Email/correction
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Message de hayti posté le 05-06-2019 à 21:37:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plaît aidez moi à corriger mes erreurs.
Merci d'avance.
Dear Jane, I received your email about things you do when you feel bored. Well, I'm writing this email to tell you what I do, me, if I feel bored. I usually watch a movie too, especially horror or action movies. But I do other things such as chatting with my friends, drawing and playing my favorite video games. Actually, we often practice our hobbies when we feel bored. Wish you all the best. Your friend, Susan.
Merci beaucoup.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-06-2019 21:48
Message de hayti posté le 05-06-2019 à 21:37:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plaît aidez moi à corriger mes erreurs.
Merci d'avance.
Dear Jane, I received your email about things you do when you feel bored. Well, I'm writing this email to tell you what I do, me, if I feel bored. I usually watch a movie too, especially horror or action movies. But I do other things such as chatting with my friends, drawing and playing my favorite video games. Actually, we often practice our hobbies when we feel bored. Wish you all the best. Your friend, Susan.
Merci beaucoup.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-06-2019 21:48
Réponse : Email/correction de gerondif, postée le 06-06-2019 à 14:35:42 (S | E)
Bonjour
Dear Jane, I received your email about things you do when you feel bored. Well, I'm writing this email to tell you what I do, me(as far as I am concerned) if I feel bored. I usually watch a movie too, especially horror or action movies. But I do other things such as chatting with my friends, drawing and playing my favorite video games. Actually, we often practice (en anglais britannique, practise est un verbe et practice un nom) our hobbies when we feel bored. Wish you all the best. Your friend, Susan.
Réponse : Email/correction de hayti, postée le 06-06-2019 à 18:09:49 (S | E)
Bonjour, Merci infiniment.
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