Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14

Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14
Message de here4u posté le 16-08-2024 à 10:39:28 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Here is an easy exercise that everyone can do.

Toujours en pause sur l’ exercice d’EXPRESSION Let's Suggest tel qu’il était à l'origine…
C'est à nouveau la " nouvelle formule ", surtout que les vacances se terminent, maintenant... Il va falloir penser à le Rentrée, doucement... Alors profitons de nos derniers jours... J'espère que vous aurez néanmoins le temps de nous écrire quelques lignes...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement. ) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pouvez répondre.

1. Social networks represent and give Freedom...

2. 'Every cloud has a silver lining': Comment.

3. Music is a universal foreign language and unites people.

4. Telling lies? Telling the truth? Some truths are better left unspoken... Do you agree?

Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… et je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !) le mardi 27 août 2024 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de here4u, postée le 17-08-2024 à 10:14:38 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Here are the first answers... Some of you were in the starting blocks!

ANSWERS A: please, indicate possible mistakes , and underline what you think is clumsy...

Topic 2: Every cloud has a silver lining is one of my favourite motto.
It means that sometimes adversity allows us to grow, it's in pain that we give birth and the diamond needs to be cut to shine.
Clinging to this saying is a positive reaction that helps us to endure suffering. Nothing lasts, everything passes, everything breaks and is transformed and after the rain comes the good weather. It is misfortune that makes us appreciate moments of joy. Put your back into adversity and go for happiness, live every second to the full. Oh yes, this motto is a good lesson in optimism. environ 100 mots

Topic 1: Social networks is far from being a freedom, it's more like an addiction and pollution. As soon as you sign up to one of these networks you receive hundreds of adverts and countless invitations from virtual friends. You spend your time telling millions of strangers about your life. On the other hand, some smart guys are making a fortune out of it, so it's not such a bad thing. 70 mots

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de gerold, postée le 18-08-2024 à 11:10:32 (S | E)
Hello you all!

ANSWERS A: please, indicate possible mistakes , and underline what you think is clumsy...

Topic 2: Every cloud has a silver lining is one of my favourite motto.
It means that sometimes adversity allows us to grow, it's in pain that we give birth and the diamond needs to be cut to shine.
Clinging to this saying is a positive reaction that helps us to endure suffering. Nothing lasts, everything passes, everything breaks and is transformed and after the rain comes the good weather. It is misfortune that makes us appreciate moments of joy. Put your back into adversity and go for happiness, live every second to the full. Oh yes, this motto is a good lesson in optimism. environ 100 mots

Topic 1: Social networks is far from being a freedom, it's more like an addiction and pollution. As soon as you sign up to one of these networks you receive hundreds of adverts and countless invitations from virtual friends. You spend your time telling millions of strangers about your life. On the other hand, some smart guys are making a fortune out of it (meaning?), so it's not such a bad thing. 70 mots

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de here4u, postée le 21-08-2024 à 12:57:15 (S | E)
Hello dears,

No green? I'll post ANSWER B tonight.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de gerold, postée le 21-08-2024 à 17:54:40 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWERS A: please, indicate possible mistakes , and underline what you think is clumsy...

Topic 2: Every cloud has a silver lining is one of my favourite (mottos (or mottoes).
It means that sometimes adversity allows us to grow, it's in pain that we give birth and the diamond needs to be cut to shine.
Clinging to this saying is a positive reaction that helps us to endure suffering. Nothing lasts, everything passes, everything breaks and is transformed and after the rain comes the good weather. It is misfortune that makes us appreciate moments of joy. Put your back into adversity I think something positive is necessary here, life e.g. and go for happiness, live every second to the full. Oh yes, this motto is a good lesson in optimism. environ 100 mots

Topic 1: Social networks (are far from being a freedom, it's more like an addiction and pollution. As soon as you sign up to one of these networks you receive hundreds of adverts and countless invitations from virtual friends. You spend your time telling millions of strangers about your life. On the other hand, some smart guys are making a fortune out of it (out of your life? or out of them = social networks)), so it's not such a bad thing. 70 mots

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de here4u, postée le 21-08-2024 à 23:33:12 (S | E)
Hello dears!

for your suggestions, gerold!

ANSWER B: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what you think is clumsy.

Topic 4. Telling lies? Telling the truth? Some truths are better left unspoken... Do you agree?

Not telling the truth may sometimes appear as the best solution to prevent someone of being hurt. But this a short-term solution as the longest the truth keeps hidden, the hardest the damage would be when it is unveiled. To the pain of the truth itself, is added the harm of being kept in secret, the feeling of betrayal and the lack of confidence.
So I think it is better to face the reality, take responsibility and say the truth. That does not mean telling the truth carelessly but finding the right moment and place to tell the truth with consideration and respect. 103 words.

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de gerold, postée le 22-08-2024 à 19:20:01 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER B: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what you think is clumsy.

Topic 4. Telling lies? Telling the truth? Some truths are better left unspoken... Do you agree?

Not telling the truth may sometimes appear as the best solution to prevent someone of being hurt. But this a short-term solution as the longest the truth keeps hidden, the hardest the damage would be when it is unveiled. To the pain of the truth itself, is added the harm of being kept in secret, the feeling of betrayal and the lack of confidence.
So I think it is better to face the reality, take responsibility and say the truth. That does not mean telling the truth carelessly but finding the right moment and place to tell the truth with consideration and respect. 103 words.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de here4u, postée le 26-08-2024 à 00:14:10 (S | E)
Hello dears!

No suggestions in green? for your effort!

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de gerold, postée le 26-08-2024 à 11:31:15 (S | E)
Hello

ANSWER B: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what you think is clumsy.

Topic 4. Telling lies? Telling the truth? Some truths are better left unspoken... Do you agree?

Not telling the truth may sometimes appear as the best solution to prevent someone of being hurt. But this a short-term solution as the longest the truth keeps hidden, the hardest the damage would be when it is unveiled. To the pain of the truth itself, is added the harm due to the fact of not knowing something, the feeling of betrayal and the lack of confidence are added.
So I think it is better to face the reality, take responsibility and say the truth (usually we "tell" the truth, is "say the truth" acceptable too?. That does not mean telling the truth carelessly but finding the right moment and place to tell the truth with consideration and respect. 103 words.

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Réponse : Let's Suggest 68 /Let's take a break 14 de here4u, postée le 27-08-2024 à 23:14:19 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here are your corrections (indications and suggestions) of the texts you wrote!


ANSWERS A: initial text and my preliminary indications.

Topic 2 : Every cloud has a silver lining is one (of my favourite (motto.(voc et grammaire)
It means that sometimes adversity allows us to grow, it's in pain that we give birth and the diamond needs to be cut to shine.
Clinging to this saying B is a positive reaction that helps us to endure suffering. Nothing lasts, everything passes, everything breaks and is transformed and after the rain comes the good weather.(It should be the opposite!) It is misfortune that makes us appreciate moments of joy. (Put your back (into adversity and go for happiness, live every second to the full B . Oh yes, this (motto is a good lesson in optimism. environ 100 mots Bien !

Topic.1 : Social networks (is far from being (a freedom, it's more like an addiction and pollution. As soon as you sign up to one of these networks you receive hundreds of adverts and countless invitations from virtual friends. You spend your time telling millions of strangers about your life. On the other hand, some smart guys are making a fortune out of (it ??? , so it's not such a bad thing. ??? Pas très clair ! 70 mots (Does money justify anything?)

ANSWERS A: gerold's indications.

Topic 2: Every cloud has a silver lining is one (of my favourite motto.
It means that sometimes adversity allows us to grow, it's in pain that we give birth and the diamond needs to be cut to shine.
Clinging to this saying is a positive reaction that helps us to endure suffering. Nothing lasts, everything passes, everything breaks and is transformed and after the rain comes the good weather. It is misfortune that makes us appreciate moments of joy. Put your back into adversity and go for happiness, live every second to the full. Oh yes, this (motto is a good lesson in optimism. environ 100 mots Bonnes remarques !

Topic 1: Social networks is far from being a freedom, it's more like an addiction and pollution. As soon as you sign up to one of these networks you receive hundreds of adverts and countless invitations from virtual friends. You spend your time telling millions of strangers about your life. On the other hand, some smart guys are making a fortune out of it (meaning?), so it's not such a bad thing. ??? 70 mots
De bonnes indications. Merci

ANSWERS A: gerold's suggestions

Topic 2: Every cloud has a silver lining is one of my favourite (mottos (or mottoes).(You should have explained this 'or'!)
It means that sometimes adversity allows us to grow, it's in pain that we give birth and the diamond needs to be cut to shine.
Clinging to this saying is a positive reaction that helps us to endure suffering. Nothing lasts, everything passes, everything breaks and is transformed and after the rain comes the good weather. It is misfortune that makes us appreciate moments of joy. Put your back into adversity I think something positive is necessary here, life e.g. and go for happiness, live every second to the full. Oh yes, this motto is a good lesson in optimism. environ 100 mots Bonnes suggestions.

Topic 1: Social networks (are far from being a freedom, it's more like an addiction and pollution. As soon as you sign up to one of these networks you receive hundreds of adverts and countless invitations from virtual friends. You spend your time telling millions of strangers about your life. On the other hand, some smart guys are making a fortune out of it (out of your life? or out of them = social networks)), so it's not such a bad thing. 70 mots
De bonnes suggestions.

- RETENIR : ‘one of’ introduit forcément un pluriel. One of my friends/ one of my favourite books/ one of his films/
Pour le reste, je ne comprends pas pourquoi l'auteure ne donne que des faits "réalistes", négatifs, et passe soudain à un fait positif 'le beau temps qui revient après la pluie). Nothing lasts, everything passes, everything breaks alors que son propos était de démontrer que les belles choses sont faites avec difficultés... Un détail ! Bonnes expressions et bonnes corrections !


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ANSWER B: initial text and preliminary indications

Topic 4. Telling lies? Telling the truth? Some truths are better left unspoken... Do you agree?

Not telling the truth may sometimes appear as the best solution to prevent someone of being hurt. But this a short-term solution as the longest the truth keeps hidden, the hardest the damage would be when it is unveiled. To the pain of the truth itself, is added the harm of being kept in secret, the feeling of betrayal and the lack of confidence.
So I think it is better to face the reality, take responsibility and say the truth. That does not mean telling the truth carelessly but finding the right moment and place to tell the truth with consideration and respect.(incomplete sentence!) 103 words.

ANSWER B:

Topic 4. Telling lies? Telling the truth? Some truths are better left unspoken... Do you agree?

Not telling the truth may sometimes appear as the best solution to prevent someone of being hurt. But this XX a short-term solution as the longest the truth keeps hidden, the hardest the damage would be when it is unveiled. To the pain of the truth itself, is added the harm of being kept in secret, the feeling of betrayal and the lack of confidence.
So I think it is better to face the reality, take responsibility and say the truth. That does not mean telling the truth carelessly but finding the right moment and place to tell the truth with consideration and respect. 103 words. Bonne expression in spite of a little slip...

ANSWER B:

Topic 4. Telling lies? Telling the truth? Some truths are better left unspoken... Do you agree?

Not telling the truth may sometimes appear as the best solution( to prevent someone of being hurt. But thisXX *a short-term solution as the longest the truth (keeps (vocabulaire) hidden, the hardest the damage (would be concordance des temps.)when it is unveiled. To the pain of the truth itself, is added the harm due to (the fact of): lourd… not knowing something, the feeling of betrayal and the lack of confidence are added.
So I think it is better to face the reality, take responsibility and (say the truth (usually we "tell" the truth, is "say the truth" acceptable too?NO !!! That does not mean telling the truth carelessly but finding the right moment and place to tell the truth with consideration and respect.'Phrase' qui n'est pas une vraie phrase ! 103 words.
Bonnes suggestions.

- to prevent FROM + V + ing
- to tell a lie : to lie (lying) // to tell the truth
* oubli d’un verbe.
C’était une bonne expression qui rend d’autant plus étrange le faute (c’est une faute ! ) de (say the truth employés correctement avant et après. … et prevent FROM, quand même !
De bonnes indications et de bonnes suggestions.

Merci aux rédacteurs et correcteurs pour ce bon travail. Il y avait peu de fautes, c'est vrai, mais c'est bien le but recherché !
Bravo encore !
Vous pouvez toujours choisir de faire tout ou partie des expressions en Follow up Work!

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