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Message de hayti posté le 06-06-2019 à 13:02:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plaît je veux savoir mes erreurs.
Merci beaucoup à ceux qui auront la gentillesse de me répondre.
I am happy with my school,but I think it still needs some improvement. First, we need a multi media room to help us do our research project. Second,our football field is plenty of hollows (veux dire le terrain est creusé) .That make this sport activity less enthusiastic and more dangerous.Third,we need to create some clubs such as sports club,drawing,singing,reading clubs... That is because when we practice some activities after a hard day,a day when we pass exams or study for many hours,we feel relaxed and ready to begin a new day with a new breath.That's also empower our mental capacities. All in all,I'm looking forward to see our school improved and I will participate with all my efforts to make this future experience successful.
I will be really thankful for your help !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-06-2019 14:46
Message de hayti posté le 06-06-2019 à 13:02:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plaît je veux savoir mes erreurs.
Merci beaucoup à ceux qui auront la gentillesse de me répondre.
I am happy with my school,but I think it still needs some improvement. First, we need a multi media room to help us do our research project. Second,our football field is plenty of hollows (veux dire le terrain est creusé) .That make this sport activity less enthusiastic and more dangerous.Third,we need to create some clubs such as sports club,drawing,singing,reading clubs... That is because when we practice some activities after a hard day,a day when we pass exams or study for many hours,we feel relaxed and ready to begin a new day with a new breath.That's also empower our mental capacities. All in all,I'm looking forward to see our school improved and I will participate with all my efforts to make this future experience successful.
I will be really thankful for your help !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-06-2019 14:46
Réponse : My school/aide de gerondif, postée le 06-06-2019 à 14:41:13 (S | E)
Bonjour
I am happy with my school,but I think it still needs some improvement. First, we need a multi media room to help us do our research project. Second,our football field is (il faudrait un verbe avoir avec un nom comme cod, hollows) plenty of hollows (il est plein de trous, it is full of potholes) .That make (le S du présent !!) this sport activity less enthusiastic (comment une activité peut-elle être enthousiaste ?) and more dangerous.Third,we need to create some clubs such as sports club(pluriel),drawing,singing,reading clubs... That is because when we practice some activities after a hard day,a day when we pass(to take an exam, se présenter, to pass, réussir, penser au fait qu'il passe au dessus de la barre, to fail an exam, échouer) exams or study for many hours,we feel relaxed and ready to begin a new day with a new breath.That's also empower(conjugaison fausse) our mental capacities. All in all,I'm looking forward to see our school improved and I will participate with all my efforts (me semble maladroit)to make this future experience successful.
Réponse : My school/aide de hayti, postée le 07-06-2019 à 09:45:29 (S | E)
Bonjour,Merci beaucoup.
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