Playing with words/ 43

Playing with words/ 43
Message de here4u posté le 06-05-2023 à 11:52:04 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici votre nouveau challenge ! "Playing and working with words"... La date limite pour cet exercice est fin mai 2023.
Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu ... mais il peut être très ludique ... Il vous laisse également toute liberté de choisir votre thème !

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it? (In fact, it's more easily said than done! )

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS! [and specify the number of words at the end.]

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin.) Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte ... Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne devez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
Pour que chacun ait la possibilité de travailler avec nous, cet exercice a des niveaux différents. Vous pouvez choisir celui qui vous convient :

Le niveau fera une seule phrase en moins de 80 mots.
Le niveau une seule phrase et toujours 60 mots, au plus.
Le niveau **, pour les plus habiles, fera une phrase de moins de 40 mots ...
I'm sure you'll have inspiration...

Here are the words:

- To FRIGHTEN – To REACH – a CONSEQUENCE - a BURGLAR – THIN – PRIVATE – WHOSE – UNLIKE + un comparatif de supériorité (adjectif court).
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C'est parti pour une " très jolie phrase correcte et courte ! "
Go for it with THE FORCE!

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Réponse : Playing with words/ 43 de amalia80, postée le 07-05-2023 à 09:25:26 (S | E)
Hello Here4u ! Have a nice weekend.
Here is my sentence:
No, this THIN widow, whose life is SADDER THAN ever, wasn't FRIGHTENED to see a BURGLAR trying to ENTER her PRIVATE garden to REACH her house; UNLIKE what you might think, she only thought of the CONSEQUENCES for her flowers! 40 words

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Réponse : Playing with words/ 43 de icare29, postée le 13-05-2023 à 11:09:59 (S | E)
Hello dear here4u ...here is sentence ....

To FRIGHTEN ? To REACH ? a CONSEQUENCE - a BURGLAR ? THIN ? PRIVATE ? WHOSE ? UNLIKE un comparatif de supériorité (adjectif court).

A well-off man , WHOSE jewellery box was lovier than beforehand UNLIKE his wife's box ,FRIGHTENED a BURGLAR away as this one REACHED the PRIVATE safe through a THIN passage, in CONSEQUENCE, he was quite relieved.

34 words

Thanks a lot for your correction

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Réponse : Playing with words/ 43 de maya92, postée le 15-05-2023 à 16:40:08 (S | E)
Hello Here4u, (my try for once..)

The burglar tried to reach the safe in the private office but was frightened by the thin lady whose figure was thinner than any other as a consequence of her diet unlike her sister (about 35)

Just a try ...

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Réponse : Playing with words/ 43 de here4u, postée le 22-05-2023 à 16:17:35 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Wakey wakey... ☀️☀️ It's time to Rack Your Brains in a pleasant way...

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Réponse : Playing with words/ 43 de mad14, postée le 26-05-2023 à 19:30:31 (S | E)
Hello Here 4U - here is my try...

The THIN woman is REACHING the court, it's the CONSEQUENCE the rob, she's FRIGHTENED to be faced with the BURGLAR who had broken into her PRIVATE flat WHOSE she occupied a bedroom; UNLIKE that short moment seemed her so much LONGER. (41 words).

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Réponse : Playing with words/ 43 de here4u, postée le 31-05-2023 à 10:19:25 (S | E)
Hello dear "competitors", and dear readers !

I know that some of you are trying to do this exercise that looks so easy, but is, in fact, quite difficult!
Please, do not hesitate to post your tries, even if you think they're not perfect! You'll be helped to correct yourselves!


- To FRIGHTEN – To REACH – a CONSEQUENCE - a BURGLAR – THIN – PRIVATE – WHOSE – UNLIKE + un comparatif de supériorité (adjectif court).

- No, this THIN widow, whose life is SADDER THAN ever, wasn't FRIGHTENED to see a BURGLAR trying to ENTER her PRIVATE garden to REACH her house; UNLIKE what you might think, she only thought of the CONSEQUENCES for her flowers! (40 words)


- A well-off man, WHOSE jewellery box was lovier than before, UNLIKE his wife's box, FRIGHTENED a BURGLAR away as he was REACHING the PRIVATE safe through a THIN passage; in CONSEQUENCE, he was quite relieved. (36 words)


- The burglar tried to reach the safe in the private office but was frightened by the thin lady whose figure was thinner than any other as a consequence of her diet, unlike her sister. (about 35)


- The THIN woman is REACHING the court -the CONSEQUENCE of a robbery-; she's FRIGHTENED to face the BURGLAR who had broken into her PRIVATE flat WHOSE bedroom she was in : it seemed a very long moment, UNLIKE the reality...(40 words)


Congratulations to you!

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