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Message de coralinesgt posté le 11-06-2018 à 16:03:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde!
Je passe mon oral d'anglais jeudi
en BTS MUC et je devrai (normalement) présenter mon stage. Je voulais savoir si quelqu'un ici pouvait me corriger le texte que j'ai préparé afin de l'apprendre et de ne pas être perdu le jour de l'oral! Si vous pensez qu'il faut rajouter quelque chose, ne surtout pas hésiter.. 
" I did my internship at the Pimkie store in xxxxxx during the two years of my BTS MUC.
The Pimkie store is located in downtown area very close to mall.
The Pimkie store employs 4 sale people among them 2 are part-time employed.
The store where I worked specializes in ready to wear.
Every year, the company recruits a certain number of trainees to help students to get a larger professional experience.
Basically, as a trainee, I learned how to merchandising, to fill the shelves, to cash customers, to sell product and to make schedule planning of the sale people.
Of course, in the 1st week, I did not to do much.I watched a lot and i understood the activities they often had to do.
My internship mainly consisted to sell clothes and to realize of merchandising.
I found the experience useful because i applied the things I had learned in the classroom in a real-world setting. It helped me to define my professional project.
Although I learned several useful skills during my internship, I wish I could have seen other parts of the store like paperwork.
In the end, it was a valuable experience because I gained work experience in my particular career field.
What I appreciated most was the atmosphere of trust and respect between the employees. I would recommend working at Pimkie store to anyone interested in ready to wear and the fashion. "
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-06-2018 16:13
Message de coralinesgt posté le 11-06-2018 à 16:03:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde!
Je passe mon oral d'anglais jeudi
en BTS MUC et je devrai (normalement) présenter mon stage. Je voulais savoir si quelqu'un ici pouvait me corriger le texte que j'ai préparé afin de l'apprendre et de ne pas être perdu le jour de l'oral! Si vous pensez qu'il faut rajouter quelque chose, ne surtout pas hésiter.. 
" I did my internship at the Pimkie store in xxxxxx during the two years of my BTS MUC.
The Pimkie store is located in downtown area very close to mall.
The Pimkie store employs 4 sale people among them 2 are part-time employed.
The store where I worked specializes in ready to wear.
Every year, the company recruits a certain number of trainees to help students to get a larger professional experience.
Basically, as a trainee, I learned how to merchandising, to fill the shelves, to cash customers, to sell product and to make schedule planning of the sale people.
Of course, in the 1st week, I did not to do much.I watched a lot and i understood the activities they often had to do.
My internship mainly consisted to sell clothes and to realize of merchandising.
I found the experience useful because i applied the things I had learned in the classroom in a real-world setting. It helped me to define my professional project.
Although I learned several useful skills during my internship, I wish I could have seen other parts of the store like paperwork.
In the end, it was a valuable experience because I gained work experience in my particular career field.
What I appreciated most was the atmosphere of trust and respect between the employees. I would recommend working at Pimkie store to anyone interested in ready to wear and the fashion. "
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-06-2018 16:13
Réponse : Oral anglais/ BTS de gerondif, postée le 12-06-2018 à 11:14:42 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreurs en bleu
" I did my internship at the Pimkie store in xxxxxx during the two years of my BTS MUC.
The Pimkie store is located in the downtown area (ou downtown tout seul) very close to the mall.
The Pimkie store employs 4 sale people among them 2 are part-time employed.
The store where I worked specializes in ready to wear.
Every year, the company recruits a certain number of trainees to help students to get a larger professional experience.
Basically, as a trainee, I learned how to merchandising(infinitif ici, donc soit merchhandise, soit merchandising avec un verbe devant comme organize), to fill the shelves, to cash customers, to sell products(items) and to make schedule planning of the sale people.
Of course, in(during) the 1st week, I did not to(oh là ! pas de to dans une conjugaison de prétérit négatif !) do much.I watched(sans complément, plutôt observed) a lot and i(majuscule) understood the activities they often had to do.
My internship mainly consisted (in + ing) to sell clothes and to realize of(à ôter) merchandising.
I found the experience useful because i(majuscule) applied the things I had learned in the classroom in(ou to) a real-world setting. It helped me (to) define my professional project.
Although I learned several useful skills during my internship, I wish I could have seen other parts of the store like paperwork.
In the end, it was a valuable experience because I gained work experience in my particular career field.
What I appreciated most was the atmosphere of trust and respect between the employees. I would recommend working at Pimkie store to anyone interested in ready to wear and
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