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Message de carla1311 posté le 09-11-2020 à 15:51:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire en anglais un résumé d'une vidéo et je voulais savoir si j'avais bien traduit mon texte en anglais.
Pouvez vous me signaler les erreurs éventuelles s'il vous plait ?
The Earth's climate has always varied since Earth's existence, but in the last hundred years, Earth's temperature has increased rapidly. This occurrence, called global warming, is due to human activity and, more precisely, by industrial development.
This has resulted in an increase in fossil fuels consumption and consequently a rise of carbon dioxide and other gases into the atmosphere. These gases prevent the warmth of the sun's rays from escaping back through the atmosphere out into space, thus contributing to the greenhouse effect, a natural process which heats the earth.
One of the consequences of this global warming is that some of the ice from mountain glaciers is melting, and this causes the seas level to rise. In the years to come, the consequences could be even more disastrous for our planet. To save it, we need to change some of our lifestyles.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-11-2020 18:02
Si on avait la vidéo, ce serait peut-être mieux...sinon on ne peut que vous signaler des fautes éventuelles.
Message de carla1311 posté le 09-11-2020 à 15:51:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire en anglais un résumé d'une vidéo et je voulais savoir si j'avais bien traduit mon texte en anglais.
Pouvez vous me signaler les erreurs éventuelles s'il vous plait ?
The Earth's climate has always varied since Earth's existence, but in the last hundred years, Earth's temperature has increased rapidly. This occurrence, called global warming, is due to human activity and, more precisely, by industrial development.
This has resulted in an increase in fossil fuels consumption and consequently a rise of carbon dioxide and other gases into the atmosphere. These gases prevent the warmth of the sun's rays from escaping back through the atmosphere out into space, thus contributing to the greenhouse effect, a natural process which heats the earth.
One of the consequences of this global warming is that some of the ice from mountain glaciers is melting, and this causes the seas level to rise. In the years to come, the consequences could be even more disastrous for our planet. To save it, we need to change some of our lifestyles.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-11-2020 18:02
Si on avait la vidéo, ce serait peut-être mieux...sinon on ne peut que vous signaler des fautes éventuelles.
Réponse : Correction /texte de gerondif, postée le 09-11-2020 à 18:55:27 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu
The Earth's climate has always varied since Earth's existence, but in the last hundred years, Earth's temperature has increased rapidly. This occurrence, called global warming, is due to human activity and, more precisely, by(ce by n'est raccroché à rien. soit vous mettez caused by, soit vous remettez to et ça se raccrochera à due to) industrial development.
This has resulted in an increase in fossil fuels consumption and consequently a rise of carbon dioxide and other gases into the atmosphere. These gases prevent the warmth of the sun's rays (sunray existe en un seul mot)from escaping back through the atmosphere out into space, thus contributing to the greenhouse effect, a natural process which heats the earth.
One of the consequences of this global warming is that some of the ice from mountain glaciers is melting, and this causes the seas level(soit on fait un cas possessif, the sea's level, the seas'levels, soit on prend le nom composé dont le premier élément sera invariable et on a the sea-levels) to rise. In the years to come, the consequences could be even more disastrous for our planet. To save it, we need to change some of our lifestyles.
Réponse : Correction /texte de lalianne, postée le 09-11-2020 à 20:07:27 (S | E)
S'il vous plaît excuser mon français...
This occurrence, called global warming, is due to human activity and, more precisely,
One of the consequences of this global warming is that some of the ice from mountain glaciers is melting, and this causes (C'est correct. Je ne voudrais que dire une autre formulation. On peut remplacer "and this causes" avec "causing") the
Your English is very good! And your summary was very professional!
Réponse : Correction /texte de carla1311, postée le 09-11-2020 à 20:37:07 (S | E)
Merci pour votre aide et les explications !
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