NYC /expression écrite

NYC /expression écrite
Message de fannyb posté le 23-11-2019 à 18:36:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Nous devions faire une présentation sur la ville de New York. Pourriez-vous, s’il-vous plaît, m’indiquer s'il y a des erreurs ?
Merci pour vos réponses.

Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a city very lively. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can do shopping , walking, visiting museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separed into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigrantion, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new . Wich will not be less active at night. Between history and renewal. New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take the subway, one of the oldest subway of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-11-2019 21:03

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de lucile83, postée le 24-11-2019 à 18:59:31 (S | E)
Anyone?

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de bluestar, postée le 25-11-2019 à 02:14:42 (S | E)
bonsoir..

Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a city very lively. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can do go shopping , walking, visiting museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separed into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigrantion, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new, . Wich will not be less active at night. Between history and renewal. New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take the subway, one of the oldest subway (pluriel)of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

"a city very lively" -- Non, adjectif, puis des noms

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de fannyb, postée le 25-11-2019 à 13:48:14 (S | E)
Bonjour et merci pour votre aide.

Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a very lively city. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can do shopping , walking, visiting museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separed into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigrantion, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new, . Which will not be less active at night. Between history and renewal. New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take subway, one of the oldest subways of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-11-2019 14:28

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de bluestar, postée le 25-11-2019 à 17:44:09 (S | E)
New York is a very lively city. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can do shopping , walking, visiting museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separed into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

bonjour..

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigrantion (orth. a revoir), it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle (ne se dit pas)
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new, . Which will not be less active at night. Between history and renewal.you must write complete sentences, not subordinate clauses standing alone) New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take...(article).. subway, one of the oldest subways of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de fannyb, postée le 25-11-2019 à 18:07:46 (S | E)
Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a very lively city. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can do shopping , walking, visiting museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separed into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigration, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new, . Which will not be less active at night. Between history and renewal, New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take the subway, one of the oldest subways of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de fannyb, postée le 25-11-2019 à 19:37:58 (S | E)
Bonjour

Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a very lively city. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can do shopping , walking, visiting j’ai un gros doute sur cette partie est-elle juste ?museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separed into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigration, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new, . Which will not be less active at night. Between history and renewal, New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take the subway, one of the oldest subways of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de bluestar, postée le 25-11-2019 à 22:53:01 (S | E)
Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a very lively city. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can do ("go" pas "do") shopping , walking, visiting j’ai un gros doute sur cette partie est-elle juste ?museums. othing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separed (orth) into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigration, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new (sens?) . Which The streets will not be less active at night. Between history and renewal, New York will turn your head.( mieux serait "between tradition and innovation")

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take the subway, one of the oldest subways of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de fannyb, postée le 26-11-2019 à 12:38:05 (S | E)
Bonjour

Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a very lively city. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can go shopping , walking, visiting museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separated into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigration, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new . Which The streets will not be less active at night. Between tradition and innovation , New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take the subway, one of the oldest subways of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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Réponse : NYC /expression écrite de bluestar, postée le 26-11-2019 à 17:43:21 (S | E)
Have you ever thought about travelling to New York City ?
Yes ? So, let’s go !
New York is a very lively city. It never sleeps and I will explain why. There are many things you can do. You can go shopping , walking, visiting museums. Nothing is impossible, there’s no place quite like it. New York is separated into five boroughs, each with a unique atmosphere.

Did you know that the Big Apple was rated number one of America’s most beautiful cities by Budget travel ?
Moreover, there are always interesting, incredible and new things to discover in New York. New York is a multicultural city . English is the main language spoken , but because the city was a hub of immigration, it’s a melting pot of cultures. You’ll often hear a lot Italian and Spanish for example. We can find museums , amazing food, parks and of course, skyscrapers as we already know .

In the Oculus train station you can see people everywhere and at any time on your right on your left and even above you. Because it is one of the busiest cities in the world
You will have your head in the clouds but your feet on the ground. NYC is a reconnection with nature. It's literally a concrete jungle and trees jungle ("trees jungle" n'a aucune sens en ce contexte)
Its appearance changes completely after dark. Buildings will illuminate the city. These streets will make you feel brand new . Which The streets will not be less active at night. Between tradition and innovation , New York will turn your head.

However, if you are in New York City, you can see the Brooklyn Bridge the mythical famous, (pas mythical) Bridge of New York City . If you decide to visit New York you can take the subway, one of the oldest subways of the world. New York is the city that never sleeps and now you know why . This is New York, the city where all dreams come true

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