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Lettre de motivation (aide)
Message de soffien13 posté le 24-07-2008 à 13:37:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis à la recherche d'un stage pour mars 2009 en pays anglophone. Pour cela, j'ai rédigé une lettre de motivation et je voudrais avoir des avis, je pene qu'il y a des fautes et peut être que la mise en forme n'est pas non plus top...
Merci par avance pour votre aide!
Cordialement,
Soffien
work placement
For my diploma to become a Marketing Assistant, it is essential to have work experience in an English firm. I am hoping to work for an international firm and would be particulary pleased to have some training in your firm which keeps developing.
I am following a professionnal degree in «Marketing and International Plans» at University in Moulins(03000).A six-week experience period is a compulsary part of my course, and the report which I will write about my placement in your company will be presented orally for the examination.
Work experience in your firm would enable me to perfect my English, to cultivate me more to gain the knowledge of international business practise which I need.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm from March to June 2009.
serious and motivated, I would like to gain as much insight as possible into marketing. I will do my utmost to give you satisfaction hanks to my experience acquired from many training periods.
Yours faithfully
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Modifié par bridg le 24-07-2008 13:41
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Message de soffien13 posté le 24-07-2008 à 13:37:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis à la recherche d'un stage pour mars 2009 en pays anglophone. Pour cela, j'ai rédigé une lettre de motivation et je voudrais avoir des avis, je pene qu'il y a des fautes et peut être que la mise en forme n'est pas non plus top...
Merci par avance pour votre aide!
Cordialement,
Soffien
work placement
For my diploma to become a Marketing Assistant, it is essential to have work experience in an English firm. I am hoping to work for an international firm and would be particulary pleased to have some training in your firm which keeps developing.
I am following a professionnal degree in «Marketing and International Plans» at University in Moulins(03000).A six-week experience period is a compulsary part of my course, and the report which I will write about my placement in your company will be presented orally for the examination.
Work experience in your firm would enable me to perfect my English, to cultivate me more to gain the knowledge of international business practise which I need.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm from March to June 2009.
serious and motivated, I would like to gain as much insight as possible into marketing. I will do my utmost to give you satisfaction hanks to my experience acquired from many training periods.
Yours faithfully
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Modifié par bridg le 24-07-2008 13:41
Divers
Réponse: Lettre de motivation (aide) de cycookvenme, postée le 04-08-2008 à 19:26:26 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je ne changerais pas grand chose si ce n'est les détails suivants:
at the University of Moulins.
A six-week work period is a compulsary part of my course, and the report to be written about my placement will be presented orally for the examination.
Work experience in your firm would enable me to perfect my English, and to gain the knowledge of international business practise which I need.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm from March to June 2009.
Serious and motivated, I would like to gain as much insight as possible into marketing. I will do my utmost to give you satisfaction as I did during my many training periods (et là tu peux en mentionner certaines) with such and such...
Pense aussi à aérer ta présentation.
Si tu souhaites que je passe ta lettre à une copine américaine pure souche, je pense qu'elle serait d'accord. (message perso à m'envoyer).
Bonne chance!
