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Message from hannahlee posted on 18-02-2018 at 14:41:52 (D | E | F)
Hello,
Can anyone help my sentences?
Thank you.

in my opinion, after-school activity is qiete helpful to students in many ways.
First of all, since there are variety classes, they can experience and learn that they don't get to do in ordinary class.
Sencondly, they can learn to fit with other friends and can learn how to get along with others .
for these reasons, l think after school activity is good for students.

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Edited by lucile83 on 18-02-2018 15:21

Re: Check/grammar from foudrechat, posted on 18-02-2018 at 18:40:26 (D | E)
Hello,

in my opinion, after-school activity is qiete (this is misspelled) helpful to students in many ways.
First of all, since there are (there needs to be an indefinite article here) variety classes, they can experience and learn that (learn what?) they don't get to do in ordinary class.
Sencondly, they can learn to fit (fit where? there needs to be a preposition) with other friends and can learn how to get along with others.
for these reasons, l think after school activity is good for students.

Re: Check/grammar from dsmith, posted on 23-02-2018 at 18:18:13 (D | E)
Hello,

I copied foudrechat's suggestions and added a couple more suggestions

in my opinion, after-school activity is qiete (this is misspelled) helpful to students in many ways.

First of all, since there are (there needs to be an indefinite article here) variety of classes, they can experience and learn that (learn what?) they don't get to do in ordinary class (make this plural).

Sencondly (misspelled), they can learn to fit (fit where? there needs to be a preposition) with other friends and can learn how to get along with others.

for these reasons, l think after school activity is good for students.

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