Coronavirus/paragraph

Coronavirus/paragraph
Message de ours posté le 25-03-2020 à 17:04:18 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody !
I want would like a correction for my paragraph please ?
Thanks for any reply.

Last months, it seems a very dangerous virus which breated the world
''Coronavirus'' or covid-19.
Some people are sick and others died,because of this coronavirus,
All people are staying at home for their safety from the contagion and sterilize their houses.
Scientists are trying to find avaccine to save the world,I wish that scientists will find a vaccine.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-03-2020 17:16
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Réponse : Coronavirus/paragraph de gerondif, postée le 25-03-2020 à 17:29:43 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu.
Last months(singular), it seems a very dangerous virus which breated(this verb doesn't exist) the world
''Coronavirus'' or covid-19.
SomeMany people are sick and others died,because of this coronavirus,
All people are(use everybody + singular) staying at home for their safety from the contagion and to sterilize their houses.
(But staying at home doesn't sterilize your house by itself)
Scientists are trying to find a vaccine to save the world,I wish hope that scientists will find a vaccine.

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Réponse : Coronavirus/paragraph de here4u, postée le 25-03-2020 à 18:02:46 (S | E)
Hello!

Last months, it seems(past tense required? or not? depending on what you mean) a very dangerous virus which breated(threatened?) the world...

"people are sick and others died,(attention au mélange des temps !)
Take care.

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Réponse : Coronavirus/paragraph de ours, postée le 25-03-2020 à 21:03:02 (S | E)
Last month, it seems a very dangerous virus which threatened the world ''coronavirus'' or covid-19.
Many people are sick and others die, because of this coronavirus,everybody is staying at home for their safety from contagion and to sterilize their home.
Scientists are trying to find a vaccine to save the world I hope that scientists will find a vaccine.
Big thanks for you all!

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Réponse : Coronavirus/paragraph de here4u, postée le 25-03-2020 à 22:08:20 (S | E)
Hello,

Last month, it seems a very dangerous virus (which?) threatened X (threatenS?/ is threatening? ) the world:''coronavirus'' or covid-19. cette "phrase" n'est pas correcte ! (j'ai rajouté de la ponctuation !)
Many people are sick and others die, because of this coronavirus; everybody is staying at home (self-isolating) for their safety from contagion and to sterilize their home.(??)
Scientists are trying to find a vaccine to save the world. I hope that scientists= they will find a vaccineone very quickly.

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Réponse : Coronavirus/paragraph de ours, postée le 27-03-2020 à 09:30:40 (S | E)
Hello!
Last month,It seems a very dangerous virus which is threatening the world ''coronavirus'' or covid-19.
Many people are sick and others die, because of this coronvirus,everybody is staying at home for their safety from contagionband to cleaning their houses.
Scientists are trying to find a vaccine to save the world, I hope they will find a vaccine one very quickly,So that the world find its joy again.
I thank you for your help!

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