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Message de violet91 posté le 22-01-2008 à 12:51:35 (S | E | F)
Voici donc ce 3ème épisode..Je crois qu'il y en aura 5,finalement. Encore merci de votre engouement 
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Correction prévue le mercredi 30 janvier.
. Les dessous de la chambre 7 .
C'est donc à cette soirée très particulière que Marion et Sam firent connaissance et entamèrent leur ensorcelante histoire d'amour . Eux, comme tout autre invité d'ailleurs ,étaient, finalement ,sortis de chez les Castevet par la petite porte secrète au fond du jardin. "C'est plus commode pour tous" s'était esclaffée la belle rousse , bien éméchée , dans un rire aux étranges sonorités. Le couple tout neuf avait croisé les doigts pour que rien de mauvais ne leur arrivât!
Pour l'homme de sa vie, Marion renonça à quelques scrupules ! Elle s'échappait de son bureau pour telle ou telle raison. Une heure qui devint vite deux, trois, une fois par semaine, puis plusieurs. Avec ses qualités ,elle parvenait à ne prendre aucun retard dans son travail. Son patron lui gardait toute sa confiance,il est vrai.
Marion avait découvert l'amour : le vrai ! Dans une chambre--la sept, en fait--réservée à certains clients assidus d'un pub irlandais " Le trèfle à quatre feuilles " où ils buvaient d'abord :elle ,une" Marie-la-Sanglante ", lui un "Perroquet- sans -voix " .C'était un endroit branché dont Sam lui avait fait découvrir le charme dès leur premier rendez-vous.
Ce mardi-là,un 4 Juillet , il faisait chaud et humide. Ils étaient encore enlacés , le corps moite, à regarder tourner les lentes pales du ventilateur de plafond. Dans l'élan, Sam ne put s'empêcher d'avouer son mariage raté, son intention urgente de divorcer pour elle et son manque d'argent. Elle ne sourcilla guère tant elle l'aimait et le trouvait sincère. Comment pareil homme aurait-il pu être célibataire ? La crédule aux yeux bleus était subjuguée ,prête à tout pour vivre aussi intensément. Lui donner sa vie, même !
Peu à peu ,Marion se faisait différente...
Good luck to you all !
" Le trèfle à quatre feuilles ,
Assure mariage à la belle ! "
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Modifié par violet91 le 22-01-2008 20:05
Message de violet91 posté le 22-01-2008 à 12:51:35 (S | E | F)
Voici donc ce 3ème épisode..Je crois qu'il y en aura 5,finalement. Encore merci de votre engouement .Correction prévue le mercredi 30 janvier.. Les dessous de la chambre 7 .
C'est donc à cette soirée très particulière que Marion et Sam firent connaissance et entamèrent leur ensorcelante histoire d'amour . Eux, comme tout autre invité d'ailleurs ,étaient, finalement ,sortis de chez les Castevet par la petite porte secrète au fond du jardin. "C'est plus commode pour tous" s'était esclaffée la belle rousse , bien éméchée , dans un rire aux étranges sonorités. Le couple tout neuf avait croisé les doigts pour que rien de mauvais ne leur arrivât!
Pour l'homme de sa vie, Marion renonça à quelques scrupules ! Elle s'échappait de son bureau pour telle ou telle raison. Une heure qui devint vite deux, trois, une fois par semaine, puis plusieurs. Avec ses qualités ,elle parvenait à ne prendre aucun retard dans son travail. Son patron lui gardait toute sa confiance,il est vrai.
Marion avait découvert l'amour : le vrai ! Dans une chambre--la sept, en fait--réservée à certains clients assidus d'un pub irlandais " Le trèfle à quatre feuilles " où ils buvaient d'abord :elle ,une" Marie-la-Sanglante ", lui un "Perroquet- sans -voix " .C'était un endroit branché dont Sam lui avait fait découvrir le charme dès leur premier rendez-vous.
Ce mardi-là,un 4 Juillet , il faisait chaud et humide. Ils étaient encore enlacés , le corps moite, à regarder tourner les lentes pales du ventilateur de plafond. Dans l'élan, Sam ne put s'empêcher d'avouer son mariage raté, son intention urgente de divorcer pour elle et son manque d'argent. Elle ne sourcilla guère tant elle l'aimait et le trouvait sincère. Comment pareil homme aurait-il pu être célibataire ? La crédule aux yeux bleus était subjuguée ,prête à tout pour vivre aussi intensément. Lui donner sa vie, même !
Peu à peu ,Marion se faisait différente...
Good luck to you all !
" Le trèfle à quatre feuilles ,
Assure mariage à la belle ! "
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Modifié par violet91 le 22-01-2008 20:05
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de TravisKidd, postée le 22-01-2008 à 15:36:51 (S | E)
The Undies of Room 7
So it was on this particular evening that Marion and Sam met and started their bewitching love story. In the end they, like every other guest, left the Castevets' by the same little trap door under the garden. "It's more convenient for everybody," the beautiful redhead laughed out loud to herself, quite plastered, in a strange-sounding laugh. The brand new couple had crossed their fingers so that nothing bad would happen to them!
For the man of her life, Marion dropped certain inhibitions. She left her desk for such-and-such reason. One hour that quickly became two, three; once a week, then several times. Her boss trusted her completely, really.
Marion had discovered love: true love! In a room -- Room 7, in fact -- reserved to certain regular customers of an Irish pub "The Four-Leaf Clover" where they had their first drinks: she a bloody mary, he a "silent parrot"
. It was a trendy place whose charm Sam had made her discover starting with their first rendez-vous.This particular Tuesday, a July 4 (NB: Independence Day aux US!), it was hot and humid. They were again intertwined, with moist bodies, from the look of the fan blades. On an impulse, Sam couldn't help admitting his failing marriage, his urgent intention to divorce for her and his lack of money. She hardly raised an eyebrow she loved him so much and found him sincere. How could such a man have been single? Her blue-eyed trust was won over, ready to do anything to live so intensely. To give him her life, even!
Little by little, Marion was changing.
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Modifié par TravisKidd le 22-01-2008 17:11
minor corrections
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-01-2008 17:31
Comment deleted,there's no place here for that sort of joke,sorry.
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de lakata, postée le 23-01-2008 à 22:23:19 (S | E)
Hello, Violet, and thank you !
Underwear in room 7 / The hidden side of room 7 ***
So it was at that very unusual party that Marion and Sam met and their bewitching love story began. They, as every guest by the way, had eventually left the Castevets' house by the secret little door at the far end of the garden. " It's more convenient for everybody !", the attractive redhead guffawed, quite tipsy, in a strangely sounding laugh. The very new couple had crossed their fingers so that nothing nasty could happen to them.
For the man of her life, Marion silenced a few scruples. She slipped out from her office on some or other pretext. One hour, then soon two, three... once a week, then several times. She had still the complete trust of her boss, actually / Her boss kept still relying on her, actually.
Marion had discovered love : real love ! In a room - the room 7, by the way - the one especially reserved for some regular customers of an Irish pub "The four-leaf clover" (shamrock ?...since Irish...)where they used to drink first: she, a "Bloody Mary", he, a "Silent parrot". It was a switched-on spot, whose charm Sam had made her discover as early as their first rendez-vous.
On that Tuesday, a July 4, the weather was hot and muggy. They were lying still embraced, with moist bodies, looking at the slow blades of the fan. Carried along by his own impetus ( it sounds long, doesn't it ?), Sam couldn't help admitting his failing marriage, his urgent intention to divorce for her and his lack of money. She hardly turned any hair she loved him so much and found him so sincere. How could such a man have been a bachelor ? The blue-eyed innocent was fascinated, ready to do anything to live so intensely. To give him her life, even !
Little by little, Marion was changing...
*** Please, delete as appropriate...
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de ariane6, postée le 24-01-2008 à 01:00:26 (S | E)
Hello Violet!
The shady side of room 7
And so it was, at this strange gathering, that Marion and Sam became acquainted and began their bewitched love story. They, along with all the other guests, eventually left the Casavets' house through the small secret door at the bottom (end) of the garden. "It's easier for everybody" guffawed the beautiful red head, drunkenly, with a strange sounding laugh. The newly formed couple had crossed their fingers to ward off bad luck.
For the man in her life, Marion ignored some of her scruples. She used to escape from the office for one reason or another. One hour became two, even three once a week, then more often. It was true that her boss completely trusted her.
Marion had discovered Love : TRUE LOVE!
In a room, number 7 in fact, reserved for certain regulars of an Irish pub called "The four-leaf clover" they first used to drink: she a "Bloody Mary" and he a "Dumb Parrot". It was a trendy pub with charm, which Sam let her discover on their first date.On that Tuesday, on that 4th of July, it was hot and humid. They were still entwined together, their bodies were moist, watching the slow blades of the ventilator. In the excitement, in a row, Sam couldn't help confessing to his failed marriage, his intention to get divorced quickly for her sake and his lack of money. Marion didn't bat an eyelid, she loved him so much and she found him sincere. How could such a man be a bachelor? The credulous girl with blue eyes was captivated...ready for anything in order to live life to the full...even to lay down her own life.
Bit by bit, Marion was changing.
Thank you Violet!...
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de ndege, postée le 24-01-2008 à 11:19:08 (S | E)
Hi Violet!
Undercurrent (love) affairs in room #7 (
lousy pun?).So it is at this very peculiar party that Marion and Sam met and started their spellbinding love affair. They, like every other guest, eventually left the Castevets' through a little secret door at the end of the garden. "It 's more convenient for everyone" had the merry redhead beauty roared in a strange sounding laugh. The newly formed couple had crossed theirs fingers so that no evil would befall them.
Marion let pass a few scruples on the account of the man of her life (
) ! She would disappear from her office for such and such reason. One hour became quickly 2 then 3, once a week then more. Thanks to her skills, she managed not to fall behind with her work. True, her boss had full confidence in her. Marion had discovered love : true love! In a room - actually #7- set aside for some patrons of an Irish pub "The Four-leaf-clover" where they would drink first : she, a Bloody-Mary, he a Voiceless Parrot (
). It was a trendy joint, the charm of which Sam had revealed her at their first rendez-vous. On that very Tuesday, a 4th of July, it was warm and wet. They were still locked in an embrace, their bodies moist as they were watching the slow rotation of the ceiling fan blades. In the spur of the moment, Sam couldn't help admitting the failure of his marriage, his urgent intent to divorce for her and his lack of money. She was so much in love with him and found him so sincere that she didn't bat an eyelid. How such a man mght have been single? The blue-eyed naïve was bewitched, ready for anything to live so intensely. Even giving him her life!
Little by little, Marion was undergoing a change...
Thanks a lot!
See you!
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Modifié par ndege le 24-01-2008 11:20
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de maya92, postée le 24-01-2008 à 16:31:15 (S | E)
The unseen in room 7
So it was on this very special evening that Marion and Sam got to know each other and began their spellbinding love story. Like all the other guests, they had left the Castevets' by the small secret door at the bottom of the garden. "It's more convenient for everyone" had said the pretty, but tipsy, redhead bursting out in a queer sounding laughing. The brand-new couple had crossed their fingers for nothing bad to happen !
For the man of her life, Marion gave up some rules ! She left her office for such-and-such reason. One hour that quickly turned into two, then three, once a week then several times. Her boss still trusted her, that's true.
Marion had found love : true love !In a room -number 7 in fact- reserved for regular customers in an Irish pub : "The four-leaf clover" where they used to drink first of all : she had a "Bloody Mary" and he had a "speechless parrot" (a mute parrot - a wordless parrot - a dumb parrot..it's up to you and I'm sure that doesn't exist !)anyway a pastis + mint syrup. It was a trendy place that Sam had showed her from their first date.
This very Tuesday July 4th, it was warm and wet. They were still clasped in each other's arms, their bodies dripping with sweat,staring at the ceiling fan blades. In a surge of honesty Sam couldn't help confessing his failing marriage, his urgent intention to divorce for her and his lack of money. She didn't bat an eyelid as she was so much in love and considered him honest. How could such a man be a bachelor ? The gullible blue-eyed little thing was captivated, ready to do anything to live so intensely. Ready to give him her life !
Little by little, Marion was really changing..
Oh violet quel érotisme torride et quel suspense vite number 4 !
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de lucile83, postée le 24-01-2008 à 18:32:22 (S | E)
Hello
here's my try:The undersides of room 7
So it was on this very particular evening that Marion and Sam met and started their bewitching love story. They, as any other guest besides, had at last left the Castevets going through the secret small back-door of the garden. “It is more convenient for everybody” had said the beautiful and quite fuddled read-headed one in a laughter full of strange vibrancies. The new made couple had crossed their fingers so that nothing bad happened to them !
For the man of her life Marion got away from some scruples ! She would escape her office on some or other reason. One hour which quickly became two, three, once then several times a week. Thanks to her skills she succeeded not to be late in her work. Her boss, in fact, kept on trusting her.
Marion had discovered love: the true one! In a room--number 7 actually—the one reserved for some regular customers of an Irish pub “ The Four-Leaf Clover” where they would drink first a “Bloody Mary” for her, a “Mute Parrot” for him. It was a trendy place the charm of which Sam had made her discover as soon as their first date.
On that very Tuesday, a July 4, it was hot and damp. They were still embraced, clammy bodies, looking at the ceiling fan blades slowly revolving. On his impetuosity Sam could not help confessing his broken marriage, his crying intention to get divorced for her and his lack of money. She hardly raised an eyebrow so much she loved him and found him sincere. How could such a man have been single ? The blue-eyed unsuspecting girl was captivated, ready for anything which could make her life so intense. Even give him her own life !
Little by little Marion was changing…
See you
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de woodyrun, postée le 25-01-2008 à 06:10:35 (S | E)
Hello Violet !
Backstage room 7
So it was at this very particular party that Marion and Sam met and started their bewitching love story. In the end, they, as any other guest besides, had left the castavets’ through the small secret door of the back garden. ‘It’s more convenient for everybody’ had the lovely and quite tipsy red-head burst out laughing in a weird tone.
The brand new couple had crossed their fingers so that nothing bad would happen to them !
For the man of her life, Marion gave up a few scruples ! She would leave her office for such or such reason. One hour which soon became two, three, once a week, then several times. Thanks to her qualifications, she managed to never be behind with her work. Indeed, her boss kept on trusting her.
Marion had discovered love : real love : In a room , number 7 actually, reserved to some regular customers of an Irish pub ‘the Four-Leaved Clover’ where they used to have a drink first : she, a bloody Mary, he, a speechless parrot. It was a trendy place the charm of which Sam had made her discover at their first date.
On that very Tuesday, a fourth of July, the weather was hot and damp. They were still embraced, their body sweaty, watching the blades of the ceiling fan turn slowly. Impulsively, Sam couldn’t refrain himself from confessing his failed marriage, his urgent intent to get a divorce for her and his lack of money. She hardly batted an eyelid as she loved him so much and considered him sincere. How such a man might have been single? The blue-eyed credulous girl was enthralled, ready to do anything to live so intensely. Even ready to give him her life !
Little by little, Marion was growing different.
Violet, time for a coffe break now !
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de marie11, postée le 25-01-2008 à 09:53:57 (S | E)
Bonjour Violet91.
The hidden side of room 7.
It is thus in this very particular evening when Marion and Sam got acquainted and started on their magic love story. They, as quite other guest for that matter, finally left the Castevets' by the small secret door at the far end of the garden. " It is more convenient for all of us " the beautiful red-haired person,very tipsy, in a strange tones laughter had burst out laughing. The brand new couple had kept their fingers crossed so that nothing bad happen to them.
For the man of her life, Marion didn't burden herself with scruples! She escaped from her office for such or such reason. One hour which became fast two, three, once a week, then some. With her qualities, she succeeded in taking no delay in her work. Actually, she had the complete confidence of her boss. Marion had discovered the love: really, the genuine one! In a room - seven, in fact - reserved for certain diligent customers of an Irish pub « The four-leaf clover », where they drank at first: she,a "Marie-la-Sanglante", him a " Perroquet-sans-voix " . It was a trendy place the charm of which Sam had made her discover from their first meeting. On Tuesday, on July 4th, it was warm and wet. They were still intertwined, the clammy body,to watch turning the slow pales of the ventilator hanging form the ceiling. On an impulse, Sam was not able to refrain from admitting his failed marriage, his urgent intention to divorce for her and his lack of money. She hardly frowned so much she loved him and found him sincere. How would such a man have been able to be unmarried? The gullible girl with the blue eyes was utterly subjugated, ready for everything to live so intensely. Give him her life, even!
Little by little, Marion made different...
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de olisan, postée le 25-01-2008 à 16:14:41 (S | E)
Violet91, Je persévère dans le massacre...
The hidden face of bedroom number seven
So that is this evening very particular that Marion and Sam will meet themselves and to begin doing their entrancing love story. They, really other guest anyway were, finally, have go out by the little and secret door of the end garden. “It is very easy for all” has guffaw the beautiful red-haired, very tipsy, with a laugh strange voicing. The new couple has got their fingers crossed but noting bad way came them.
For the man of her life, Marion renounced to a few scruples! She got away her office for one or other reason. One hour became quickly two, three one time per week, then several. With her qualities, she got to take not delay in her work. Her owner saved his confidence for she, it’s true.
Marion has discovered love. The genuine! In a bedroom, the seven, in fact reserved to some of regular guests from a Irish-pub “the four-leaf clover” where they drank before :Her, one marie-brizzard and him one pastis with mint. It was a trendy charming place which Sam has discovered to her at the beginning of their first date.
On a Tuesday, the four, it was hot and humid. They were locked a tender embrace, sweaty body, to look, to revolve the slow blades of ceiling fan.
In a surge, Sam just had to confess it his wasted marriage, his urgent intentions to divorce and his lack of money. She did not bat an eyelid, she loves him so much . She found him heartfelt. How a unequalled man will have been unmarried? The credulous with the blue eyes was enthralled, ready for all for live so intensely. One’s life for him, so!
Gradually, Marion changed.
Il est temps que je prenne l'air...
Merci beaucoup
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de gee, postée le 25-01-2008 à 17:34:53 (S | E)
The hidden gimmicks of Room 7
So it was at that very uncommon party that Marion and Sam got to know each other and initiated a bewitching love story of their own. They had eventually gone their way out of the Castelet’s, as every other guests either, through the little secret door at the far end of the backyard. ”That’s more convenient for everyone” had burst out the pretty redhead, quite tipsy, with a weird sounding laugh. The brand-new couple had crossed their fingers so that no mishap could befall them.
For the man of her life, Marion silenced some scruples. She was now escaping her office on such-and-such pretence. A one hour leave that soon stretched to a couple, once a week that soon turned into several weekly leaves. Her boss was keeping on trusting her though.
Marion had found love, real love, in a room – the 7, in fact, reserved for specific regulars – of an Irish pub, The Four-Leaf Clover, where they used to start the booze by swallowing in one gulp, she, a Bloody Mary and he, a Dump Parrot. It was a trendy place under the charm of which Sam had put her from their first date.
On that very special Tuesday, July 4, it was muggy weather. Eventually composed, they lay still clasped in a fond embrace, skin moistened with sweat, staring at the revolving ceiling-fan blades. In a sudden fit of energy Sam couldn’t help admitting his wasted wedlock, his urgent intent to divorce for her sake, going up to confessing he was flat moneyless. She did not bat an eyelid, since she loved him and found him sincere. How could such a man have stayed a bachelor? The blue-eyed gullible young little thing was subjugated, ready for anything to live life to that full, even laying down her own life for him.
Marion was undergoing a gradual mutation.
Once more, thank you, Violet, for combining business with pleasure.
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de apau, postée le 26-01-2008 à 14:54:31 (S | E)
Dear Violet
Here is my so hard version !
The underwear of room 7
So it was on that very evening that Marion and Sam got to know each other and started their bewitching love story. They, like all the other guests, had finally left the Castevets' by the small secret door at the bottom of the garden. " It's more convenient for everybody " had said the pretty fuddled red-haired,in a laughter full of strange sounds.
The new couple had crossed their fingers for nothing bad to happen.
For the man of her life, Marion gave up her scruples. She left her office for such-a-such reasons. One hour that quickly became two, three, once a week then several times. With her qualities, she sommetted not to get late in her job. Her boss trusted her completely, in fact.
Marion had found love : true love ! In a bed-room - the number 7 (seven) - reserved for special visitors of an Irish pub " The Four Leaf-Clover ", were they drank before : she a " Bloody Mary ", his a " Mute Parrot ". It was a trendy place the charm of which Sam had made her discover from their first time.
That tuesday July 4th, it was warm and wet. They were still embrassed, their clammy bodies, looking at the slow blades of the ceiling fan. On his impetuosity Sam could not help confessing his failure marriage, his real intention to divorce for her and his want of money. She didn't turn a hair : she loved him so much and found him so sincere. How could such a man have been single ? The blue-eyed credulous-woman was captivated, ready to do anything for living with so intensity. Even give him her life !
Little by little Marion was different.
Je sors de ce texte, vidée de tout mon faible anglais, épuisée mais heureuse d'être arrivée au bout quoi qu'il advienne.
Merci tout de même Dear Violet !
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Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de alice, postée le 27-01-2008 à 09:58:40 (S | E)
Bonjour violet. Voici mon essai, plutôt ma tentative:
The hidden side of room 7.
So it was at this very particular evening reception that Marion and Sam met each other and began their bewitching love story. Then, as anybody else for that matter, had finally gone out of Castevets through the small secret door in the bottom of the garden. The pretty raid haired girl, very tipsy, with a strange tones laugh guffawed: it's more convenient for all of us. The newfound couple kept his fingers crossed that nothing bad should happen to them.
For Mister Right, Marion gave up a few scruples. She escaped from her office for some reason or other... One hour a day, then soon two, then three, then several. It's true, her employer still placed confidence in her.
Marion had discovered the true love. In a room, the 7 in fact, reserved for some regular guests of an Irish pub: the four-leaf clover where they first had a drink, she a bloody-Mary and he a parrot without voice. It was a trendy place of which sam had her discover the charm from their first date.
That Tuesday, a 4 July, it was hot and wet. They were still clasped in a fond embrace, the sweaty bodies, seeing the paddles of the fan. In enthusiasm Sam couldn't stop himself explaining his failed marriage, his urgent need to divorce for her and his lack of money. She hardly turned a hair, she loved him so much and thought he was sincere. How such a man would have been able to be single? The blue eyes credulous girl was captivated, ready to do everything to live so intensely. To give her life too. Little by little Marion was becoming different.
Et voilà l'travail! Travail c'est sûr mais résultats
. Je croise le doigts, je cherche un trèfle à quatre feuilles et un fer à cheval, en espérant que je pourrai bientôt boire du petit lait.
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Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de violette19, postée le 27-01-2008 à 18:22:42 (S | E)
Merci de me permettre de poster l'une à la suite de l'autre les traductions 2 et 3: Une nouvelle panne de connexion m'a en effet privée d'internet des jours et des jours ! "Ouf! Pourvou que ça doure ou plutôt ne doure pas !"
Traduction du 2 :
On Friday 13th at Castevet's.
At first, they had to pass over their hosts' front door by going under a large scale . When they had got in the hall, it was impossible not to see the disturbing black cat, with enigmatic eyes,pointed towards one'self, which was settling on violet cushions of ancestors'armchair .Some guest had suggested to bring an odd and cursed gift .Each one found it ,using imagination .
Marion had just been set on the left of the hostess with flaming red hair. Fortunatly,Sam managed to be sitting as near as possible by the pretty fair woman whom he had immediatly spotted . They were thirteen around the table . Some seemt not to mind it,others burst out laughing ! Hostess' best friend,a woman called Joan,had offered her knives . They talked informally about those stupid superstitions many people were encumbered by,as themselves were sneering at,and also of the surprising variants from a country to another . All of them sneering ? Was it true, indeed ? Anyway, they did all that's needed to bring about a curse .
During that time,Sam's charm was fully working . Marion,playful,tipsy by that fine champagne she was discovering, was drinking handsome brown haired's words.
To hell with superstition ! On one hand, ingenuousness was tottering, on the other, they both were attracted .
Sam gave Marion a rendezvous by phone for the next day . They would agree about a day very soonly,a nice hour and a cosy place where to keep they first tête-à-tête .
Traduction du 3 :
The hidden of the 7th bedroom .
So it was at that very special evening party Marion and Sam met and began their enchanting love story . Themselves, besides as every guest else, had, at the end, gone out of Castevets' by the secret small door,at the back of the garden .
"It's easier for everyone"had guffawed the beautiful red-haired ,tipsy a lot,whith a laugh that strangely sounded . The just formed couple had crossed fingers so that nothing bad should happen to them !
For the apple of her eye, Marion gave up a few scruples ! She used to escape from her office for a reason or another . One hour quickly becoming two,three,once by a week, then several . Thanks to her qualities, she succeeded in being never late in her work . Her boss was still trusting her,indeed .
Marion had discovered love : the true one ! In a bedroom -- the seventh,in fact-- kept for some assiduous customers of a certain Irish pub "The fourleaves clover" where they firstly used to drink :she,a "Bloody - Mary",he,a"Soundless- Parrot".
It was a trendy place which Sam had made her discover the charm of, at their first rendezvous .
On that Tuesday, on July 4th,it was hot and wet . They were still clasping one each other,their bodies clammy,looking at the slow blades of the ceiling ventilator . Still transported, Sam couldn't keep confessing his failed marriage, intending urgely to get divorced for her and his lack of money .She didn't frown much upon, so strong was her love for him, and so genuine he seemed to be . How such a man might have been bachelor ? The blue - eyed credulous one was subjugated, prepared to dare all for living so intensely . Give him her own life, even !
Little by little, Marion was going another .
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de nefertiti, postée le 29-01-2008 à 15:14:03 (S | E)
Hello Violet.
Underneath of the room seven.
So, it was during that very special evening that Marion and Sam met each other and began their bewitching love affaire. Them, like each guest besides, at last, went out from the Castevets' by the little secret door at the back of the garden. "It is easier for all of us" laughed the beautiful red-hair woman, quite tipsy, in a strange tones laugh. The new couple had crossed their fingers for no bad thing will happen to them.
For the man of her life, Marion gave up some scruples ! She escaped from her office for any reason. One hour which quickly became two, three, once a week, then several. With her qualities, she succeeded to take no delay in her work. Her boss kept all his confidence, it is right !
Marion had discovered the love : the true ! In a bedroom, the seven, actually, kept for some regular customers of an Irish pub "The four-leaf clover" where they had drunk at first : her, a "Bloody Mary", him, a "Silent Parrot". It was a trendy place whose Sam had shown her the charm form their first date.
That tuesday, a July 4th, it was hot and wet. They were still embraceed, their bodies were sweaty, looking the low blades of the ceiling fan which were turning. In the surge, Sam could not stop himself to reveal his failed wedding, his urgent plan to get divorced for her and his lack of money. She was not very surprised so much she loved him and found him honest.
How a man like him could be single ? The credulous womand with blue eyes was enthralled, ready for everything to live with so much intensity. To give her life, even !
Slowly, Marion was becoming different !
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de pivoine91, postée le 30-01-2008 à 17:32:13 (S | E)
Hello violet 91 !
About "Green (or white goose) and black undies" - the third part -
The undies or the mystery of the room number 7. Then, it's during this particular evening that Marion and Sam will get to know one another and start their glamorous love story. As any guest for that matter, finally they were yet gone outside the Castevets' house by the narrow and secret black door far end of the garden. "It's easier for everybody" had guffawed the lovely reddish-brown, well drunk, laughing with strange sounds. The new couple had crossed their fingers so that nothing bad occurred. For Mr Right, Marion sacrified some scruples. She escaped from her office for one or another purpose one hour which became soon two, three, once a week, then several. Thanks to her qualities she reached to take no delay about her work. Her manager keeps her his whole confidence. It's true. Marion was fallen in love : the true !. In a room - the number 7 - in fact reserved for some regular people of an Irish pub named "The four-leaf clover" where they drank first she a "Bloody Mary" and he a "Silent Parrot". It was a pub in (fashion) of which Sam had let her know the charm from their first love date. That Tuesday, one 4th of July, it was warm and humide climate. They were still embraced, their wet body, looking the slow blade of the fan which turned in the ceiling. Embarked, Sam couldn't stop himself to admit his missed wedding, his urgent plan to get a divorce for her and his lack of money. She hardly ever bated an eyelid because she loved him so much and thought he was sincere. How that man had had been bachelor (mon point d'interrogation ne fonctionne plus !). The blue eyed guillible was enthralled ready to live so intensively. Thinking even give her own life. Gradually Marion became diferent...
Ayant pris le train de l'histoire en cours de déroulement je vais reprendre les deux premiers épisodes tout en ayant hâte de connaître la suite!...cinq épisodes sont prévus et même peut-être davantage si l'auteur est en forme. Thanks for your "marrainage". This website is super ! What good idea !!!
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de coferam, postée le 30-01-2008 à 19:16:13 (S | E)
Bonsoir Violet91,
J'ai failli te manquer !
The undersides of the room 7.
So it was on very special evening that Marion and Sam met and started their love story. They, like any other guest, moreover, were finally exited Castevet in by the back door at the bottom of the secret garden. "It's more convenient for all" had laugh loudly the beautiful red, although fuddled, in a strange sounds to laugh. The couple were brand-new, so, they crossed the fingers that nothing bad they arrived.
For the man of her life, Marion gave up some scruples! She escaped from her office for one reason or another. One hour, which soon became two, three, once a week, then several. With her qualities, she reached don't take any backlog. His boss kept him all his confidence, it is true.
Marion had discovered love: true love! In a room - seven, in fact - reserved for certain faithful customers of Irish Pub "The four-leaf clover" Where they first drank , she "Marie-la-Blood," he "parrot-without a voice." That was a place connected which sam had discovered to her the charm from their first appointment.
This was Tuesday, July 4, it was hot and muggy. They were still wrapped-around ,the humid bodies, watching the slow turning blades of the ceiling fan. In the momentum, Sam could not help but admits her marriage failed, his urgent intention to divorce for her and his lack of money. She does not raised one's eyebrows as she loved him and was sincere. How can such a man would he be single? The gullible with blue eyes was subjugated, ready to do anything to live as intensely. To give him his life, even!
Dribs and draps, Marion was different ...
Merci, et à la prochaine !
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de violet91, postée le 30-01-2008 à 19:39:47 (S | E)
et grands 
à vous tous d'être nombreux,assidus,imaginatifs et bien en éveil face à une histoire qui prend de la saveur, voire d'étonnantes couleurs. Commençons par la trame de ce 3ème épisode.
1 ) Le titre: une histoire de dessous: undies (certains ne pensent qu'à "ça")ou plutôt..les mystères,la face cachée (les intuitifs,plutôt intuitives sentent venir le danger):secrets,mysteries,hidden sides,undersides,dark side.
2 )la chambre 7 est nommée :comme un nom propre:0 article : Room 7.c'est un fléchage de 1er ordre=art.défini,génitif déterminatif..
3 ) Etrange soirée: odd,uncommon,unusual,peculiar:tout cela est insolite. Pas particular,ni strange..qui ne rendent pas assez la bizarrerie.Surtout pas "special" qui veut dire unique,irremplaçable
friend,family,love,lover!)4 )Very peut accentuer l'endroit-même :that very party.We eventually understood that "Godard's film at the very end "Unfortunately,for me!!" Indeed!
5 )To meet=to make acquaintance with(latin) ."Moi,j'ai des connaissances"..dit Barbara! To make friends (ils sont au moins deux),comme "to shake hands with....:c'est la rencontre de deux mains. Le British a un côté très arithmétique:les hommes portent des chapeaux sur leurs têtes (vous compterez).
6 )bewitched =ensorcelé:bewitching :ensorcelant." Bewitched": "ma sorcière bien aimée".
7) Anybody,anyone,any :n'importe..Four people called Somebody,Anybody,Nobody and Everybody were asked to do an important task .Anybody could have done what nobody did ,in fact..
8 )Pratique : (un)convenient ,handy,practical (useful in practice) :j'ai préféré "better"pour charger d'un soupçon de sorcellerie!
9 ) Devilish, sardonic attachés aux rires de la belle rousse :flaming-red-haired hostess.
10 )Eclater de rire : cela explose ,donc vers l'extérieur : to burst out +gérondif=to burst out laughing (ici) ou crying (ailleurs)= to guffaw (aucune retenue)
11 ) Bien éméchée : very tipsy, almost drunk (point de vue!)pas giddy = étourdie par le vertige.
12 ) A brand new car : bien rutilante! A newly formed couple. A brand new couple me paraît matériel..
13 ) Bad :mauvais et "diabolique" .Nasty : méchant. Evil: le Mal .Main droite =Go(o)d # main gauche = Evil .Comme Love and Hatred dans "The night of the Hunter" ,another masterpiece by Charles Laughton.1955.
14 )Incident: To occur (latin),to happen (cf.perhaps.(per:latin:à travers)peut-être survenant)# to arrive,to come up,down,along (pts de vue)et le vouloir.
15 ) An hour (h)muet)affaiblit un peu la durée de "one hour"..et pourtant.One octroyée ,c'était déjà bien,deux ,trois.et puis quoi,encore ? "oie blanche" on a dit ? "dessous noirs " aussi,remarquez.Il ne fallait pas que Sam "réveille l'eau qui dort."
16 )Zealous,talented,gifted Marion.(as a secretary I mean so far).
17 ) La prunelle de ses yeux : c'est joli "the apple of her eye" .Mr Right est l'homme idéal! "ca n'existe pas,ça n'existe pas ...et pourquoi pas ? "Et peut-être que ce Mr Right (Sam) is wrong.Son amour :LOVE. TRUE LOVE;le vrai,le seul ,l'unique . "C'est SON homme" le genuine: l'authentique (comme le pur cuir)."My Lord(17th century),my lady"....et Milady.
18 )true--truth--trust (confiance totale)--trusted love,friend. To trust sdy: faire confiance .
19 ) A secretary's job: génitif générique :catégoriel.
20 ) Her manager/ her boss/ her Head.
21 ) To discover (elle ne s'y attendait pas ).To find : elle le cherchait ,elle l'a trouvé. To be revealed :plus concret.
22 )A bedroom = a room dans le contexte . le pub est respectable :certains offrent le repas et la chambre.Rooms to let .No vacancies. # Room (non comptable):de la place.Enough room to park your car ? "No room,no room for you ,Alice!",not "our"alice.(" in Wonderland" L.Carroll)
23 ) Réserver :to book a seat (spectacle),a trip, a table .To reserve something for future use. (Un)available : à la disposition,disponible (ou pas )
24 )
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de violet91, postée le 30-01-2008 à 20:38:01 (S | E)
..j'ai bientôt terminé.. Merci d'être si attentionnés envers moi.24 ) Je disais :Lewis Carroll (cf22):"The mad tea party" in "Alice's Adventures in Wonderland".1865. Révérend Charles Dodgson, professeur émérite de Mathématiques (oxford)avait pour amis les Liddel(s) et surtout leur fillette à qui il racontait des "nonsense stories". Le livre est truffé de formules mathématiques qui "se cassent la figure" quand elles sont mises en mots [ un chien qui remue la queue est content = un chat qui remue la queue n'est pas content du tout.) .Donc , ces vilains animaux ne voulaient pas laisser de place à petite Alice Liddel . Il existe un test de psycho où la ronde est fermée serré et vous devez tout faire pour entrer dans le groupe social.(charme,force,clownerie,.).Il faut réussir à s'insérer en société!..
Pour finir avec "room", je dirai roomy = spacious.
25 ) Les Cocktails :vous saviez tout sur le "Bloody Mary"(Mary Tudor,la sanglante et maudite d'avoir fait couler le sang = tomato juice + gin..mais le Perroquet-sans -Voix..évidemment ,maya,cela n'existe pas .mais il y a quelques connaisseurs sur ce site "Parrot",oui ("pastis ou ricard
.je vais être censurée!+ grenadine ou menthe,non?.Mon Parrot est muet : il faut le trouver : dumb (b..muet!)de naissance(mais pas sourd: deaf),il est saisi,en reste coi :silent(il est sage et méditatif),mute(ils ont appuyé sur le bouton),soundless (pas d'autre bruit que des mots svp),speechless(on dit bien le Perchoir,à l'Assemblée),voiceless et tongueless :on lui a coupé "le sifflet"et les cordes qui vont avec. Shakespeare dirait aujourd'hui ,dans son dernier tube "Paaarle-moi-pâs!""Talk-me-not". Vous connaissez le joli "forget-me-not". Moi,je n'ai pas voulu qu'il leur parle...26 ) "Wet!Wet! Wet!" late rock group. Mouillé! C'est trop! Damp :humide,tropical..suffira.
27 ) la moiteur; être moite : sticky (ça colle!): sweaty :il fait chaud et leurs deux corps (bodies)ont fait de l'exercice.
28 ) Embrasser (17th century) et chez Molière : prendre dans ses bras : to embrace. To entwine. To clasp one another (ils se tiennent bien,bien ,bien).
29 )a blade :une lame (rasoir),lamelle (store),pale .A fan ( vient du "vent"):un éventail(de lady Windermere),un ventilateur # air conditioned. Air conditioning.
30 ) The ceiling [si:lin(g)]:le plafond .Vous n'avez pas une spider on the ceiling ,mais une chauve-souris (bat) dans le beffroi(belfry).Si c'était le cas.
31 ) Son élan: transport, emotional pulse .
32 ) une épave : a wreck .un délabrement: a wreckage .un échec:a failure. Raté: failed.# successful.
33 ) To lack (il lui manque toujours de l'argent à Sam.et un "petit-je -ne sais- quoi -un presque-rien"(Jankelevitch)= to want :être en manque. To need so much.
34 )Marion est "sous le joug" de son homme qu'elle "a dans la peau" . Elle l'aime comme une "bête"(pardon me) sous le joug et avance, avance..Love is blind,you know. Et,elle , en plus, elle a des oeillères. Subjugated: bravo violette19 et marie11. On les voit les littéraires ! On dirait "esclavagée".
35 ) No doubt (b muet): indubitablement (latin)..A debt (b..muet):une dette.
36 ) To yield : céder (c'est fait!).To change. To turn into somebody else .
37 ) Step by step (si l'on danse avec elle); gradually (si l'on aime la chimie)...et little by little . To break : se rompre,se fissurer (to crack).
d'avoir tenu bon.-------------------
Modifié par violet91 le 30-01-2008 20:41
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de violet91, postée le 30-01-2008 à 22:12:04 (S | E)
Voilà ce que vous attendez patiemment et gentiment : merci . Comme d'habitude, vos propres essais ont été un plaisir pour moi. Ma proposition alors que vous passez à table ou digérez :
. THE DARK SIDE OF ROOM 7 .
Thus , it was at that very peculiar party Marion and Sam had made acquaintance and opened their spellbound love story .
They, as any other guest in fact,had finally left the Castevets' place walking down the back garden at the very end of which stood a small hidden door. "So much better for all!" the beautiful flaming-red-haired hostess quite tipsy(fuddled), had guffawed with a sort of sardonic sounding laugh. The newly formed couple had kept their fingers crossed so that nothing bad should ever happen to them.
For THE man of her life, Marion dropped some scruples of hers ! She would vanish from her office for such or such reason . One hour soon stretched to two,then three, once a week, then several times. Zealous as she had always been, she managed not to catch any delay in doing her work. Her boss trusted her anyway. No doubt about that.
Marion had just discovered LOVE : TRUE LOVE . In a room---number 7,in fact--which was available for some regular customers of an Irish pub called "The four-leaved shamrock "(four-leaf clover).They usually started , she, with a "Bloody Mary" and he , with a "Talk-me-not Parrot!!" That was a trendy place the charm of which Sam had let her know from their first rendez-vous.
On that particular Tuesday, July 4th (the fourth),the weather was hot and damp. They were lying ,relaxed, with their bodies still embraced and sweaty , both gazing at the slow-moving blades of the ceiling-fan. In a surge of love for her, he felt unable to restrain himself from confessing his wrecked marriage, his strongest will to divorce for her sake and his lack of money. She hardly batted an eyelid : she was so much in love with him and believed him so sincerely. How could such a man have remained a bachelor ? That blue-eyed little thing was absolutely subjugated , ready to do anything for such intense everlasting days with him ! Even, to give him her own life !
Little by little, Marion's innocence was breaking....
et pour votre douce patience. L'oie blanche aux dessous noirs va bientôt s'envoler. A vos postes ! A demain, "si vous le voulez bien".
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de woodyrun, postée le 31-01-2008 à 14:50:51 (S | E)
Violet !Quelle énergie et quel cours !
Impossible de résister à l'appel du numéro 4 !
Many many thanks again !
Réponse: 'oie blanche ,dessous noirs'3 T de apau, postée le 31-01-2008 à 15:03:09 (S | E)
Hello Dear Violet,
This is a message for your little " Marie " and you !
Merci mille fois de ton imagination, si drôle, si riche, c'est un vrai plaisir de travailler pour tes textes.
Je ris beaucoup à chaque fois, tout en étant émue de ce bel amour en formation...
See you soon Dear Teacher !
