Correction/Hayao Miyazaki

Correction/Hayao Miyazaki
Message de fannyb posté le 16-09-2019 à 20:46:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
voici une description de l’artiste Hayao Miyazaki.
Pourriez-vous me prévenir dire s'il vous plait si vous observez voyez des erreurs?
Merci pour vos réponses.

Hayao Miyazaki is a Japanese animator, filmmaker, screenwriter, author; he co-founded Studio Ghibli, a film and animation studio in 1985. Hayao Miyazaki is 78 years old. His first movie was the castle of Cagliostro in 1979 it's talk about someone who robs a casino and find the money to be counterfeit. And He heads to the tiny country of Cagliostro, the rumoured source of the bills. But this movie doesn’t have a great success. Him first success was Princess Mononoke it talks about a war between humanity and nature. I really like his movies; For instance my neyhbors totoro or chihiro because he talks about themes such as humanity's relationship with nature and technology, and the difficulty of maintaining a pacifist ethic in a violent world.
Furthermore you have to know that every one of them is handmade. But unfortunately, now Hayao Miyazaki retired from studio Guibli. His last movie was the wind rises in 2013. In my opinion he is one of the biggest artist in the world.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-09-2019 21:02

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Réponse : Correction/Hayao Miyazaki de gerondif, postée le 16-09-2019 à 21:27:29 (S | E)
Bonjour
Hayao Miyazaki is a Japanese animator, filmmaker, screenwriter, author; he co-founded Studio Ghibli, a film and animation studio in 1985. Hayao Miyazaki is 78 years old. His first movie was the castle of Cagliostro (normalement, on met des majuscules aux titres) in 1979 it's talk about someone who robs a casino and finds the money to be counterfeit. And He heads to the tiny country of Cagliostro, the rumoured source of the bills. But this movie doesn’t(plutôt au prétérit) have a great success. Him first success was Princess Mononoke it talks is about a war between humanity and nature. I really like his movies; For instance my neyhbors (c'est écrit comme ça ? neighbours normalement) totoro or chihiro because he talks about themes such as humanity's relationship with nature and technology, and the difficulty of maintaining a pacifist's ethic in a violent world.
Furthermore you have to know that every one of them is handmade. But unfortunately, now Hayao Miyazaki has retired from studio Guibli. His last movie was the wind rises in 2013. In my opinion he is one of the biggest artist(pluriel) in the world.

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Réponse : Correction/Hayao Miyazaki de fannyb, postée le 16-09-2019 à 22:58:41 (S | E)
bonjour merci d’avoir pris le temps de me corriger
Hayao Miyazaki is a Japanese animator, filmmaker, screenwriter, author; he co-founded Studio Ghibli, a film and animation studio in 1985. Hayao Miyazaki is 78 years old. His first movie was The Castle Of Cagliostro in 1979 it's talk about someone who robs a casino and finds the money to be couterfeit. And He heads to the tiny country of Cagliostro, the rumoured source of the bills. But this movie didn't have a great success. His first success was Princess Mononoke it talks is about a war between humanity and nature. I really like his movies; For instance My Neighborsoui ça s’ecrit comme ça 🙃 Totoro or Spirited Away because he talks about themes such as humanity's relationship with nature and technology, and the difficulty of maintaining a pacifist's ethic in a violent world.
Furthermore you have to know that every one of them is handmade. But unfortunately, now Hayao Miyazaki has retired from studio Guibli. His last movie was the wind rises in 2013. In my opinion he is one of the biggest artists in the world.

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Réponse : Correction/Hayao Miyazaki de gerondif, postée le 17-09-2019 à 00:23:18 (S | E)
Bonjour
un film ou un livre ne "parle" pas de en anglais. It is about, pas it talks about.
Erreurs en bleu
Hayao Miyazaki is a Japanese animator, filmmaker, screenwriter and author; he co-founded Studio Ghibli, a film and animation studio in 1985. Hayao Miyazaki is 78 years old. His first movie was The Castle Of Cagliostro in 1979 it's talk about someone who robs a casino and finds the money to be couterfeit. And He heads to the tiny country of Cagliostro, the rumoured source of the bills. But this movie didn't have a great success. His first success was Princess Mononoke it talks is about a war between humanity and nature. I really like his movies; For instance My Neighbors Totoro or Spirited Away because he talks (donc he est Miyazaki, parce que si c'étaient les films, on dirait they are about, they deal with) about themes such as humanity's relationship with nature and technology, and the difficulty of maintaining a pacifist's ethic in a violent world.
Furthermore you have to know that every one of them is handmade. But unfortunately, now Hayao Miyazaki has retired from studio Guibli. His last movie was The Wind Rises in 2013. In my opinion he is one of the biggest artists in the world.

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Réponse : Correction/Hayao Miyazaki de gerold, postée le 17-09-2019 à 07:17:06 (S | E)
Bonjour

C'est My Neighbor T., au singulier. Le titre français est "Mon voisin Totoro".

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Réponse : Correction/Hayao Miyazaki de fannyb, postée le 17-09-2019 à 07:34:23 (S | E)
Hayao Miyazaki is a Japanese animator, filmmaker, screenwriter and author; he co-founded Studio Ghibli, a film and animation studio in 1985. Hayao Miyazaki is 78 years old. His first movie was The Castle Of Cagliostro in 1979 it's about someone who robs a casino and finds the money to be couterfeit. And He heads to the tiny country of Cagliostro, the rumoured source of the bills. But this movie didn't have a great success. His first success was Princess Mononoke it is about a war between humanity and nature. I really like his movies; For instance My Neighbors Totoro or Spirited Away because he talks oui je voulais bien dire Miyazaki avec he about themes such as humanity's relationship with nature and technology, and the difficulty of maintaining a pacifist's ethic in a violent world.
Furthermore you have to know that every one of them is handmade. But unfortunately, now Hayao Miyazaki has retired from studio Guibli. His last movie was The Wind Rises in 2013. In my opinion he is one of the biggest artists in the world.

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Réponse : Correction/Hayao Miyazaki de gerondif, postée le 17-09-2019 à 09:21:42 (S | E)
Bonjour
Vous avez laissé neighbor au pluriel.

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