and invoicing
Reservations (plane, hotel, restaurant)
2004-2006 BETC Higher National Diploma Executive assistant by alternation -xxx
Transmission of the information and classification
Management of the schedules of meeting
Management of application files
2003 Apprendice waiter – Cafeteria xxx - Pxxx
Welcome of the customers
Hotesse of box
Cleanning
2001 Waitress – xxxrestaurant xxx – Txxx
(2 months) Raise and order tables
Welcome of the customers
Take control
Change plates and flatware so often as necessary
Present the addition
VOLUNTARY WORK
I am voluntary to the SOCIETY FOR THE PREVENTION OF CRUELTY TO ANIMALS, I walk dogs, participate in the display for the opened doors. I help to find a family for cats in association with the other associations.
PERSONAL
Contact :xxx
Mobile :xxx
of birth : xxx
Driving licence.
I left for England as long as au pair girl during three months.
CENTERS INTERESTS
Reading, gone hiking, footing
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Modifié par bridg le 10-09-2010 14:54
Message de gisouou posté le 10-09-2010 à 14:43:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
Voilà j'ai préparé mon CV en anglais pour le mettre sur internet car je compte partir bientôt là-bas pour travailler.
Je n'ai pas un niveau très élevé en anglais et je voulais savoir si mon CV était ok.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide!
Elodie
Adresse
FRANCE
PROFILE
I’am a motived, dynamic person. I have some experience in the restoration and I know how to work in team.
I look for from january 2011 an employment allowing me to use and to improve my skills in this domain while learning english.
EDUCATION
2006 BTS Assistante de Direction – Axxx equivalent to BETC Higher National Diploma (for Executive assistant)
2002 Baccalauréat Sciences et Technologie du Tertiaire (STT) option Communication et Commerciale (ACC) – Civray equivalent to an level specialized communication and commercial
1998 Brevet des Collèges – Vxxxequivalent to General Certificate of Secondary Education
Software : Word, Excel, Outlook, Powerpoint
Language : English novice level
WORK EXPERIENCE
Since 2009 Waitress – Traditional restaurant Parc du FUTUROSCOPE – Poitiers
(week-end) Raise and order tables
Bring plates
Cleanning
Since 2007 Assistant statutory auditor – Cabinet Sxxx – Poitiers
Realization of diverses documents (mails, reports…)
Legal follow-up of files
Management of the invoicing
Phone welcome
2006-2007 Secretary – Centre de Formation Fxxx
Banking link and invoicing
Reservations (plane, hotel, restaurant)
2004-2006 BETC Higher National Diploma Executive assistant by alternation -xxx
Transmission of the information and classification
Management of the schedules of meeting
Management of application files
2003 Apprendice waiter – Cafeteria xxx - Pxxx
Welcome of the customers
Hotesse of box
Cleanning
2001 Waitress – xxxrestaurant xxx – Txxx
(2 months) Raise and order tables
Welcome of the customers
Take control
Change plates and flatware so often as necessary
Present the addition
VOLUNTARY WORK
I am voluntary to the SOCIETY FOR THE PREVENTION OF CRUELTY TO ANIMALS, I walk dogs, participate in the display for the opened doors. I help to find a family for cats in association with the other associations.
PERSONAL
Contact :xxx
Mobile :xxx
of birth : xxx
Driving licence.
I left for England as long as au pair girl during three months.
CENTERS INTERESTS
Reading, gone hiking, footing
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Modifié par bridg le 10-09-2010 14:54
Réponse: CV anglais ok? de gerondif, postée le 10-09-2010 à 16:21:20 (S | E)
Bonjour,
I’am a motived(manque une syllabe), dynamic person. I have some experience in the restoration and I know how to work in a team. (français traduit: je sais faire se traduit par: I can work in a team, ou alors: I am used to team work)
I look for from january 2011 (a remettre devant)an employment (un emploi: a job, sera bien plus courant)allowing me to use and to improve my skills in this domain while learning english.
EDUCATION
2006 BTS Assistante de Direction – Axxx equivalent to BETC Higher National Diploma (for Executive assistant)
2002 Baccalauréat Sciences et Technologie du Tertiaire (STT) option Communication et Commerciale (ACC) – xxx equivalent to an level specialized communication and commercial
(ordre des mots à changer: a ................... level à la fin)
1998 Brevet des Collèges – xxxequivalent to General Certificate of Secondary Education
Software : Word, Excel, Outlook, Powerpoint
Language : English novice level (beginner?)
WORK EXPERIENCE
Since 2009 Waitress – Traditional restaurant xxx – Pxxx
(week-end)
Raise and order tables (dans quel sens ? raise dresser une table ? je pense que c'est un autre verbe) order: commander ou mettre en ordre ?)
Bring plates
Cleanning
Since 2007 Assistant statutory auditor – Cabinet xxx – Pxxx
Realization of diverses documents (mails, reports…)
Legal follow-up of files
Management of the invoicing / mot composé plus léger: invoicing management
Phone welcome (me semble bizarre: j'aurais dit: répondre et accueillir les gens au téléphone en mettant la même construction que votre "cleaning")
2006-2007 Secretary – Centre de Formationxxx
Banking link and invoicing
Reservations (plane, hotel, restaurant)
2004-2006 BETC Higher National Diploma Executive assistant by alternation -xxx
Transmission of the information and classification
Management of the schedules of meeting (nom composé commencant par meeting et se terminant par schedule)
Management of application files
2003 Apprendice waiter – xxx
Welcome of the customers
Hotesse of box (c'est une traduction de traducteur automatique: hôtesse de caisse (en bois !!)
Cleanning
2001 Waitress – xxx restaurant xxx
(2 months) Raise and order tables
Welcome of the customers
Take control (plutôt en ing, et le sens du verbe n'est pas clair)
Change plates and flatware so often as necessary (ing)
Present the addition (traduction de traducteur !!)
VOLUNTARY WORK
I am voluntary to (ne se dit guère: voluntary est un adjectif: I do volontary work for ...) the SOCIETY FOR THE PREVENTION OF CRUELTY TO ANIMALS, I walk dogs, participate in the display(exposition ?) for the opened doors ("journée porte ouverte"est traduit autrement par les dictionnaires en ligne !open day, open house, à intégrer dans une phrase compréhensible). I help to find a family for cats in association with the other associations.
PERSONAL
Contact :xxx
Mobile :xxx
Email :
of birth :xxx
Driving licence.
I left for England as long as au pair girl during three months. ( n'a pas de sens: as long as ne sert à rien, à supprimer. pendant + une durée = for)
CENTERS INTERESTS (traduction mécanique: essayez hobbies, pastimes, centers of interest
Reading, gone (à supprimer)hiking, footing n'existe pas tout comme zapping ou baby foot, faites un gérondif à partir du verbe to jog!
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Modifié par bridg le 10-09-2010 15:01
Réponse: CV anglais ok? de lamy, postée le 10-09-2010 à 20:51:15 (S | E)
Bonjour
Je me permets de compléter l’envoi de gérondif.
Vocabulaire :
1. la restauration (nourriture et pas remise à neuf de meubles) : catering (sans article)
2. English (majuscule)
3. débutant : beginner
4. dresser les tables : to lay tables
5. disposer (les tables): to arrange . To order = commander; to take orders:: prendre des commandes.
6. Realization of diverses documents : je dirais simplement: secreterial work (typing mails…)
7. Accueil au téléphone: je dirais: telephone operator
8. I left for England …: je dirais plutôt: : I went to England as an au-pair girl…
9. présenter l’addition: traduisez par: apporter.
10. Date of birth
Grammaire :
1. Je cherche un boulot depuis janvier 2010 : I have been looking for a job since January 2010 (dans cet ordre)
Bon travail !
Réponse: CV anglais ok? de gisouou, postée le 20-09-2010 à 17:03:54 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup!
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