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Correction lettre de motivation
Message de californiadream posté le 25-03-2009 à 17:22:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'aurai voulu savoir si c'est possible qu'on puisse lire ma lettre de motivation pour voir ce qui ne va pas et corriger mes fautes
Merci de votre attention
Dear Sir, Madam
I am writing to apply to your university my inscription in degree of law for my university/academic years upcoming 2009-2010.
Currently being (en classe de terminal scientifique option SVT), I realized how law studies suit me more.
Despite the teaching quality and the significance of scientific subjects, I quickly recognized/reckoned that I fairly was not motivated for those one, but rather for law studies and more precisely English law.
As a matter of fact, according to me, studying English law is either an opportunity or also luck to blend together my vocation and my importance which I always had for foreign languages. Indeed, I still was curious to discover the civilizations and the cultures of different countries, particulary Anglo-Saxons.
As a result, I will eager to get into/enter your university, naturally owing to its proximity/nearness/closeness (which is the better?) but above all for its fame. I am convince that it is essential to evoluate in a pleasant and favourable environment, spring(pour dire source) of motivation.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Message de californiadream posté le 25-03-2009 à 17:22:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'aurai voulu savoir si c'est possible qu'on puisse lire ma lettre de motivation pour voir ce qui ne va pas et corriger mes fautes
Merci de votre attention
Dear Sir, Madam
I am writing to apply to your university my inscription in degree of law for my university/academic years upcoming 2009-2010.
Currently being (en classe de terminal scientifique option SVT), I realized how law studies suit me more.
Despite the teaching quality and the significance of scientific subjects, I quickly recognized/reckoned that I fairly was not motivated for those one, but rather for law studies and more precisely English law.
As a matter of fact, according to me, studying English law is either an opportunity or also luck to blend together my vocation and my importance which I always had for foreign languages. Indeed, I still was curious to discover the civilizations and the cultures of different countries, particulary Anglo-Saxons.
As a result, I will eager to get into/enter your university, naturally owing to its proximity/nearness/closeness (which is the better?) but above all for its fame. I am convince that it is essential to evoluate in a pleasant and favourable environment, spring(pour dire source) of motivation.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
