Playing with words/33

Playing with words/33
Message de here4u posté le 03-07-2022 à 18:28:53 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici le nouveau "Playing and working with words" ... La date limite pour cet exercice est fin juillet 2022.

Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu ... mais il peut être très ludique ... Il vous laisse également toute liberté de choisir votre thème !

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it? (In fact, more easily said than done! )

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
-You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS! [and specify the number of words at the end.]

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin.) Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte ... Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne pouvez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
Cependant, pour que chacun ait la possibilité de travailler avec nous, cet exercice a des niveaux différents. Vous pouvez choisir celui qui vous convient :

Le niveau fera une seule phrase en moins de 80 mots.
Le niveau : une seule phrase et toujours 60 mots, au plus.
Le niveau **, pour les plus habiles, fera une phrase de moins de 40 mots ...

Here are the words:
- To ENTER – To LAST – an AFFAIR - a REASON – CONSIDERATE – UNBELIEVABLE – NOT...YET (= one word) – UNLESS + un irréel du présent.

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C'est parti pour une " très jolie phrase correcte et courte ! "
Go for it with THE FORCE! (the 4th... of July, of course!)

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Réponse : Playing with words/33 de maxwell, postée le 05-07-2022 à 21:24:44 (S | E)
Hello Here4U

Here's my try. I hope I'm compliant with every rule
You're UNBELIEVABLE: you haveN'T given one REASON for your lateness YET; If you were CONSIDERATE, you WOULD not ENTER the room like that; UNLESS your meeting LASTED all night, I think you're having an AFFAIR. (37)

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Réponse : Playing with words/33 de icare29, postée le 11-07-2022 à 11:37:59 (S | E)
Hello Here4u ..and all hard workers READY


To ENTER ? To LAST ? an AFFAIR - a REASON ? CONSIDERATE ? UNBELIEVABLE ? NOT...YET (= one word) ? UNLESS un irréel du présent.
here is my sentence

"Since the beginning of our AFFAIR you have NOT written any CONSIDERATE word YET , so give me a REASON so that I believe our UNBELIEVABLE dating ;as you know I WOULDN'T ENTER into this relationship UNLESS you WERE fond of me.39 words "

Thanks for your correction.

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Réponse : Playing with words/33 de amalia80, postée le 14-07-2022 à 17:13:28 (S | E)
Hello !
Without wanting to ENTER your intimacy, and although you HAVEN'T asked my opinion YET; I thought your love AFFAIR wouldn't LAST very long, UNLESS you were more CONSIDERATE and stopped telling UNBELIEVABLE stories to justify the REASONS of your perpetual delays. 40 WORDS

Thank you dear Here4u for the corrections

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Réponse : Playing with words/33 de vaiana, postée le 15-07-2022 à 01:52:44 (S | E)
Hello everyone! Here is my little sentence... thanks for that game, or assignment.... or whatever teacher here4u calls it

If he were CONSIDERATE, she could maybe forgive his UNBELIEVABLE infidelity she can NOT cope YET but that idea will probably never ENTER her mind UNLESS he has a good REASON for having that AFFAIR that LASTED for over seven years. (40 words)

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Réponse : Playing with words/33 de here4u, postée le 22-07-2022 à 18:00:56 (S | E)
Wakey wakey!

You still have enough time to make a wonderful sentence! I'm expecting your productions!

posté par ancolie en mp:

As unbelievable as it may seem, this boy is having an affair with his teacher and for reasons, that I don't know yet, he considers that this relationship will last, unless, he says, without entering into détails, she is forced to leave him.

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Réponse : Playing with words/33 de here4u, postée le 31-07-2022 à 19:42:17 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Le tirage était "facile" ... cette fois-ci ! Avantage, puisque pendant les vacances, il faut déjà réussir à trouver le temps ... et la force de s'extraire d'occupations moins contraignantes, plus "faciles" encore ! Bravo à vous qui l'avez fait !
Inconvénient, cependant, car vos productions sont plus ressemblantes, moins différentes car le sujet vous a semblé "aller de soi !"
Peu de fautes aussi !



- You're UNBELIEVABLE: you haveN'T given one REASON for your lateness YET; if you were CONSIDERATE, you WOULD not ENTER the room like that; UNLESS your meeting LASTED all night, I think you're having an AFFAIR. (37) TTB


- "Since the beginning of our AFFAIR you have NOT written any CONSIDERATE word YET, so give me a REASON so that I believe our UNBELIEVABLE dating ; as you know I WOULDN'T ENTER into this relationship UNLESS you WERE fond of me.39 words " TTB (trust our unbelieving ... )
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- Without wanting to ENTER into your intimacy, and although you HAVEN'T asked my opinion YET, I thought your love AFFAIR wouldn't LAST very long, UNLESS you were more CONSIDERATE and stopped telling UNBELIEVABLE stories to justify the REASONS of your perpetual delays. 40 WORDS TTB
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- If he were CONSIDERATE, she might forgive his UNBELIEVABLE infidelity she canNOT cope with YET; but that idea will probably never ENTER into her mind UNLESS he has a good REASON to have that AFFAIR that LASTED for over seven years. (40 words)
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J'avais accepté "enter + 0" avec le sens abstrait de "joining sth". "Enter into" would be better!

- As unbelievable as it may seem, this boy is having an affair with his teacher and for reasons that I don't know yet, he considers that this relationship will last, unless he says without entering into details, she is forced to leave him. OK ! Ne pas oublier les majuscules et le nombre des mots. Il manque le prétérit modal de l'irréel. Encourageant pour une première tentative !


Encore à vous !

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