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Message de asao posté le 02-11-2017 à 12:07:46
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour savoir si j'ai fai des erreurs (ce qui est fort probable) en écrivant le texte ci-dessous.
Je vous remercie d'avance.
Do you know the grass flip flops ? No ? It's normal.
Grass flip flops are a new invention ; they are made using rich synthetic grass bonded to a pair of classic flip flops. It's also important to know that grass flip flops are made from quality materials and are tested for durability.
Also, they are several colors for the grass like red,green, blue or pink ; you have a large choice !
What's more, today, they are the highest quality synthetic grass sandals on the market.
So, If you would like to experience the benefits of walking on grass whenever you leave your house, you should invest in our flip flops. ( Grass flip flops were designed to give you the feeling of walking on freshly mowed grass all the time.)
Moreover, these smartly crafted flip flops aren't just fake grass sandals. Indeed, our synthetic grass flip flops don't just look like amazing green grass, they conform to the wearer's foot to create a natural slice of paradise.
Besides, with grass flip flops, you can express your creativity and unique style. Great for everyday wear or for what you would like (an eye-catching adornment at the beach this summer),
Grass flip flops also make a fun, special and great gift idea for everyone : men, women, and children (young and old, of course).
About the price, it's unbelievably cheap : only 10 dollars. Don't miss this golden opportunity !
So, place your first order today. You won't regret it !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2017 12:25
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-11-2017 07:21
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Message de asao posté le 02-11-2017 à 12:07:46
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour savoir si j'ai fai des erreurs (ce qui est fort probable) en écrivant le texte ci-dessous.
Je vous remercie d'avance.
Do you know the grass flip flops ? No ? It's normal.
Grass flip flops are a new invention ; they are made using rich synthetic grass bonded to a pair of classic flip flops. It's also important to know that grass flip flops are made from quality materials and are tested for durability.
Also, they are several colors for the grass like red,green, blue or pink ; you have a large choice !
What's more, today, they are the highest quality synthetic grass sandals on the market.
So, If you would like to experience the benefits of walking on grass whenever you leave your house, you should invest in our flip flops. ( Grass flip flops were designed to give you the feeling of walking on freshly mowed grass all the time.)
Moreover, these smartly crafted flip flops aren't just fake grass sandals. Indeed, our synthetic grass flip flops don't just look like amazing green grass, they conform to the wearer's foot to create a natural slice of paradise.
Besides, with grass flip flops, you can express your creativity and unique style. Great for everyday wear or for what you would like (an eye-catching adornment at the beach this summer),
Grass flip flops also make a fun, special and great gift idea for everyone : men, women, and children (young and old, of course).
About the price, it's unbelievably cheap : only 10 dollars. Don't miss this golden opportunity !
So, place your first order today. You won't regret it !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-11-2017 12:25
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-11-2017 07:21
Problème de droit d'auteur. Topic fermé.
Réponse : Correction/flip flops de gerondif, postée le 02-11-2017 à 23:28:23
Bonsoir,
La première ligne est de vous.
Do you know
Pour le reste, c'est un copié-collé remanié mais bien fait du site suivant et d'autres. L'anglais commercial plein d’allant est authentique, pas scolaire .
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votre texte :
Grass flip flops are a new invention ; they are made using rich synthetic grass bonded to a pair of classic flip flops. It's also important to know that grass flip flops are made from quality materials and are tested for durability.
Also, they are (il y a , c'est there are) several colors for the grass like red,green, blue or pink ; you have a large choice !
What's more, today, they are the highest quality synthetic grass sandals on the market.
So, If you would like to experience the benefits of walking on grass whenever you leave your house, you should invest in our flip flops. ( Grass flip flops were designed to give you the feeling of walking on freshly mowed grass all the time.)
Moreover, these smartly crafted flip flops aren't just fake grass sandals. Indeed, our synthetic grass flip flops don't just look like amazing green grass, they conform to the wearer's foot to create a natural slice of paradise.
Besides, with grass flip flops, you can express your creativity and unique style. Great for everyday wear or for what you would like (an eye-catching adornment at the beach this summer),
Grass flip flops also make a fun, special and great gift idea for everyone : men, women, and children (young and old, of course).
About the price, it's unbelievably cheap : only 10 dollars. Don't miss this golden opportunity !
So, place your first order today. You won't regret it !
extraits du site:
Our synthetic grass flip flops don't just look like amazing green grass, they conform to the wearer's foot to create a natural, plush slice of paradise.
Express your creativity and unique style with GFF. Great for everyday wear or for an eye-catching adornment at the beach this summer, Grass Flip Flops also make a great gift idea for men, women and kids.
