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Message de birmane posté le 13-04-2024 à 11:05:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour. Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît me corriger mon expression ? Merci
The first document is an article from a website, the name of which is NEOC DIGITAL. I don't know when it was published.
→ This article explains the reasons why it is essential for industrial companies to keep their machines well-mainained.
The second document is also an article published on a website called éditions-législatives. It was written by Philippe Pouget in 2017 (two thousand and seventeen).
→ It reports an accident related to the use of a defective machine.
Finally, the last document is a technical document on safety sensors that I performed during a maintenance operation.
→ This magnetic device is placed on the protective door of each machine giving access to its moving and dangerous parts.
Working in an industrial environment can sometimes be very difficult for workers because they use hazardous machines every day. So, employers must keep their equipment in good working conditions. If they don't they can be fined.
I have chosen these documents because they focus on the fact that if machines are not inspected, repaired and cleaned regularly they can cause breakdowns and downtime and so generate additional costs for the company.
But, bad maintenance can also result in severe or fatal accidents in the workplace because machines can become defective and malfunction. For example, workers are exposed to unexpected movements of the machine. This can result in injuries like crushed fingers or hands. To prevent accidents we can use devices such as safety sensors.
Message de birmane posté le 13-04-2024 à 11:05:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour. Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît me corriger mon expression ? Merci
The first document is an article from a website, the name of which is NEOC DIGITAL. I don't know when it was published.
→ This article explains the reasons why it is essential for industrial companies to keep their machines well-mainained.
The second document is also an article published on a website called éditions-législatives. It was written by Philippe Pouget in 2017 (two thousand and seventeen).
→ It reports an accident related to the use of a defective machine.
Finally, the last document is a technical document on safety sensors that I performed during a maintenance operation.
→ This magnetic device is placed on the protective door of each machine giving access to its moving and dangerous parts.
Working in an industrial environment can sometimes be very difficult for workers because they use hazardous machines every day. So, employers must keep their equipment in good working conditions. If they don't they can be fined.
I have chosen these documents because they focus on the fact that if machines are not inspected, repaired and cleaned regularly they can cause breakdowns and downtime and so generate additional costs for the company.
But, bad maintenance can also result in severe or fatal accidents in the workplace because machines can become defective and malfunction. For example, workers are exposed to unexpected movements of the machine. This can result in injuries like crushed fingers or hands. To prevent accidents we can use devices such as safety sensors.
Réponse : Documents/ presentation de gerondif, postée le 13-04-2024 à 11:18:54 (S | E)
Bonjour
Safety sensors that I performed me semble faux. You perform an action, not an object.
Enlever la virgule derrière but au début du dernier paragraphe.
Réponse : Documents/ presentation de birmane, postée le 13-04-2024 à 11:40:58 (S | E)
Merci gerondif.
Safety sensors that I performed me semble faux
oui, en effet cette phrase me pose un souci. Je veux absolument utiliser le verbe Performe mais je n'arrive pas à dire ce que je veux
Est-ce mieux
the last document is a technical document on the safety sensors on which I perfomed a maintenance intervention.
Réponse : Documents/ presentation de birmane, postée le 13-04-2024 à 11:59:50 (S | E)
Encore une petite question s'il vous plaît.
It reports an accident related to the use of a defective machine.
Puis-je écrire :
1) It reports an accident with the use of a faulty machine.
Réponse : Documents/ presentation de gerondif, postée le 13-04-2024 à 13:23:06 (S | E)
Bonjour
Je dirais :
The last publication is a technical document about a safety maintenance I performed on safety sensors.
Oui, vos deux phrases peuvent convenir.
Réponse : Documents/ presentation de birmane, postée le 13-04-2024 à 13:25:23 (S | E)
Merci gerondif.
J'ai posté un autre message pour la prononciation des ed. Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît me corriger ? Merci
Réponse : Documents/ presentation de birmane, postée le 13-04-2024 à 14:06:47 (S | E)
Je tente de corriger mais j'ai du mal .
The first document is an article from a website, the name of which is NEOC DIGITAL. I don't know when it was published (t).
→ This article explains the reasons why it is essential for industrial companies to keep their machines well-mainained (d).
The second document is also an article published (t) on a website called (d) éditions-législatives. It was written by Philippe Pouget in 2017 (two thousand and seventeen).
→ It reports an accident related to the use of a defective machine.
Finally, the last document is a technical document on safety sensors that I performed (t) during a maintenance operation.
→ This magnetic device is placed (t) on the protective door of each machine giving access to its moving and dangerous parts.
Working in an industrial environment can sometimes be very difficult for workers because they use hazardous machines every day. So, employers must keep their equipment in good working conditions. If they don't they can be fined (d).
I have chosen these documents because they focus on the fact that if machines are not inspected (id), repaired (d) and cleaned (t) regularly they can cause breakdowns and downtime and so generate additional costs for the company.
But, bad maintenance can also result in severe or fatal accidents in the workplace because machines can become defective and malfunction. For example, workers are exposed (t) to unexpected (id) movements of the machine. This can result in injuries like crushed (t) fingers or hands. To prevent accidents we can use devices such as safety sensors.
Réponse : Documents/ presentation de gerold, postée le 15-04-2024 à 21:13:09 (S | E)
Bonsoir
their machines well-maintained
its moving and dangerous parts. plutôt its dangerous moving parts
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