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Message de lise26 posté le 04-03-2009 à 14:51:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Voici ma lettre de motivation pour un travail d'été comme serveuse à Londres, si quelqu'un peut y jeter un coup doeil pour supprimer les fautes, merci beaucoup.
Subject : Application for a summer job
Dear Sir or Madam,
With reference to your search by Sir and Madam ***** of Toulouse, I would like to aplly for the job as waitress. I am first-year student of in Company and Administration Management. I like the fields of communication, art and computing. In my spare time, I like the reading, the cake-making or the trip. I have a good contact human and relationships. If I worke in your restaurant, I would improve my English and finance my studies
I would like to work in England in your restaurant during the months of July and August.
Yours faithfully
Lise *****
Merci d'avance et bonne après midi
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-03-2009 14:56
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Message de lise26 posté le 04-03-2009 à 14:51:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Voici ma lettre de motivation pour un travail d'été comme serveuse à Londres, si quelqu'un peut y jeter un coup doeil pour supprimer les fautes, merci beaucoup.
Subject : Application for a summer job
Dear Sir or Madam,
With reference to your search by Sir and Madam ***** of Toulouse, I would like to aplly for the job as waitress. I am first-year student of in Company and Administration Management. I like the fields of communication, art and computing. In my spare time, I like the reading, the cake-making or the trip. I have a good contact human and relationships. If I worke in your restaurant, I would improve my English and finance my studies
I would like to work in England in your restaurant during the months of July and August.
Yours faithfully
Lise *****
Merci d'avance et bonne après midi
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-03-2009 14:56
titre sans abréviation
Réponse: Correction lettre de motivation de himai, postée le 05-03-2009 à 18:41:58 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Voilà les quelques erreurs que j'ai pu apercevoir.
Subject : Application for a summer job
Dear Sir or Madam,
With reference to your research by Sir and Madam ***** from Toulouse, I would like to aplly you for a job as waitress. I am a first-year student of a Company and Administration Management. I like the fields of communication, art and computing. During my free time, I like reading, to cook or to travel. I have a good human contact and relationships. If I work in your restaurant, I would improve my English and finance my studies
I would like to work in England in your restaurant during the months of July and August.
Yours faithfully
Lise *****
Bon courage et bon séjour.
Réponse: Correction lettre de motivation de lise26, postée le 05-03-2009 à 19:26:33 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de me repondre.
Bonne soirée
Réponse: Correction lettre de motivation de angiewhit, postée le 05-03-2009 à 20:31:41 (S | E)
J'espere que ce vous aidera:
With reference to your search by Sir and Madam ***** of Toulouse, I would like to apply for the post of waitress. I am a first-year student of company administration and management. I like the fields of communication, art and computing. In my spare time, I like reading, cake-making and travelling.
(I have a good contact human and relationships) Je ne suis pas sure que signifie ce phrase, peut étre: I have good communication skills)
If I work in your restaurant, I would improve my English and finance my studies.
I would like to work in England in your restaurant during the months of July and August.
Yours faithfully
Lise *****
Réponse: Correction lettre de motivation de lise26, postée le 06-03-2009 à 09:14:02 (S | E)
Merci à angiewhit de m'avoir aider
Réponse: Correction lettre de motivation de chachy, postée le 08-03-2009 à 13:09:33 (S | E)
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Amicalement
Chachy
Réponse: Correction lettre de motivation de californiadream, postée le 25-03-2009 à 17:14:46 (S | E)
Bonjour serait-ce possible qu'on puisse me corriger mes lettres de motivations svp.
C'est en fait pour une demande d'entrée en fac de droit
Si vous pouvez me dire ce qui va pas merci bcp
Dear Sir, Madam
I am writing to apply to your university my inscription in degree of law for my university/academic years upcoming 2009-2010.
Currently being (en classe de terminal scientifique option SVT), I realized how law studies suit me more.
Despite the teaching quality and the significance of scientific subjects, I quickly recognized/reckoned that I fairly was not motivated for those one, but rather for law studies and more precisely English law.
As a matter of fact, according to me, English law is either an opportunity or also luck to blend together my vocation and my importance which I always had for foreign languages. Indeed, I still was curious to discover the civilizations and the cultures of different countries, particulary Anglo-Saxons.
As a result, I will eager to get into/enter your university, naturally owing to its proximity/nearness/closeness (which is the better?) but above all for its fame. I am convince that it is essential to evoluate in a pleasant and favourable environment, spring(pour dire source) of motivation.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
