Adresses email/aide

Adresses email/aide
Message de marco007 posté le 30-09-2018 à 18:03:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Pouvez-vous m'aider dans ce texte?
C'est un courriel que j'envoie à plusieurs personnes en leur demandant de modifier les adresses des destinataires quand il s'agit d'emails de nature technique.
Merci d'avance à ceux qui prendront le temps de me lire ou de me répondre.

Dear all,
I kindly ask you to modify from now on, the receivers of emails you will send to us concerning technical issues.
As main receivers please put following names:
aaa.cccòmailcom
bbb.deeòmailcom

And as CC receivers indicate please:
cccc.dejdeòmailcom
jjdjj.ereeòmailcom

Please remove the address dsjd.dessòmailcom
I ask you that in order to avoid any misunderstanding
Thank you in advance for your help
Best regards

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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-09-2018 21:37

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Réponse : Adresses email/aide de jade77, postée le 01-10-2018 à 15:17:13 (S | E)
Hello,
Here are some rectifications:
I kindly ask(you can use a formal verb instead) you to modify from now on, the receivers of emails (a conjunction is missing here) you will(a modal with some degree of probability will be better) send to us concerning (adjective designing probability) technical issues.
As main receivers(you can use another formal expression) please put (a defined article is missing) following names:
...
Cordially

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Réponse : Adresses email/aide de capuchon, postée le 06-10-2018 à 17:36:13 (S | E)
Thank you Jade77 !
I will try but I have some doubts...

I kindly ask (what do you mean with formal verb?) you to modify from now on the receivers of the emails you should send to us concerning technical issues (I mean only and all the emails with technical issues)
As main receivers (can you help me with the formal expression?) please put the following names:

aaa.cccòmailcom
bbb.deeòmailcom

And as CC receivers indicate please:
cccc.dejdeòmailcom
jjdjj.ereeòmailcom

Please remove the address dsjd.dessòmailcom
I ask you that in order to avoid any misunderstanding
Thank you in advance for your help
Best regards

I hope you help me.

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Réponse : Adresses email/aide de jade77, postée le 10-10-2018 à 01:25:25 (S | E)
Hi Capuchon,
This is a suggestion:
I solicit you to modify from now on, the receivers of emails which you might send to us concerning probable technical issues.
As main email destinations please put the following names:

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Réponse : Adresses email/aide de traviskidd, postée le 10-10-2018 à 03:11:46 (S | E)
Hello, "recipients" (not "receivers"). See you.

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Réponse : Adresses email/aide de jade77, postée le 11-10-2018 à 20:24:50 (S | E)
Yeah recipients is better than receivers

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